FF:Destiny's Children Pt XIV(2)(16/12) - Page 15

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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG!!Opti,Opti,what did u just did??u have just turn everything upside down but I bet it's for good.....ri8?
OMG woman u finally shocked me in this FF tho u already said u will just think u will do it this way(ouch)wat the hell!!good god....I am in shocked
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dear god Neev is an heartless child so so heartless how could he do that😲how could he get married without telling his won people....me too shock😲
awww poor MR.Inder Shah he had to die just like without seen his baby gal geting marry all because that stuppid Neev...............oh I'm not gonna ask u what's gonna happen next but just wait and read on to know more....
thank u so much dear it was a very sad part but then again u did an amazing job as well👏
and fantastic turn of events din't see that coming,my thoguht was that Neev and Ayesha will fall for each other befor the wedding day.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Oh thats so sad, did Inder have to die? 😒 I would have loved to see the equation between Milind and Inder. Neev's marriage is Annabelle came as a shocker. Interesting part.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
omg neevz married...n inder dies😲
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: angel's life

OMG!!Opti,Opti,what did u just did??u have just turn everything upside down but I bet it's for good.....ri8?

Everything has a purpose and a seemingly bad situation may not be that bad after all!
OMG woman u finally shocked me in this FF tho u already said u will just think u will do it this way(ouch)wat the hell!!good god....I am in shocked
😲
Well, I did warn you that there will be a twist which will take the story in another direction altogether.
dear god Neev is an heartless child so so heartless how could he do that😲how could he get married without telling his won people....me too shock😲
Well, right now he is thinking how can they arrange his wedding without his consent.
awww poor MR.Inder Shah he had to die just like without seen his baby gal geting marry all because that stuppid Neev...............oh I'm not gonna ask u what's gonna happen next but just wait and read on to know more....
thank u so much dear it was a very sad part but then again u did an amazing job as well👏
Thank you.
and fantastic turn of events din't see that coming,my thoguht was that Neev and Ayesha will fall for each other befor the wedding day.
They had not even met each other till now. So how can they fall for each other in two days which is when the wedding was scheduled to take place?

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Posted: 16 years ago
ok, this is the first FF i've ever read. now i know what i've been missing. great work, opti. waiting to read the next part, and to attack all the other FFs too!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: $weet Ema

Oh thats so sad, did Inder have to die? 😒

Well, he has to for my story to move forward. You'll soon see why.
I would have loved to see the equation between Milind and Inder. Neev's marriage is Annabelle came as a shocker. Interesting part.
It was meant to be a shocker.
Continue soon.
Will do as soon as I compose my thoughts because now I will have to begin another part.

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: DJKM

omg neevz married...n inder dies😲

Yes, this part was meant to set the stage for what is to follow.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: gawker

ok, this is the first FF i've ever read. now i know what i've been missing. great work, opti. waiting to read the next part, and to attack all the other FFs too!!

Thank you Manu, for giving my fic the privilege of being your first ever Fanfic.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Opti i was not online but u r updating regularly.
I am very very proud of you opti.
hope pan too updates her FF .
So Prachi thaught Milind as Pumbler but he indeed did some plumbing thing ..see he did CPR to InderShah by giving mouth to mouth,,,but loved the way u carried the story as no one turned negative here and inder died a natural death unlike the serial.
Milind signed as Son-in-law...is this signature going to play any significant role in getting Milind and Prachi Married.
Lovely Updates ..Really loved it.....u too r just like Kat my friend who used to fed us with daily precaps in the name of updates.
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Posted: 16 years ago
opti darling this update is mind blowing😃👏

milis unknowingly mentioned himself as inder's son-in-law ......... wow😆

neev ............. never expected such things from him😡

inder is no more .......... what will happen to michi relation now ???😕

plz continue soon😊

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