FF:Destiny's Children Pt XIV(2)(16/12) - Page 115

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

wow opti amazing part cont soon

Originally posted by: blind horizon

Hmm well so he loves his wife thinks he's not good enough for her knowing Milind it was acceptable had it been any other man I would've gone nuts. He was crying too my Opti you broke my heart there. He's such a sweetheart working two jobs to get her a decent abode if only she'd known. Anyways I trust you make the reunion equally charming. Wanna see how he feels knowing she left thinking he's in love with Ayesha.

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Opti..........

Awhhhhh Milsi loves his wife!!! So cute!

He not just loves his wife. He simply adores her. He's crazy about her but is scared his love is not enough for her.

Loved Aayesha....wow she is really a mature, loving and giving character in this FF....thanks...First time I think I liked Aayesha in a long time!!

Yes, I said somewhere in the begining that Ayesha will play a pivotal role in the fic, not only in getting Michi together but also later on. Will not say much more now.

Looking forward to seeing how Milsi will " manaa" (woo) his wife............😃

Prachi does not need too much 'manaa' ofying although there will be a heart-to-heart between Michi.

Originally posted by: optimist

So Munee, I did manage to surprise you didn't I? Atleast the reason why he behaved so strangely. Although many had guessed maybe it is because he does not feel worthy of her, I dont think they would have realised the reason why he felt that way. It is not too far fetched too considering that the guy is too uprighteous and always wants to act fair. To his mind this marriage seems an unfair deal to his wife and he is now going to take all efforts to make it one. I hope you find their reunion charming but there will be one more unexpected thing hapenning before that. Do you really want to know how he felt knowing she left thinking he loves Ayesha? You'll know it in my next update.

Originally posted by: gawker

oh, oh - looks like trouble in michi paradise is always caused by truth clouded over. they love so wholly, fully, truly. waiting to see how they come together again.

good to see a good, mature ayesha.

Originally posted by: sailat@PA

Part XIV(2)--

OMGGGGG!! Milind loves PRachi!! Yes, he is crazily in love with her and hurting so much because he thinks his love was not good enough for her.

*happy dance* I seriously am in love with your Milind...NOW!! 😳😛 i was literally jumping on my couch when i found out that Milind loves her back...i kept re-reading that para over and over again!! ammm soo excited!! he is soo adorable for stubbornly wanting to break the 'matki' and the purpose to work that job for making that deposit on the flat!! awwww....lotsa hugs to Milind!! I told you to wait and not hastily judge my Milsi. The guy is a sweetheart, the reason Prachi loves him too.

and now i am sooo anxiouss for the next update and how frantic Milind will be!!😭😭 the poor guy will be totally shattered but not to worry, Michi will soon reunite after some anxious moments.

Opti--excellent update!! pshhht, you shudn't worry abt anythign at all....ur FF is come along beautifully with it becoming more complex yet surprisingly simple at its heart!! Simply beautiful!! :DD This is a theme for love I had in my mind for long. Just translating it into Michi love story.

Originally posted by: blind horizon

Yup Opti quite a surprise bit like the serial but they dragged it there you didn't. It was though known he deemed it unfair for her stay there with him you did mention that throughout your story so it wasn't out of the blue. Oh I'll wait to read the unexpected thing, yes I want to know how he felt wanna see how you write his anguish.

Originally posted by: optimist

Munee are you being sarcastic? I am sure the connection between his forgetting ayesha so soon and his fear that his love may not be strong enough for Prachi because of that was not expected and was not dealt with in the serial too. Surely I have not mentioned it earlier in this story as well. As to the auguish bit I may not be as good as you in bringing it out but will do my best with my limited vocabulary.