Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi - Pa4 Pg 4 - 12-13-08

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Storyline - is same from today's episode where Proteek stops Prachi from committing suicide and plus where he takes Prachi down for their marriage.

Part One

Pandit asked for the second couple who are getting married.

Proteek shouts from behind "we are here" Panchi appears from behind with tears rolling down her face.

Proteek holds Panchi's hand and takes her toward the mandup where Pandit waits.

Panchi tries to free her hand out of Proteek grip, but fails

Milind returns back to his chawl after loosing everything he owned before Prachi left him. After five years he found his Prachi alive but not known as his Prachi or his wife. But known as Panchi Dasgupta - wife of Proteek Dasgupta.

He looked at Prachi's picture hanging on the wall with tears rolling down his face and remembers how he heard Proteek's mother talking in the hospital with someone about getting all three of her sons married again with their wives. That's why he left from Proteek's house and plus he couldn't watch his wife get married to someone else when she loves him not the other person, but can't leave him because of her promise to the real Panchi.

Milind comes out of his thoughts and touches Prachi's photo saying "I'm happy for you long as your happy with Proteek". And a tear drops from his face and lands on Prachi's forehead.

Prachi opens her eyes and touches her forehead afterwards images Milind sitting in front of her.

~ Emotional Convo between Prachi and Milind's soul ~

"What's wrong, Prachi? Your the one who wanted to help Panchi's family by staying here, but now why are you crying? Because your heart knows that I live in it not Proteek. When I asked you to return with me you kept on saying about your promise to Panchi than why are you crying" Milind said

"Because I love you Milind Mishra... I can't live without you and you will always be my husband no matter what happens because Rab Ne Bana Hai Humara Rishta" Prachi burst out her feelings in front of everyone out aloud

Proteek gets up and looks at Prachi who had tears rolling down her face

Even his entire family looked at Panchi who burst out whatever was inside her heart.

Proteek's mother comes up there and slaps Panchi on her face hard.

Summoto comes running and hugs her mother saying "is God Uncle my father because I found this video clip in my movie camera where God Uncle says that he is my father. Mamma, is that truth what God Uncle said?"

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I know this part is kind of short and if you guys like it than I'll continue tomorrow with long part than today. Please tell me what you think about my fan-fic based on Michi.

Tia





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Posted: 17 years ago
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Had tears in my eyes😭 this is soo beautiful... pls update it with more parts.. i want to now what happens next
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Originally posted by: bones88

Had tears in my eyes😭 this is soo beautiful... pls update it with more parts.. i want to now what happens next



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Tia
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Part Two

Recap: Proteek takes Prachi down for their marriage rituals, Milind's haunts Prachi and see burst out her feelings in front of everyone who considers her as Proteek's wife.

Summoto comes running and hugs her mother saying "is God Uncle my father because I found this video clip in my movie camera where God Uncle says that he is my father. Mamma, is that truth what God Uncle said?"

Prachi looks into her son's eyes and nods her head...

Summoto stares into his mother's eyes for explanations - in why she kept the truth hidden from him.

Prachi bends down...

Touches Summoto's face and says "Summoto, I know that you have many questions why I hide the truth from you, but today I am going to tell you everything. After wards you decide who was right me or your God Uncle"

Prachi begins her story... My name is Prachi Inder Shah and this is my life story started from someone's lover to the journey of somebody's wife, who became my life... meaning your God Uncle, Beta (looking at Summoto).

I never had big dreams or huge hope from life because I had my childhood love Neev Shergil with me. I was incomplete without Neev and Neev was incomplete without me, but after my father's death everything changed for us.

After couple of months Neev got married to my step sister Ayesha, who always wanted to take revenge from me and my family. During this hate and love relationship me, Neev and Ayesha went to Turkey for your own reasons. I went there to find my father's killer but Neev and Ayesha went there for their honeymoon,

Sometimes I would curse myself for letting Neev get married to Ayesha but god had something else planned for me when I met Milind again, but this time in Turkey as a rich man not the poor Milind.

I thought now I would find my father's killer, but I never knew that destiny would put me in a place where I had to marry Milind in order to save my family business from manger loss.

I never blamed destiny but accepted with a challenge in my life. Within time me and Milind came that close that we couldn't live without each other after many misunderstanding we have gone through together or without each other.

Many months passed and our relationship got stronger, but in the lost of my step sister's death. Within those time me and Ayesha came so close that after her death I was shattered even Milind because Ayesha was his first love and his childhood friend.

We both never knew that Malika was playing with our emotions to separate us from each other and one day she succeed in her plans by separating me from Milind and my family in order to save Milind from going to jail.

