FF Pyaar Ek Sapna - Meets its End - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shali

hmmmm and he write too....

yaar your talented.....
well will read and coment with one off my onliners.....



Thank you For Ur Comment .. Lets See What Happends ..

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Posted: 16 years ago
#12

Hey nice title...looking forward to the 1st part. 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
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cool.......can't wait to read it.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey I Guyz I will Update my Part 1 in a bit
I have Decided it to Start From today it self ..

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Imran...i am going to read your FF....but warning you...the readers of FFs are very demanding!!! LOL...
Make sure you update regularly unlike me!! :D
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: panache

Hi Imran...i am going to read your FF....but warning you...the readers of FFs are very demanding!!! LOL...

Make sure you update regularly unlike me!! :D



Hey Dnt Wryy I have A week Holidai So I will Update Regularly and Then Will STOP FOR 2 WEEKS kos I have Tests ..
You Knw
So dnt Wrry
By the Wats Ur Name

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ibrahim94



Hey Dnt Wryy I have A week Holidai So I will Update Regularly and Then Will STOP FOR 2 WEEKS kos I have Tests ..
You Knw
So dnt Wrry
By the Wats Ur Name

I am sangeeta.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow What a Lovely Name .. Sangeeta .. Reminds Me Of Sanjeeda lol
Anywaii
i am Going to Make a VM on Michi . So HopeFully I Upload it today ..
anywaii and I will try to Update on My FF .. soon too

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Posted: 16 years ago
#19
Update :
Hey Guyz I am Finally Opening My FF ..
It Is Now On Air ..
You will See Regular Update :

This is My First Part ..
Hope you all Like it And Support Me Throughout the Journey ..
Thank you
HERE IT GOES ..


It Is a Bright Morning .. Prachi Wakes Up to go to College .. Prachi's Mum Calls her ..
Prachi Says Ayee Maa ..
Prachi Comes downster and Touchs Her Mum Feet ..

[ Her Mum Named : Premlata - Actor Not Chosen YET]
Premlata : Jite Re Meri Bache ..
Prachi : Maa Aaj College Ka Pehla Diin Hain Naa .. Isiliye Kuch Acha Kilahakar Bejho .. 😆 Aaj Bohot Bhuk Lagi Hai
Premlata : Acha .. Tu Jakar Apne Papa Ke Saath Table Pe Bhet .. Mein Teri Breakfast Late Hu ..
Prachi Comes Dining Table and Says Papa .. Her dad Stands Up .. And She Touches His Feet and He Says Jeeti Raho meri Bacha .. College Jane Ke Liye Tayar Ho .
Prachi Jee Papa ..

[ Prachi's Papa Not Decided Yet - Inder Shah ]

Inder : Prachi betaa .. kaisa Lag Raha Hain Aaj College Shuroo Ho Raha Hain ..
Prachi : Jee Papa -- Nervous Nikil Kush Bhi Hu .. Kyunki Mein Phir Se Apne Saab Fwnds Ko Milungi ..
Premlata : Haa Milna Phele Khan Kha Aur Aaap Kya Aap Isko College Drop Karenge ..
Inder : Jii Haa Jii

Back At College .. Prachi's Fwnd Nina Waits For Her ..
[ Nina .. Her Best Friend ]

Nina : Pata Nahiin Yeh Ladki Kaha Hain .. ?
Prachi Comes out of The Car while Saying good bye to her Papa ..
Bye Papa ...
Inder : Samhalna Haa ?
Prachi : Jee Haa ..
Prachi Looks for Nina .. She Sees Her .. Says NIIINA ... waves Her Hand at Her .. Nina Does the Same
and They Run to Each Other ..
Nina : Kaha Thii .. Tuje Intni Dino Se Dekha Nahiin aur Tu Hain Ki Late Hogayi ..
Prachi : Sorry Baba .. Forgive Me ?
Nina : Tik Hai CHAAAL ..
Prachi and Nina Turns and Prachi's Eyes Stops at couple Romancing
Nina Looks at Prachi .. She Sees How Prachi is looking at Them and Suddenly Push her and Say O Jee Chaale ?
Prachi : Dekhna Nina Ye Dono Kaise Ek Dushre Se Pyaar Karte Hai
Nina : Dekhrahi Hu Nikhil Kya Paraak Paarta hai .. Pyaar Pyaar Hota hai .. Aj Nahiin to kAAL sab Ko Hoga ..
Prachi : Pyaar aise Cheez Hai Jo Saab Mein Hai .. Nikhil Use Nibhana or Samajhana Bohto Muskhil hai ..
Pata Hai .. Pyaar Aise Cheez Hai .. Jo Tum Chao wo Karskate Ho .. Isi Aise Karo , Waisa Karo .. Jaisa um Chaho .. Isliye Meri Liye ye PYYAR EK SAPNA Hai ....

Nina : Sach Mein Prachi .. Pyaar Sapno Ke Tarah Hote Hai ..
Prachi : Haa ..
The Bells Goes .. Prachi and Nina Attends their First Lecture ..

TO BE CONTINUED ..
HOW WILL PRACHI'S AND NINA'S COLLEGE DAY Go ?
Stay Tuned to Find out ..





Edited by ibrahim94 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Imran... a good begining...looks like you started off the story from Prachi's college days.... I loved the dialogues... Aptly written.... would be waiting to read the next part!
Just a suggestion...since your FF is based on Kayamath....name PRachi's parents as the ones in the serial... That way the story has more of a FF feel to it....(Mom- Premlatha Shah and Dad - Inder Shah...)

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