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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: optimist

They had not even met each other till now. So how can they fall for each other in two days which is when the wedding was scheduled to take place?

no Opti,I was thinking an engagement today for NP and after geting to know each other very will then they start tallkin about their wedding in like two three months by then NA could have falling for each other pretty well enough na?
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Posted: 16 years ago
Will look forward to your expert comments, Rima. Please remember that I am a mere novice at this. So be kind.
Edited by optimist - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: angel's life

no Opti,I was thinking an engagement today for NP and after geting to know each other very will then they start tallkin about their wedding in like two three months by then NA could have falling for each other pretty well enough na?

I had already mentioned that the wedding was in two days. Inder wanted to hold the marriage as soon as possible since he wanted to pass on the reins of his company to Neev.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: optimist

I had already mentioned that the wedding was in two days. Inder wanted to hold the marriage as soon as possible since he wanted to pass on the reins of his company to Neev.

u did?oh sorry can't remember or it could that I'm losing it.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Angel I mentioned it in the second line of Part II(1). Anyway, when you are reading so many fics, it possible to forget or get mixed up.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: optimist

Angel I mentioned it in the second line of Part II(1). Anyway, when you are reading so many fics, it possible to forget or get mixed up.

lolzzzzzzz......I how did u know I'm reading too many FF?and I'm trying really had to stop but the fact that there's no new KYM is not helping at all,reading FF is the only thing keeping me going and reason why I'm not missing KYM for the past three weeks now.....me going back to read that line again thanks.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Opti....Just finished reading all the parts in one go...👏👏 Awesome job hun....
I love the way u r moving the story....its not too fast nor too slow...gives just the right amount of importance to all the events.
The relationship between Milind n his baba is just like on the show...the way baba did a click of the tongue when Milind dressed up in faded jeans with a hankerchief around his neck....it was fab!!! I can so imagine the whole scene...😳
Aww Milsi was mesmerised by Prachi's beauty n she took him for a plumber....😆😆😆 wonder what meeting is he taking abt that happened 15 yrs back...😕
Ok are Alaap n sukritu together??? coz u just wrote a line on it but i feel there is soemthing going on.....
Neev...oh Neev....he got married...I kinda had a hunch ...but I thought he would be engaged but u went ahead n got him married....chalo uska to patta saaf.... 😆😆 now I wonder what u have planned for Ayesha.😳
I feel bad for Prachi n PL... Inder is no more....but I wonder why they all took such a big decision without even talking to Neev. I m glad atleast Inder asked Prachi. Can't wait to read what happens next. Milsi declared himslef son-in-law to sign the papers....dimaag bahut chalta hai iska...😉😳
Sorry my thoughts r all over the place n not in any specific order...I m still reeling from reading the whole thing... I simply love ur FF...a great story n very entertaining....😳😳
Will wait for u to update the next part...😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: milindkidewani

Opti....Just finished reading all the parts in one go...👏👏 Awesome job hun....

Thanks Goldy.
I love the way u r moving the story....its not too fast nor too slow...gives just the right amount of importance to all the events.
I am happy that you approve of the pace. It may slow down a bit after some time. Hope it wont be boring then because I would like to devote more time to Michi relationship.
The relationship between Milind n his baba is just like on the show...the way baba did a click of the tongue when Milind dressed up in faded jeans with a hankerchief around his neck....it was fab!!! I can so imagine the whole scene...😳
Yes, my characters will be as close to the show as possible except in certain cases but as you would have seen by now there is going to be a departure from the show story line pretty soon.
Aww Milsi was mesmerised by Prachi's beauty n she took him for a plumber....😆😆😆 wonder what meeting is he taking abt that happened 15 yrs back...😕
This iwill be told as part of recollection later.
Ok are Alaap n sukritu together??? coz u just wrote a line on it but i feel there is soemthing going on.....
Yes, remember I said the story will follow the show to some extent? Well, this is also one of them.
Neev...oh Neev....he got married...I kinda had a hunch ...but I thought he would be engaged but u went ahead n got him married....chalo uska to patta saaf.... 😆😆 now I wonder what u have planned for Ayesha.😳
You'll see. It wont be straight forward.
I feel bad for Prachi n PL... Inder is no more....but I wonder why they all took such a big decision without even talking to Neev.
There is a reason why Neev was in the dark which will come out soon.
I m glad atleast Inder asked Prachi. Can't wait to read what happens next. Milsi declared himslef son-in-law to sign the papers....dimaag bahut chalta hai iska...😉😳
Milsi was desperate to save Inder. At that moment nothing else mattered. He did not realise the implication or the significance.
Sorry my thoughts r all over the place n not in any specific order...I m still reeling from reading the whole thing... I simply love ur FF...a great story n very entertaining....😳😳
Thank you. Was not too sure how it will be received.
Will wait for u to update the next part...😊

Edited by optimist - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: cbkola

very very nice dear😛😛

Thank you
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Posted: 16 years ago
Wicked twist, Opti. 😃 Why am I grinning 😕, poor Inder died. 😒 Neev really can't be blamed for the situation, if his parents didn't tell him about arranging his marriage to Prachi. I thought there would be another woman but I was expecting it to be Ayesha, not an English wife. Coming back to Ayesha, since she is not going to make a match with Neev, is she going to be a thorn in Milind & Prachi's side? Anyway, I'll let you unravel things at your own pace. This part was so good, my attention never wavered for a second. 👍🏼

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