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NosVemos

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Posted: 16 years ago

#91

I am writing now Nargis. Will post in a couple of hrs.

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Shabz.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#92

lovely part shubs, im glad the wedding went by without a glitch. michi had their first moment lol, the hand holding was very cute :D im a bit worried by the end, is prachi in love with neev or is he just a friend in need?

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NosVemos

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Posted: 16 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: Shabz.
lovely part shubs, im glad the wedding went by without a glitch. michi had their first moment lol, the hand holding was very cute :D im a bit worried by the end, is prachi in love with neev or is he just a friend in need?

thanks Shabz. Hope I don't make you worry more in the next update. I am happy you liked the Michi moment. 😛

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NosVemos

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Posted: 16 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: janu_2006
hey shubs
gr8 part..

cont.sooon

thanks Janu.😊

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NosVemos

@NosVemos

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Posted: 16 years ago

#95

Part 3

"Is this really what you wanted Prachi?" Neev looked away in distress.

"Yes. What matters to me the most is my Daadi's wish. Daadi loved my father like her own son. She has loved me more than my parents. She never asked for anything from anyone but has been everyone's strength. My mother told me that Daadi had dreamt of having Milind and me married ever since we were little children. I couldn't deny or delay her of her only dream, at a time when her health is deteriorating every day with cancer" Prachi had hiccupped.

"I understand that Prachi. But, have you thought about me? What will I do without you?" Neev had questioned Prachi straight.

"Please don't make it difficult for me Neev. I am sure you will find someone else, someone better than me. I wish you all the best....I need to go now. They might be looking for me. We are leaving to Mumbai in a while. Daadi has a blood transfusion appointment tomorrow... Take care Neev. Good bye" Prachi had turned back. Wiping her tears, she ran into the house from the backdoor. Hearing the conversation between Prachi and Neev, Milind had stood shocked and heartbroken.

Neev had lit a cigarette and walked out towards the gate passing the garden. As he opened the gate to go out, he threw the cigarette on the floor and crushed it with his foot. Kicking the gate shut behind him, he had got into his Benz that was parked right outside the house. Milind kept watching Neev, until he drove out of his sight.

Mishraji had come looking for Milind as the women had prepared for Prachi's bidaai. Prachi seemed numb as she threw the grains of popped rice behind her. Milind had sat in the car already by then. As Mishraji opened the car's door for his daughter in law, Prachi had suddenly looked back and ran into her mother's arms where she broke down into tears all of a sudden. Premlatha too couldn't hide her tears as much as she tried. Inder had hugged his wife and daughter in his large arms and the sight had made everyone's heart cry.

Milind had watched the emotional moment through the opened door of his car. He was going through an equal perhaps greater agony in his heart. Daadi had consoled Prachi saying she was not going anywhere else but to her other house in Mumbai. Mishraji had hugged Inder and asked him to move to Mumbai too so that they all could live together. Inder hadn't said anything in reply since emotions were still running high in his heart.

Daadi and Sukruti then had walked Prachi to the car again. Prachi sat in the car still hiccupping overwhelmed with emotions. Milind though wanted to react wasn't able to say anything. Mishraji had sat in the front passenger seat while Sukruti and Daadi travelled in another car. As the driver started the car, Prachi had slid the window down and had cried "Maa" waving at her parents. Premlatha was about to run to her daughter while Inder had stopped her holding her hand. As the mother of the bride sobbed in her husband's arms the cars had left for Mumbai one by one.

Milind had bent over Prachi and closed the window on her side as the cold wind of the night chilled them. Prachi had hid her face in her palms still not able to stop her tears. Mishraji had tried to console Prachi and also made signs to Milind asking him to console her. Milind took her name once and then two more times. When she didn't respond, he forcefully removed her hands off of her face.

"Milind" Prachi had said lifting her head with and the next moment her head had reached Milind's shoulder where it rested. Milind's left hand had involuntarily surrounded Prachi's body while with the other hand he had wiped the tears off of her eyes that flowed nonstop. He just couldn't see Prachi crying, as he felt pricked in his heart with her tears.

"Madam, don't worry. You will not find the depth of love you can find in the Mishra house, anywhere else. With a Goddess like Daadi, generous Mishraji and his two loving children, you are truly blessed to be married to this house" the driver had commented as Prachi's sobs echoed in the car.

The driver's words did have an effect on Prachi and slowly her emotions had calmed down. As the car speeded in the highway, Prachi had adjusted herself in Milind's arms slowly and his warmth was lulling her into sleep. Milind too didn't want to let her go off of his arms but his head was boiling with exploding emotions.

'Did Prachi sacrifice her love and marry him?' thought Milind. 'Though he had asked her on a couple of occasions if she was happy marrying him, she hadn't said anything otherwise. From what he heard from Prachi's mouth when she was talking to a man called Neev, it was obvious that she was indebted to Daadi with gratitude and love. He couldn't remember seeing Neev in the wedding nor he was a part of Prachi's group of friends with whom he had chatted. Was that a heartbroken lover he saw in Neev? But why did Prachi do this to him? If she had told him once that she didn't want to marry him but someone else, he would have convinced Daadi and everyone else to respect her wishes. Why did Prachi not tell him the truth when he had opened his heart? Had she read his email at all where he almost said he loved her? If not love and marriage, Prachi should have respected their childhood friendship. How could she do this to him?' Milind had thought repeatedly about the latest turnout of events.

Milind's eyes had taken a sight of the woman blissfully sleeping in his arms. Seeing her that way, he couldn't stop to wonder how she could sleep like an innocent baby when his heart was going through a tsunami of emotions. Milind decided to talk to Prachi the next day and clear the matter with her, as he saw no point in a marriage that didn't mean the same to both of them. But on the other hand, the consequences that might follow if this marriage broke, worried him. 'How will Daadi be able to take this shock? What would happen to his father and her parents who got them married with all their blessings?' Milind also couldn't comprehend what Prachi wanted out of this marriage and also why she had played with her own life and even his.

Milind's head throbbed with his brain riding a roller coaster of thoughts. He had wished if he hadn't heard Prachi talking to Neev and Prachi was as happy as him with this wedding. But he just couldn't get the flow of thoughts out of his head. A few hours later, his tired brain and body gave into sleep and he had unconsciously rested his head on Prachi's as the driver drove into the outskirts of Mumbai.

Edited by ShubS - 16 years ago

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Shabz.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#96

aww, poor milsi..the thought of prachi sacrificing her love for this marriage hasnt gone down too well with milsi,his heart is full of mixed emotions. hope he talks to prachi soon and they make a go of this marriage. the whole bidai part was well written, really felt bad for pl, inder and prachi.

shubs, as much as i tried, i just couldnt picture neev smoking.

lovely written part :D

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NosVemos

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Posted: 16 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: Shabz.
me first yay!!!

Congrats!! 😆

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soul76

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Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

#98

Hmm I guess Milind is right to think of such scenarios he afterall needs to know the truth. A compromising marriage is useless in my opinion Prachi should have confided in him. I'm thinking she never read the mail he sent her....

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kaswetta

@kaswetta

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#99

Nice update. Milind's driver did a good job.thanks shubs.

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divvya

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Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#100

Just read the last two parts. The last one was very emotional. Prachi should have confided in him atleast when he asked her consent. No wonder Milind is heartbroken, the marriage is just a compromise for Prachi. Poor milsi.

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