In this journey I found out that I was pregnant, I wanted to tell Milind tell good news but destiny again had plans and I left Milind for good after I saw him with Malika in a room together.

Afterwards, I met Proteek and his wife Panchi with their new born son but I never knew that one moment would change many lives. Panchi died in the bomb blast leaving behind her promise. After five years Milind finds me alive but not in the condition I wanted him to be in...

Many times he told me - lets go from here before life gets complicated that none of us can live, but I never listened to him because of my promise to Panchi. But my heart will always cry for Milind no matter what happens in life because I can not live without him or his love symbol Summoto.

By the time Prachi finished her story - she had tears running down her face. Even Summoto was crying after he heard his mother's story and hugs her. Afterwards, he tells her "Mamma, can we go and find God Uncle - I mean Papa"

Prachi hugged Summoto

Entire Dasgupta family are shock even Proteek because Prachi broke her promise by opening her mouth and destroyed everything he owned.

Prachi asked forgiveness from Proteek's family by folding her hand together but they all leave from there with hatred look on their face.

***

Later that evening Prachi went into Proteek's mother's room to explain herself much better but she closed the door on her face saying "I can never forgive you for playing with our emotions"

Prachi: Mummyji,

She opens the door and says "You don't have any right to call me Mummyji and you may leave this house with your son Summoto before tomorrow morning or else you will see my dead face."

She closed the door again on her face

Prachi leaves from there with tears running down her face and runs into Summoto's room.

Milind sat in his room and Prachi's picture fall down by the wind -

Milind wakes up -

Walks toward the picture and picks it up! And mumbles something in his mind - why do I feel like Prachi is calling me for help?

"Mamma, we aren't going to stay here anymore because nobody loves us anymore after knowing the truth. Can we go by Papa because he's the only one who loves us?" Summoto told his mother while he wiped her tears.

Prachi hugged her son than tells him to pack his bag because they are leaving right now without letting anyone know. Summoto nods his head and starts packing his things.

Prachi returns into her room and starts taking out her things while Proteek tried to ask her where she is going, but she won't say a word because he broke his part of the deal by never forcing her into doing anything she liked.

"Prachi, listen to me" Proteek began to say but Prachi cuts him off by saying "You are not my husband so why should I listen to you. And please don't try to stop me or else I will loose the respect I have for you still"

Proteek watched her pack her things and leave with Milind's picture in her hand. Summoto comes running into the room saying "Mamma, lets go to Papa and Proteek Papa thank you for taking care of me in my father's absent. And once we reach to Papa he will pay you back for whatever you have done for me and Mamma"

Summoto holds Prachi's hand and they start walking down the stairs when Surpreet (sorry I don't know Panchi and Proteek's son's name so correct me if you know his real name in the show) comes running down the stairs saying "Mummy, where are you guys going?" Surpreet runs to his father and says "Papa stop Mummy from leaving"

Summoto free his hand from his mother's grip and runs toward Surpreet saying "Don't you dare call my mother your mother because we don't have any relationship with you guys and plus my blood belongs to a bad man right Proteek Papa?"

***

Prachi looks at her son than at Proteek

Even he looked at Prachi but he couldn't face her eyes filled with anger because he called her son's blood bad because it belongs to Milind.

Prachi wanted to slap Proteek across his face but held back her anger....

She walks up to Summoto,

takes his hand in her hand and before she leaves Dasgupta's place she told Proteek "one day god himself will prove who's blood is bad"

***
Tia
Edited by Shagun-Ki-Raat - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh...brilliant start..i luv it...continue soon🤗

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part 2
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wow!!! i really like the storyline😃...prachi opened her mouth...and sumonto is just too cute...continue soon🤗
Edited by (**sia**) - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg.....awsome yaar......loved it....plz plz plz pretty plz continue soon......

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Originally posted by: (**sia**)

oh...brilliant start..i luv it...continue soon🤗

**edited**

part 2
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wow!!! i really like the storyline😃...prachi opened her mouth...and sumonto is just too cute...continue soon🤗



Thank you so much!

And plus I wanted Prachi to stand up for herself and confess her true love for Milind. Also I wanted to show Sumonto not as a spoiled brat who is full of naughtiness but also understand his mother's pain.

Tia
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow the secound part is awsome......and thx for thr pm yaar.....

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Originally posted by: unnati72003

wow the secound part is awsome......and thx for thr pm yaar.....



Your welcome

Tia
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 1 and 2 ere really good
awesome parts
Thaank you

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