Making a Deal with the Devil(NOTE p.27) Mar.17 - Page 7

Can I say I love you sweety this is one of the best pieces of written word I've come across you'r gifted girl. Your writing is crisp, light and textured words flow beautifully. You don't struggle to put your point across neither make it complicated (unlike me) so consice brief encapsulating every motion. I loved the last paragraph very very much.

Originally posted by: optimist

Lovely as always Ada. Hurricane Prachi indeed. Loved the analogy. Wonder what other changes Milsi will have to put up with. I am sure soon Milind's purpose will not all be about ambition. Her softness is going to creep into him.Cant wait for that to happen.

Thank you! lol, Prachi is a category 3 hurrican who'll turn everything in Milind's world upside down. :)

Originally posted by: blind horizon

Can I say I love you sweety this is one of the best pieces of written word I've come across you'r gifted girl. Your writing is crisp, light and textured words flow beautifully. You don't struggle to put your point across neither make it complicated (unlike me) so consice brief encapsulating every motion. I loved the last paragraph very very much.

"They both were fiercely protective of what they considered valuable, and no sacrifice was too big to guard what was priceless. For Prachi, it'd been her father's legacy; for Milind, his eventual success.

And so, by some warped logic, Prachi made sense to Milind."

These lines stole the show well done sweetheart well done. I'm so looking forward to the rest of it.

Awww thank you so much! Though I find that hard to believe @ bolded part. Nevertheless, I'm flattered :). Thank you

Excellent part. Beautifully written. Unique and outstanding. keep it up.

another great part! Hurricane Prachi was the best part! I love Milind's sense of humor, it is sarcastic but unbelievably funny.
pls continue soon😊

wow!! this part is short...bt fab...luvd the way milind refered prachi as a hurricane🤣..his sense of humor is superb...very well written👏...continue soon🤗...cant wait for the suhaagraat though i knw they will b tokin buisness on suhaagraat😆

Nice Update....On the Whole Both have landed in Holy Matrimoney.Very much looking farward to read and Know how these two r going to take this marriage...

wow brillianti part again👏👏thank u so much hun......

nice update, i love ur style of writing.

dats rly gd....lol hurricane prachi