Kaisey Kahun Chp 1 - 22 - Page 20

Originally posted by: bidnai

😡thier is gona be a next time..........we will c😆
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let's see😉😆😆

Originally posted by: bidnai

Mune excellent so this means Inder does hab a soft corner for his daughter but cant express it but really feel sad for prachi she simply doesnt deserve this..........poor milsi feel real bad for him..........so me guessin Ali hinting him to marry.........Inder askin her to marry varun and he lookin up all indicates one thing soon the taxi driver is going to meet assam se ayegi larki in the airport hehehe so chweet..........gr8 job dea.......continue soon

I guess the part for Prachi flying to India was quite evident wasn't it.... 😊 Yes Inder loves her too just doesn't want to accept else he'd never have got her the best of everything in life. I'm glad you liked it.😊

Sorry, missed out on the important part of the fanfic.. Inder.. i like his character, very complex!😊😊😊 (p.s not as a father, just as a character)

Originally posted by: shivgauri

Sorry, missed out on the important part of the fanfic.. Inder.. i like his character, very complex!😊😊😊 (p.s not as a father, just as a character)

That's what I wanted to portray his part of the story, why he's become what he is. Sometimes ppl close themselves to grief accusing others to be responsible for it when that is not the case.😊

nice part...will michi b mtn soon??? i stil do not lke inder

I am a bit incoherent...so i'll go with rambling this time.

My FAAAAAAAAAAAAVORITE part:

wiping away stray tears that had flowed from his eyes in happiness or sorrow was yet to be determined by Ali. "Haan aasman sey aayegi na terey liye larki" Ali had fumed "Koi pasand hii nahin aati tereyko to." "Shayad aasmaan sey hii aayegi" Milind had smiled watching an Emirates airliner zoom in the skies high above them sailing over the seas heading to London.


WOW>..Munee...just WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Nothing else. When i started reading that last part where Ali was telling him a solution...and then he said Shadi kar le...i knew this was just whats comming. But reading it just brought tears in my eyes. Donno why. The fact that Milidn has tears in his eyes not determined if its from laughter of from the weight he is been carrying around... and that then as if its meant to be......She's definitely boarding that flight isn't she. Prachi is either running away....hopefully with a little support from her sister....or she is coming to India as Varun's guest...whatever...But she's coming...yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeey. Michi will meet.😍

Tho i understand your attempt at making Inder human not a body without a soul...I still hate him. 🤢 He is too self absorbed.

And one more thing...what you wrote about Baba's silence and Milind's reaction to it...very real. Sad...but i am so happy you tapped into that. Even while doing whats expected of you most dutifully Milind is still human and he feels that irk when Baba can't respond to him...the mundane nature of his life is starting to get to him little by little but he'll never complain will he.

Munee,

so milind is going to meet his girl very soon! i dnt like inder, wats da point of keeping luv in ur heart when all he gives her i s cold indifference in real life?

Prachi's despair is too much to take!! well, atleast she is spared from calling the brute 'father'!! soo sad really!! and, Mr Mishra--there is nothing wrong with your thhobra.....u look mighty fine!!☺️☺️☺️