Making a Deal with the Devil(NOTE p.27) Mar.17 - Page 9

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Posted: 16 years ago
#81
just for the father to his son wisdom speech I'm like this
wow thank u for being wonderful at it......I really love that part a lot....
now let Michi start doing naughty naughty....lolzzzz
thank u once again hun it was gr8 part.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#82
great update... loved Mishraji-Milind convo... prachi already feeling attracted to Milsi, and Milsi contemplating tht the marriage shud amount to be more than a contract😛.... best part, Milind smiling at her in the end😳....waiting for the rest..pls update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#83
so they are finally face to face ....... after their marriage😉😆

beautiful part darling👏

loved baba's advice😊

plz continue soon😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#84
Hey i read the two parts together...you really are awesome at writing this. Even tho it seems that you are going slow to the very impatient reader....but its a very tight script....you write just what is needed to understand what the two are thinking at each moment and the change can be seen through the updates. First it was "i hate him/her" then "lets make a deal" and the apprehension of "is this right" and then with the actual wedding taking place i think both feel like its not what they bargained for...or atleast they will soon start to feel that way...and all with that slight but right humor attached. Thankyou so much for giving this FF to us. Its a pleasure to read.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#85
You had no reason to be unhappy about this part, it turned out wonderfully as usual. The best part was definitely Mishraji's advice to Milind and Milind giving it some serious thought. So, he thinks she is lovely and she thinks he is gorgeous. Mmmph, all in all a very encouraging part and please update as soon as possible. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#86
aw hun da father-son conversation was ma fave bit....lovely part
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Grateful Dead

Ada...I just read all the parts at one go'you are an amazing writer ..I must say !!

Your writing seems to have a magical flow'with a subtle humor here and there.." He mused that if India ever had a hurricane, he'd propose to call it "Hurricane Prachi"'😆
Loved the way you described Milind Mishra with a dash of wit.." she was glad he's taken the liberty to trim his beard; his eyes were a deep amber, and contained in them some mystery Prachi couldn't yet unravel; his lips full, his mouth strong'he'd even gotten a haircut!"😳
Father and son Coversation was intelligent and insightful'Im really looking forward to your upcoming updates...

Thank you somuch for reading and liking it :) Hopefully, my future parts will be up to par with what you're expecting :)

Originally posted by: Mi*chi*

👏👏👏 Brilliant part once again.

Thank you!

Originally posted by: angel's life

just for the father to his son wisdom speech I'm like this

wow thank u for being wonderful at it......I really love that part a lot....
now let Michi start doing naughty naughty....lolzzzz
thank u once again hun it was gr8 part.

Hawww! lol I'm so glad you liked it :D hahah the naughty naughty will have to wait for a while ;)

Originally posted by: shivgauri

great update... loved Mishraji-Milind convo... prachi already feeling attracted to Milsi, and Milsi contemplating tht the marriage shud amount to be more than a contract😛.... best part, Milind smiling at her in the end😳....waiting for the rest..pls update soon

Thank you! Milind needed someone to knock some sense into him, didnt he :) Thanks for reading
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shachi-Michi

so they are finally face to face ....... after their marriage😉😆

beautiful part darling👏

loved baba's advice😊

plz continue soon😃

Yep yep :) lets see how these two work out their "suhaagraat"...baba's the only smart one in this story 😆 Ty for reading :)

Originally posted by: jinc118

Hey i read the two parts together...you really are awesome at writing this. Even tho it seems that you are going slow to the very impatient reader....but its a very tight script....you write just what is needed to understand what the two are thinking at each moment and the change can be seen through the updates. First it was "i hate him/her" then "lets make a deal" and the apprehension of "is this right" and then with the actual wedding taking place i think both feel like its not what they bargained for...or atleast they will soon start to feel that way...and all with that slight but right humor attached. Thankyou so much for giving this FF to us. Its a pleasure to read.

Thank you!! Sorry if it's a bit slow, I'm not sure how to set the pace, to be honest...if I rush I feel like I'm leaving out important parts..if I'm too slow...well 🥱...I'll get the pace right eventually tho :)...hehe, the change is there indeed, at least inwardly...but who knows if they'll own up to their feelings...Thank you for reading!!

Originally posted by: blackcurrant

You had no reason to be unhappy about this part, it turned out wonderfully as usual. The best part was definitely Mishraji's advice to Milind and Milind giving it some serious thought. So, he thinks she is lovely and she thinks he is gorgeous. Mmmph, all in all a very encouraging part and please update as soon as possible. 😊

Thank you so much! I dunno why I didnt like this part, but it seems like ppl are enjoying it, thankfully :) I'll update soon.

Originally posted by: DJKM

aw hun da father-son conversation was ma fave bit....lovely part

thank you :) glad you liked it.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#89
awww...no need to b worry abt it hun🤗...this part was beautifully written...luv the father-son convo...glad mishraji has opened upto Milind and givin some fear to Milind as well😆...nw the duffer has to work hard to work on his relationship wit prachi...haey cant wait for the suhaagraat😍🤣...continue soon🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
#90
brilliant part!
your writing style is great.
loved the father-son moment it was very sweet
update again soon plz!
Aaliyah

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