Imran... a good begining...looks like you started off the story from Prachi's college days.... I loved the dialogues... Aptly written.... would be waiting to read the next part!
Just a suggestion...since your FF is based on Kayamath....name PRachi's parents as the ones in the serial... That way the story has more of a FF feel to it....(Mom- Premlatha Shah and Dad - Inder Shah...)
Thank you For Reading My FF
Well its love Story So Her Love Story will happen Before Marriage lol
Dnt wrry i have This Story Planned already ..
Okaii Then I will Change it .. Before Everyone Sees it Lol haha
but am not going to Use The same People though