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Posted: 16 years ago
#81
So finally michi progressin in love nice one dea
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Posted: 16 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Shachi-Michi

me first

thnx for such lovely updates darling👏

loved the last two parts😉😆

awesome ........... michi meeting is MIND BLOWING😳


thnxs for ur compliments

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 12

Sukruthi had convinced Prachi to come with to Milind's office. After the college both went to Milind's office. They reached the office, Sukruthi went inside directly pulling Prachi with her as Prachi was feeling nervous. "Sukruthi ek minute tum andhar nahi jaasakthi" Sukruthi can hear a familiar voice. She turned and saw it was Suma , the receptionist and Sukruthi has informed her before that she did not like any formalities with her. "kyuon nahi jaasakthi andhar, kya kahi nayi rules tho nahi rakha kya mere bhai ne" came towards her with a puzzled face. "aise koi nahi hai , tumhare bhaiyya ke mood bahut karab hai iss liye" Sukruthi can find out some nervousness in her voice, " aaj do logon ki achi tarah se dhulayi huyi , Ab andhar tesra hai woh tho gaya aaj", she continued. "kab gaya who andhar" enquired Sukruthi . "2 ganthe hogi andhar jaakar abhi thak baahar nahi aaya tha". Prachi who was watching everything did not understand what was going on. "koi mujhe bataasakthe yeha pe kya horaha hai, kya hum jaldi kaam nipatnaki koshish nahi kar sakthe", Prachi interrupting both of them. "oh sorry tumhe bhoolgayi thi, Prachi usse milo Suma and Suma meri best friend,Prachi se milo", Sukruthi introduced both of them. "oh yeh hai Prachi, suna hai ki teri bhaiyya…………….." before she could continue further "ahh bhoolgayi teri maa ki tabhiyaat kaise hai" Sukruthi interrupted her. "phele se better hai", three of them watched at the door open. They could see a person standing out and wiping his face with the kerchief inspite of AC was on.


Sukruthi started going inside pulling Prachi with inspite of repeated requests for not going inside. Once inside "bhaiyya mein aagayi mujhe kuch paise chahiaye", she ran towards the chair leaving Prachi near the door. Milind who was angry, at that moment , " kuch kaam daam nahi hai tumhe hamesha shopping karthi rahthi hoon padhayi tho bhilkul zero",Milind blasted at her. Hearing her brother's voice Sukruthi jerked from the chair she was sitting in. "bhaiyya plz kal aap ne promise tho ki thi na", she was shivering then. "haa kaha tho tha par…………"he stopped while was staring in the direction of the door. Sukruthi can see brother's expression changing from anger to a sweet smile. She knew that her brother would not bring down his temper for three days but it was not still three minutes when she saw him with anger. She also looked in the direction he was looking. Then she understood what was the reason. He slowly moves towards Prachi "arey yehi pe kyon khadi andhar aa sakthi hai na", says Milind with a spark in his eyes. "Sukruthi tumhe paise chahiye the na, manager se lelo" turning towards her, he continued "aur kuch chahiye". She simply smiled at her brother that she is happy with that. "kaho tho mein abhi aavu tum logon ke saath shopping" reaching his car keys and his coat. "iiski koi zarrorat nahi bhaiyya hum bachche todi hai,hum dono manage karlenge"saying Sukruthi started to leave pulling Prachi with her. "yeh ladki ki wajah se mein Prachi se theek se baat bhi nahi karparaha huu",insults Sukruthi under his breath.

They had done so much of shopping till they got tired. Sukruthi had dropped Prachi at her home. They thought this would be the last shopping before their exams. Sukruthi enterd the house, but she was shocked to see her brother sitting in the living room at that early hour. They never expected him to be at the house at that time. She saw him surfing the channels, she did not want to disturb him,so she tiptoed into the house. "teri shopping hogaya kya, won't you show what you have bought", Sukruthi was shocked hearing her brother. Never in her life he cared what she shopped or bought for her , but that day he was taking special interest in that. "lagtha hai tum poori mall kareedh kar aayi ho" Milind pointing the bags in Sukruthi's hand. "kuch zyaada nahi bhaiyya" , she sat beside him throwing the bags on the sofa. She started showing him the things she had bought, Milind with all patience pretended to take interest everything she was showing him. He was asking her whose choice was everything she bought. " Prachi kya kya karidhi"

Sukruthi was getting astonished with questions that her brother was asking her especially from a month. She took deep breath and " zyaada kuch nahi" she started to collect the things that she threw on the sofa. After setting everything right she hands over two bags to her brother. Milind takes over it in a rather puzzled expression wondering what was there in the bags and why she was handing over them to him.

