Hi shubs..
First of all thanks for the PM..had to catch up on 2 parts..
Part 5
so Milind almost confronted Prachi if she loves him or not..but just at the right time she had to get the phone call...With this part i was pretty sure that prachi was not in love with neev...dont ask me how was i so sure..b'coz even i dont know...I was thinking hard for some time thinking off what could all those conversations that Prachi had with neev imply..but then i gave up..knowing that you definitely would have a good explanation for it...
Part 6..
It was funny..especially the line ". Seeing Ayesha, who was dressed in a beautiful gown, he remembered toothpaste"..for a sec i thought he was thinking tht may b b'coz she was dressed in white gown..dont ask me how i came up with such thoughts..that was the first thing tht came to my mind when i read it..
Wow i never thought that the conversation b/w Neev and Prachi on the wedding day and then on the phone were 2 completely different topics...i really liked it..As i said earlier i knew you would come up with better explanation than me thinking hard what it could be...
And finally all the misunderstandings were cleared and they immediately got on to their task which was already delayed by more than a week...
On the whole it was a great FF...It was a pleasure to read...
Hope you would write an epilogue ...