Short FF: Heart to heart- All parts- page 38 - Page 27

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: aritha

finished already????
Yep finished with KYM.😊

lol tooth paste...yup ayesha has beautiful white teeth and cure smile
Yep, Ayesha is bright and beautiful.. will make a good model.
and sita of our times haha....true i guess
hahaaa.. I don't know how that title for the drama came to my mind.
but ayesha acting like sita...haha that wud be interesting.
this is modern Sita. So Ayesha will do a good job.
thanks for a feel good FF. enjoyed reading
thanks Aritha. I am glad you enjoyed it.

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: AKANargis

So I was partly right Shubs...😆 yes you were. Prachi was helping Neev get setup with another
girl...eventually.
Well, Neev himself found a heroine for his play... Prachi was helping them to marry in real life.😆
Loved how you unraveled the mystery....Loved the promises they made to always talk to each other....and the Romantic scene wsa really well written!!! Loved it. Thanks. Will there be an epilouge?
Don't know about the epilogue.. will think a bout it. But I am happy you loved it.😃

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: may268

I loved it Shubs😳

Michi all the way😳


thank you May.😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Insomniac

Shubs there was no way that I could have guessed this scenario regarding Neev and Prachi.
Makes me feel happy that I could keep the suspense. Hope it wasn't out of the world.
I was right that she didn't love him so I'm happy about that.
Yep, she didn't love Neev at all. She had feelings for Milind.. I hope that was a bit evident with the way she behaved with Milind through out the story.

I loved this update - very simple and so adorable. Loved how Milind said that he at least got the answer to one question - toothpaste and Ayesha😆😆😆 - He is so sweet.
Poor guy he was. So miserable with his doubts and questions. He is the sweetest.😳
The love making was 😍
thanks.😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
Never Ever expected this twist i think u have to don the hat of a creative.
i was confused reading prachi behaviour the way she was at ease with Milind .
nice FF shuba...i was fraking out that Milind will go and broow his dream sofa bed from Opti Milind which he bought from ur first FF milind.
thank god....he took whole bed and MICHI dint waste a singel mintue ....
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hi shubs..
First of all thanks for the PM..had to catch up on 2 parts..

Part 5
so Milind almost confronted Prachi if she loves him or not..but just at the right time she had to get the phone call...With this part i was pretty sure that prachi was not in love with neev...dont ask me how was i so sure..b'coz even i dont know...I was thinking hard for some time thinking off what could all those conversations that Prachi had with neev imply..but then i gave up..knowing that you definitely would have a good explanation for it...

Part 6..
It was funny..especially the line ". Seeing Ayesha, who was dressed in a beautiful gown, he remembered toothpaste"..for a sec i thought he was thinking tht may b b'coz she was dressed in white gown..dont ask me how i came up with such thoughts..that was the first thing tht came to my mind when i read it..


Wow i never thought that the conversation b/w Neev and Prachi on the wedding day and then on the phone were 2 completely different topics...i really liked it..As i said earlier i knew you would come up with better explanation than me thinking hard what it could be...
And finally all the misunderstandings were cleared and they immediately got on to their task which was already delayed by more than a week...

On the whole it was a great FF...It was a pleasure to read...

Hope you would write an epilogue ...
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Posted: 16 years ago

thank you. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: MichiDespo

Never Ever expected this twist i think u have to don the hat of a creative.
Are you praising me or ridiculing me?😆

i was confused reading prachi behaviour the way she was at ease with Milind .
That was intentional. I wanted to confuse my readers just like I did with Milind.
nice FF shuba...i was fraking out that Milind will go and broow his dream sofa bed from Opti Milind which he bought from ur first FF milind.
you still remember the dream sofa? Opti's Milind never sold it. Heard he sleeps on it when he fights with Prachi.😆
thank god....he took whole bed and MICHI dint waste a singel mintue ....
the thing was I wanted to end the FF today itself.. rather than writing another situation for it, I thought let me fit in right after the confrontation
thank you Sumu.. how are you doing now BTW?

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Posted: 16 years ago
aww that was such a sweet ending...glad to see them have the heart to heart!
cant wait for the epi...
loved the story...
so she wasnt in love with neev...but mili since when she was small! hai...soi cute!!!!!!!!!!!!
love it shubs di!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Beatiful end. Loved it very much.Thanks for the lovely FF.

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