Short FF: Heart to heart- All parts- page 38 - Page 28

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Posted: 16 years ago

must admit was upset to read it as the last part..a short FF and so it will be.😭..anyway let me comment...

so now that its revealed prachi's behaviour was not odd at all...just loved how you have brout out neeve's side of the story....

ayesha and ''close up'' toothpaste. 😆not bad.. after all shes got nice teeth so y not eh...😆..that was funny..
so prachi's the shy girl wen it came to talk about love...aww cutie pie..
milind almost dragging her for the talk ..he couldnt wait a sec after reaching home...that was cute..
and the dialogue between them..wow..mindblowing yaar..that was well expressed...and in the end it all lead to.... .☺️.😍😆..so sweeeeet.
and cute daadi in the end all alive..atleast till the end..thanx.
shubs that was really interesting..and thats gonna be all..😭
hmm am gonna miss ur FFs now..😭..well thanx for all the work youve put to entertain us all..really cannot express how much i appreciate all this..thank you thank you thank you for everything....
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Posted: 16 years ago
Poor Milsi ..........all becoz of a misunderstanding.................But BEAUTIFUL ENDING.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Isa_de

Poor Milsi ..........all becoz of a misunderstanding.................But BEAUTIFUL ENDING.


Yep, all the problem was in his head!! Isn't it? But good that he talked it out as soon as he could. 😆
thanks.
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Posted: 16 years ago
awww....that was such a cute heart-to heart comfrontation...loved it to the core...thanks shubs for this lovely fic...🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow shubs awesome part loved it
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: siya..

awww....that was such a cute heart-to heart comfrontation...loved it to the core...thanks shubs for this lovely fic...🤗


thanks Sia. 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Mi*chi*

Beatiful end. Loved it very much.Thanks for the lovely FF.


thank you Michi,
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ..kashish..

aww that was such a sweet ending...glad to see them have the heart to heart!

cant wait for the epi...
loved the story...
so she wasnt in love with neev...but mili since when she was small! hai...soi cute!!!!!!!!!!!!
love it shubs di!



Thanks Kashish. NOw I am not sure if I will write an epilogue or not. This was probably a too short a story to have an epilogue. hmm?
She just wasn't in love with Neev. And yes, had feelings for Milind..😊
I am glad you loved it.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: layla44

must admit was upset to read it as the last part..a short FF and so it will be.😭..anyway let me comment...

Sorry to have finished it. I thought I should finish it along with KYM.

so now that its revealed prachi's behaviour was not odd at all...just loved how you have brout out neeve's side of the story....

I am so happy now Prachi doesn't look odd. I had put the poor girl under dark light while I wrote the story reflecting Milind's emotions.

ayesha and ''close up'' toothpaste. 😆not bad.. after all shes got nice teeth so y not eh...😆..that was funny..
I don't know how I came up with. I am happy it was funny.
so prachi's the shy girl wen it came to talk about love...aww cutie pie..
Yes she was shy..though she knew Milind.

milind almost dragging her for the talk ..he couldnt wait a sec after reaching home...that was cute..
You can't expect him to stay "chup" after what he went through... and also that after meeting Neev, he had to know the truth.

and the dialogue between them..wow..mindblowing yaar..that was well expressed...and in the end it all lead to.... .☺️.😍😆..so sweeeeet.
thanks Layla.

and cute daadi in the end all alive..atleast till the end..thanx.
I told you I won't kill her. Since my FF only spanned a week or so, didn't need to kill her though she was ill.

shubs that was really interesting..and thats gonna be all..😭
thanks and sorry..
hmm am gonna miss ur FFs now..😭..well thanx for all the work youve put to entertain us all..really cannot express how much i appreciate all this..thank you thank you thank you for everything....

Thank you so much Layla specially for observing little things and leaving comments. When I have readers like you it feels worth the effort. Lots of love....

It was great interacting with you hun.

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: dangerrose

plz write epilogue...

nice ff


thanks.
Are you a new reader? Hadn't planned an epilogue for it. Will see.

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