"kya hai iss mein" asked Milind in a confused tone.

"kudhi dekhlo bhaiyya",raising her eyebrows she said in a excited tone.

He opens the the bags and sees three light coloured, attractive branded shirts that suits his personality. "arey kitni achi shirts hai,anyhow thanks mere liye shirts lanekeliye"he continued seeing the shirts again "mujhe patanahi hai ki tumhari taste itni achi hogi" he was smiling at her in appreciation

" but bhaiyya sach kuch aur hai",she saw her brother's face changing into the state of confusion. She continued "actually yeh shirts mein ne nahi Prachi ne select kit hi, thanks bhol na hai tho ussko bhol de bhaiyya"she went off into her room

After sometime Milind goes into Sukruthi's room. He leans on wall and starts " sirf thanks bholna theek nahi hogi na, usske saath ussko gift bhi denge tho acha lagtha hai na", Sukruthi sees her brother standing , " ha theek hai par mujhe kyuon baatharahe yeh sab, aap khud hi jaakar de sakthe hai na", ignoring him she continues to clean her room.

"aise hai ki mujhe Prachi pasand ,napasand theek se patha nahi, tum usski best friend ho, tumhe usski baare mein sab kuch pata hoga so I'm asking to help me out in that plz, mein tumhe sab kuch duunga jo tumhe chahiye ok"

Sukruthi thought it was a nice oppourtunity to get what ever she needs so she accepts to help him out. "par bhaiyya aap kab denge hai gift", wondering what gift Milind would like to give her.
"kal usske ghar jaaenge hum dono, aur wahi pe denge usska gift"

Sukruthi thinks that her brother had totally fallen for Prachi




Sorry for the mistakes.plz do comment



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Posted: 16 years ago
#84
Sharu very very nice update.
Why is Milind so mad did any one did mistake in the office....why is he so angry.....So why was Suma telling to Prachi about her brother when Sukuriti intereppted her suddenly...
Milind was yelling at Sukruti but seeing Prachi his temper was cooled with glint in his eyes which actually takes 3 days....SO hero was back to home early thinking may be Suk and Prachi will be there with shopping bags...
Okay did Prachi bought Shirts to Milind intentionally or unintentionally,,,But hero liked them and inreturn he wants to say thnaku ...Why he have to give gift cant he take her with him for shopping and select a gift.....
This Milind who is a shrewed Bussiness man has lost marbles when ever he thinks about Prachi.
Shrav me waiting to read more and more.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: MichiDespo

Sharu very very nice update.

Why is Milind so mad did any one did mistake in the office....why is he so angry.....So why was Suma telling to Prachi about her brother when Sukuriti intereppted her suddenly...
Milind was yelling at Sukruti but seeing Prachi his temper was cooled with glint in his eyes which actually takes 3 days....SO hero was back to home early thinking may be Suk and Prachi will be there with shopping bags...
Okay did Prachi bought Shirts to Milind intentionally or unintentionally,,,But hero liked them and inreturn he wants to say thnaku ...Why he have to give gift cant he take her with him for shopping and select a gift.....
This Milind who is a shrewed Bussiness man has lost marbles when ever he thinks about Prachi.
Shrav me waiting to read more and more.

Prachi just helps her friend in selecting shirts for her brother that's it , gift actually he was fully over her and wanted to give her the suprise hey

if have any other questions u can pm me sorry for not giving other answers as they will coming up in next updates.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: MichiDespo

Shrav can u update KHEL soon.

it takes me a week or so saturday and sunday it will be impossible for me to update anything

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Posted: 16 years ago
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i think i will be updating kismet little lately
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 13

Next morning Sukruthi rushed to her brother's office. The day before she kept her books near the receptionist as she would be shop comfortably. She saw Suma was busily speaking on the phone, she Sukruthi she had disconnected her phone. Sukruthi hurried towards her, "meri books jaldi dena", she started looking her and there. "mein tab doongi jab tum mere sawaal ki jawwab dungi", Sukruthi saw suspiciously towards wondering what answer did she want from her. "kal mein jab Prachi ki bhaare mein kuch puuch rahi thi par tumne topic change kyuon ki thi", "arey yeh sab chodho"Sukruthi continued bit irritated and in hurry, "Prachi ko bura lagega issliye, par tumhe kaise pata ki iin dono ke beech kuch hai".

