Originally posted by: milindkidewani
Opti....Just finished reading all the parts in one go...👏👏 Awesome job hun....
Thanks Goldy.
I love the way u r moving the story....its not too fast nor too slow...gives just the right amount of importance to all the events.
I am happy that you approve of the pace. It may slow down a bit after some time. Hope it wont be boring then because I would like to devote more time to Michi relationship.
The relationship between Milind n his baba is just like on the show...the way baba did a click of the tongue when Milind dressed up in faded jeans with a hankerchief around his neck....it was fab!!! I can so imagine the whole scene...😳
Yes, my characters will be as close to the show as possible except in certain cases but as you would have seen by now there is going to be a departure from the show story line pretty soon.
Aww Milsi was mesmerised by Prachi's beauty n she took him for a plumber....😆😆😆 wonder what meeting is he taking abt that happened 15 yrs back...😕
This iwill be told as part of recollection later.
Ok are Alaap n sukritu together??? coz u just wrote a line on it but i feel there is soemthing going on.....
Yes, remember I said the story will follow the show to some extent? Well, this is also one of them.
Neev...oh Neev....he got married...I kinda had a hunch ...but I thought he would be engaged but u went ahead n got him married....chalo uska to patta saaf.... 😆😆 now I wonder what u have planned for Ayesha.😳
You'll see. It wont be straight forward.
I feel bad for Prachi n PL... Inder is no more....but I wonder why they all took such a big decision without even talking to Neev.
There is a reason why Neev was in the dark which will come out soon.
I m glad atleast Inder asked Prachi. Can't wait to read what happens next. Milsi declared himslef son-in-law to sign the papers....dimaag bahut chalta hai iska...😉😳
Milsi was desperate to save Inder. At that moment nothing else mattered. He did not realise the implication or the significance.
Sorry my thoughts r all over the place n not in any specific order...I m still reeling from reading the whole thing... I simply love ur FF...a great story n very entertaining....😳😳
Thank you. Was not too sure how it will be received.
Will wait for u to update the next part...😊