FF:Destiny's Children Pt XIV(2)(16/12) - Page 18

Originally posted by: blackcurrant

Wicked twist, Opti. 😃 Why am I grinning 😕, poor Inder died. 😒 Neev really can't be blamed for the situation, if his parents didn't tell him about arranging his marriage to Prachi. I thought there would be another woman but I was expecting it to be Ayesha, not an English wife. Coming back to Ayesha, since she is not going to make a match with Neev, is she going to be a thorn in Milind & Prachi's side? Anyway, I'll let you unravel things at your own pace. This part was so good, my attention never wavered for a second. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: shabzc1

inder's death was unexpected, as was neevs marriage. i wonder what the family will say when they find out milsi signed the papers as inder's son in law. will this lead to a marriage of convenience between michi? this part is fab opti, cant wait for the next update.

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

Optimist, optimist, optimist😃...kinda feels weird saying your whole name..

That is why you better stick to calling me Opti.

.though it's not really your name either lol...

It is not and you are not goig to get my real name either!

I'm actually really glad I read all the parts in one go...as each part left you wanting to know more.

I really really am glad at the way you've retained authenticity of all the characters. It's almost like the show but more intelligent and that's the beauty of it. It's everything we loved about the show put more rationally.

Thank you.

I do applaud the way you've left absolutely no loose ends... I can't explain what I mean by that if you're reading this and now have a "what the hell is she talking about" expression on your face (which I suspect you do), so we may have to leave it...but just thought you should know!!😆

OK, whatever that means, it sounds like a compliment. So I am happy.

It's brisk, doesn't beat around the bush (just what I like to see), and most of all everything makes sense.

It is not intentional. I don't beat around the bush if I have nothing to say. I guess my weakness here is turning out to be my strength.

I have no questions about why things are the way they are and that I believe means, you have my dear, been successful in what you've been trying to achieve (if it was anything at all lol) although I was cursing Inder, Prachi and Pranay for not talking to Neev and especially Pranay, for assuming Neev would just accept Prachi on the day...did he not think of the possibility of his son saying no? Unless, he had a way of making Neev say yes?

We'll see why Neev was kept in the dark pretty soon.

It will be interesting to see how Milind and Prachi actually end up together...and just a question...is the first part the end of fic and it will continue all in flash back till we reach the point of Prachi being in labour again or will the story continue beyond there?

Now that is a question I wish I knew the answer to. I did warn you all that I was a disorganised person. I have started this fic with no idea of how it will end. You'll have to bear with me to see where this goes, or rather how far this will go.


Thank you Opti. and btw, You missed a full stop in the beginning!😛

Yeah, I did. I'll add that now!!!

but mostly that's me being cheeky because I cant fault it anywhere...(yet...*evil laugh* Nah, but I know I'm pretty safe with you...)

Thanks for taking the time out to read and comment on my fic. Means a lot coming from a versatile writer like you.

Originally posted by: dipsyworld

Opti, wow! Neev married a gori! 😲

Yes, he did!

Now thats called a UNIQUE twist.😛 Totally unexpected.
Milind tried his best to save Inder. I wish he had survived, Inder would have been grateful to him for rest of the life.
Though it was without a thought, its surprising that Milind signed the papers as Inder's son-in-law and not as a son......not that i mind it.😉😆

Goes to show his deep seated resentment of the rich. Wouldn't want to be related to one by blood. He'd rather consider it by marriage. Actually he may end up resenting that too. We'll never know. As I said he wasn't even aware of what he was saying.

Fab update....Thanks waiting for the next bit.😊

Originally posted by: yeh_ada_143

whoooooooooooosh..i was wondering how their engagement would be broken up, and I assumed it would be something like Neev falling in love with Ayesha..or something like that...but a gori bride, totally unexpected!..But then that leaves Ayesha as the third-wheel I hope she's positive in this fic, so far it seems she is...Poor Inder had to die :(...but it was necessary for the story, methinks :)