"aaj kal Sir ne sab ke naam bhool gaye the sirf Prachi ke naam yaad hai, iss ek hi naam se sab ko bulane lage hai." Sukruthi was shocked after hearing this. She thought that her brother was going mad about Prachi. She did not want stay there for more time, she just pulls her books from her hand and runs from there thinking that she need to talk with Ayesha about this matter. She reaches to Shah Mansion and sees her brother's car parked there.

She slowly entered into house., she saw Ayesha and Karan sitting there and talking. She could not find her brother anywhere around the house. She went towards them, they were seeing her with shock. "Arey tum iddar se aayi ho, par tumhare bhai ne tujhe doondrahe the, woh tho Prachi ki kamre ki taraf gaye abhi", she ignored Karan's words, she was facing Ayesha with tension in her face. Ayesha thought that there was something fishy going around. "di aap se kuch baat karni hai". Before Ayesha could say something Sukruthi pulled her towards the garden.

The room was dim with the small lighting of the bulb. The wind was blowing into room with force, her hair was blowing with the wind ,falling on her face. She can feel a shadow behind her. She turned around and saw…………… it was Milind, his six feet body had charmed her since they both met.

"kya kar rahi hoo window ke paas", his voice had startled her. She gives him a friendly smile to him. " jho shirts tumhe select kiya tha woh mujhe bahut acha laga", he continued "tumhe isske liye thanks kehne ke liye aaaya hoon".

"aap mujhe aapke friend maanthe hai na, friends ke beech thanks, sorry aur please yeh words ki jagha nahi hoti". Milind takes a packet from his coat pocket which he was hiding from Ayesha and all and hands over it to Prachi. Prachi hesistates to take it. " hum dost hai na , yeh sirf humhare dost ki ek choti si nishaani hai", he winks at her. "par Milind yeh sab…………….."Milind cuts off before she says anything further. "tumhe yeh gift leni padegi, jab tak tum yeh gift loongi tumse mein baat nahi karonga".

Prachi did not want to hurt him. So she takes the gift and opens it. She sees it was chimes, 4-level chimes which already started making a sweet noise due the wind. "bahut acha hai ………" she looked excitedly towards Milind. Her eyes started searching here and there wondering where she could hang up these……. . Seeing her bewilderment Milind snatched the chimes " mujhe pata hai ki uuske kya acha jagha hai", he hangs over the window, exactly between window. On either side stood Milind and Prachi , staring at each other. (What I call this is as Kayamath virus, where before Michi use to have their eyelocks for hours and hours)

A background music combined with the noise of the chimes is followed…………………..

Solah Baras Ki Baali Umar Ko Salaam
Aye Pyar Teri Pehli Nazar Ko Salaam (4)

(I could not give the full song of it as I don't know the exact tune of this , I just recently heard it in tujh sang preet lagayi sanjana and found it mesmerizing, but these two lines were very good and I thought it would be romantic with the noise of the chimes )

They did not know for how much time they were standing there,but they knew there was someone to disturb them. They were startled by the voices coming from the entrance of the room. They turned around to find out it was Neev

"Milind aaj kal tum kaha khogaye yaar, kab se tumhare naam chilathe chilathe mujhe throat infection bhi hojayegi,arey chal neeche sab log intezaar kar rahe hogi", he tried to pull Milind by his hand ,he sees Prachi there, "tumhe kya tikha laga kar, aarthi utharkar bulana padega kya Madam tum bhi neeche jaldi aa", saying he pulled Milind with him and went down.

Milind sees sukruthi sitting with Ayesha and was shocked. "arey bhaiyya subah subah yeha kya kar rahe ho", but her eyes were on Prachi who was coming down blushing profusely. "woh……………………….mein……………………..woh……………….kya……………". She noticed her brother stammer for the first time. She thought love would make and break everything. She did not see her brother acting like this before anytime. For her he was a very strict person like an army personnel. But that day he became something different, he was becoming sober day by day.


Note:- I think the story is becoming bit boring from the previous part , I'm trying my level best to make it interesting. From here I promise to put up more Michi scenes. But I can't ignore Sukruthi's character in this FF. She plays an important role in the story. Sorry for the late update….many problems have arised in between . Friday I was still in the Thursday's episode hangover and my keyboard was not working. Because of this Khel will be delayed by 2 to 3 days. I wanted to open a discussion for my FF……. feel free to comment it and also can give ideas for the FF. I think that would help me to make it more interesting.



Sorry for the mistakes.plz do comment



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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey nice FF. i just started reading and found it fun. well keep up the good work
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Sharuv, It was a nice romantice update given by you.

keep going

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