Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi - Pa4 Pg 4 - 12-13-08

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Tia Verma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: rosie111
thanku its lovely

Thanks a million

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Tia Verma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: may268
Part 1 and 2 ere really good
awesome parts

Thaank you

"Why are you thanking me?" But your welcome! 😉

Anyways Thank you 😊

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Tia Verma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

Huge around of applause for Proteek who spoke Prachi's feeling for her husband Milind when she should have stand up for herself instead of Proteek doing her job. Anyways I'm happy to see Mishra parivaar and Shah parivaar after along time. 👏

Part Three

Recap - Prachi stands up for herself this time instead of going along with destiny. Sumonto wants to look for his God Uncle - meaning Papa. 😛

Prachi looks at her son than at Proteek

Even he looked at Prachi but he couldn't face her eyes filled with anger because he called her son's blood bad because it belongs to Milind.

Prachi wanted to slap Proteek across his face but held back her anger....

She walks up to Summoto,

takes his hand in her hand and before she leaves Dasgupta's place she told Proteek "one day god himself will prove who's blood is bad"

Surpreet looks at his mother leaving him alone with his brother Sumonto... ... ...

He stares at his father than walks into his room with anger towards everyone... .... ....

Milind gets himself a ticket to Panchmeswar (sorry guys I don't know where Dasgutpa Parivaar lives so I picked a location) tonight.

He boards the train with Prachi's picture in his hand because his life is in Prachi.

"Sorry Ma'am, we don't have any train going to Mumbai right now until tomorrow morning." person said who sales tickets at the station.

Without arguing she bought two tickets for tomorrow morning because Milind told her that he will be returning back to Mumbai but not at Shah and Mishra Mansion instead his chawal because that place doesn't feel like home without her.

"Mamma, mamma, mamma" Sumonto pulls on Prachi's sari and says "where are we going to stay?"

Prachi bends down and hugs her son,

also tells him "beta, I used all the money up to buy the tickets but we can stay at that mandir across the station if its alright with you"

Sumonto nods his head

Prachi takes her bag and Sumonto's hand,

And they walk toward the mandir in the rain.

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Proteek sat in his room and looked at Panchi's photo along with Prachi's photo. And stares at them! After awhile he breaks down and says "Prachi I gave you many chance to speak up when we were friends, but you never said anything until I picked up this root by forcing you to marry me. I know I loss your friendship but I always wanted to see you happy and don't worry about my family's anger because I told Mom everything last night. But I made her promise that she won't tell you anything because I want you to hate us so your future is safe with Milind. And you won't remember us!"

Proteek's mother watched her son cry than leaves his room

Sumonto tries to sleep on Prachi's lap while she pats his forehead, Milind also thinks about all the good times he had with Prachi and his son Sumonto. For some reason he is missing them badly. He just wants to see them in front of his eyes.

Milind gets out of the train, but because of the rain storm he also goes into the same mandir where Prachi is... .... ...with his son Sumonto.

Prachi starts to feel bechain because she thinks Milind is around her, Prachi closed her eyes and starts praying to god. When Prachi opens her eyes Milind is standing in front of her.

Background Music: --FEMALE--
Kitni bechain hoke tumse mili - 2
Tumko kya thi khabar thi main kitni akeli
Aaah haa, haa haa, haa haa, aah aah aah haa haa - 2

--MALE--
Kitna bechain hoke tumse mila - 2
Tumko kya thi khabar tha main kitna akela
Aaah haa, haa haa, haa haa, aah aah aah haa haa - 2

--FEMALE--
Ke kitni mohabbat hai tumse
Zara paas aake to dekho

--MALE--
Kya aag hai dhadkanon mein
Gale se lagaake to dekhko

They both look into each other eyes for awhile than Milind spreads open his arms both Prachi
and Sumonto goes running into his arms.

Afterwards he wraps his jacket around Sumonto meanwhile Premlata feels like after tonight's storm
everything will be fine.

She gets out of her bed and prays to god for Milind and Prachi's safety

***

Tia

Edited by Shagun-Ki-Raat - 16 years ago

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Deepika Yalamanchili

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

hey nice story line.just loved part 1 and 2.please continue.

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--Nargis--

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+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#15

Part 3 was a lovely update...MICHI reunion. Nice....please continue.

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JnJ....resh

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Nice part plz do continue soon

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Deepika Yalamanchili

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

lovely update dear. liked the 3rd part.esp the background song😃pleaseee continue.

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Tia Verma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: indiangirl23
hey nice story line.just loved part 1 and 2.please continue.

Thank you 😛

Tia

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Tia Verma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: AKANargis
Part 3 was a lovely update...MICHI reunion. Nice....please continue.

Yep! Michi indeed to reunite asp and now the fun begins with a sight misunderstanding 😳 between someone and few new entries related to both side.

Tia