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Posted: 16 years ago
this part was so heart wrenching.. my heart went out to both, and the way they talked with no drama and simply and realistically was so beautifully written👏
pls continue soon😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: angel's life

thanks a lot Pam :)

Thank you for reading.
@fahima u too update ur own.

Originally posted by: fahimataq

Even i am glad the reason they are seperating is not bcos of infidelity and abandonment but both understand each other so well! Why does this have to happen😭 Loved the way both are so calm about it and Milind still caring for Prachi glad he realised the kind of pain prachi has been through and i guess Asha is going to be playing a very important role in Prachi's from now on. That has been the biggest problem so far, that they were so wrapped up in their own pain, they couldn't see how much the other person was suffering. But Milind has seen Prachi has been hurting and he can't bear it. You know what pam you have made the divorce sound so realistic and understanding that i dont mind they are seperating. I guess they need more time bcos at this point, they have different needs and im so curious to see what happens next!!! 😳 I loved this MP. I think this is my favourite part 😳😆 Thanks for this update. 😊

It's time for them to be mature, there is only so far they can go by being angry and lashing out at each other. Thank you for reading and commenting.
@angel: i will inshallah update tomorrow 😃

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

omg lovely part but i hope they do not get seperated

Thank you for reading.

Originally posted by: janu_2006

hey

gr8 part..
cont.soon
Thanks. Next part coming up.

Originally posted by: johnangad

pls don't let them divorce!!!!!!!!!! you etched their pain really well

Thank you for the compliment. I was scared that all that describing of their feelings was becoming tedious to read.

Originally posted by: $weet Ema

BC..thank you for updating. This divorce process is just painful to read, you've written the part so well. Its good to see the understanding between Milind and Prachi.

Thank you but I'm worried that I going to scare everyone off if I keep making it painful to read. They haven't made a breakthrough as yet but at least they're a lot less hostile.
Thanks, update soon.

Originally posted by: michifanreal

*Sigh* that's after reading all the parts at once. I was thinking I had read this FF, but hadn't really. I guess I was confused with another FF of yours.
I think I've written too many FFs. 😆 Need to stop. 😆
So, Mallika and Milind busy with business have dragged Prachi to the edge of divorce. Very sad, and you have killed Michi kids too.. even more tragic.😭😭😭
Not exactly feel good stuff, is it? I guess we just have to depend on your FF for that. 😊
But it was great reading through it... Please update soon.

Originally posted by: AKANargis

@BC...
Well...I just finished reading all of the part from the begining. What can I say....this FF is really well written. I love the story....it so heart wrenching. Did Milsi really sleep with Mallika.......or is it like the Aayesha affain in the serial??? Well some are convinced he didn't and other are still not sure. Guess we'll find out in time.😊
I want ot believe that no matter how drunk Milsi is....he could never betray Parchi....especillay when she is already in so much pain.
MICHI really need a contructive CONFRONTATION....they need to yell at each other ...express thier pain and thier sorrow...and then they need to gieve the loss of thier daughter together..
Thank you so much for suggesting this. I'm still largely making up the story as I go along with no clear idea and I realised this is exactly what they need. They do need to scream at each other and then cry together.
Looking forward to your next update..................please update soon.
THanks.

Originally posted by: MichiDespo

🥺 My MICHI r getting divorce.

I cant take it anymore..dont know how MICHI will take it.
BC how the story progress...Milind and Prachi hurting themselves.....there is no looking back for both on Divorce matter. Yes, they're only hurting each other and the divorce looks pretty definite, right now doesn't it? Thank you for reading. 😊

Originally posted by: blind horizon

Heart wrenching and you say Iwrite sad updates, Pammy the divorce is painful so are your updates like a ripple in the ocean. Munee, nothing can compare to KIT. 😭 Thankyou though for this. Thank you for reading.

Originally posted by: shivgauri

this part was so heart wrenching.. my heart went out to both, and the way they talked with no drama and simply and realistically was so beautifully written👏 I just wanted them to start acting like mature adults. I just got tired of writing scenes where they're screaming at each other. They will continue being civil for a while though they do have one big show-down ahead of them.
pls continue soon😃 Thank so much for the comments.

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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 8
"Milind", said Soumya, surprised to see Milind at the door. "Hello Soumya. Is Prachi in?", asked Milind. "Yes, come in.", said Soumya. "Sit down.", she said indicating towards the living room, "I'll call her.". Milind sat down on the sofa and stretched out his legs. He felt his foot hit something under the coffee table. He bent down to see a little boy, who he assumed to be Sumit, hiding under the table. Milind wriggled his eyebrows at him, making Sumit giggle. "Sshh, Mamma", whispered Sumit. "What she's making you do?", whispered back Milind, still crouching down. "Eat peas", replied Sumit scrunching up his face to show his displeasure.
Just then Milind heard Ayesha enter the room, "Sumit, where are you?". Milind straightened up and faced Ayesha. "Milind!", said a startled Ayesha. "Ayesha, is that my ice cream?", asked Milind pointing to the coffee table. After looking confused for a second, Ayesha played along, "Yes, I got chocolate, vanilla and strawberry. Which one do you want?", asked Ayesha as she edged closer to the table. "Chocolate! Chocolate!", said Sumit shooting out from under the table like a dart. Ayesha was perfectly positioned to grab him, "Not before you eat your food."
"Where ice cream?", asked Sumit looking at Milind accusingly. Milind made a sad face. "Your Mamma took it away. You got to eat your peas and then we both can have.", said Milind. "Promise Mamma?", asked Sumit. "I promise.", said Ayesha, "Now eat your food." Milind glanced at Ayesha. He knew she was dying to tell him off but was holding her tongue in front of her son. "Not tasty?", asked Milind, seeing Sumit still giving Ayesha a difficult time. Sumit shook his head. "But how you going to become tall and strong like Papa?", asked Ayesha. "That's right. You don't want to be short and small, do you?", asked Milind. "Like Mamma?", asked Sumit. Milind burst out laughing.
Coming down the stairs, Prachi paused as she heard the deep, familiar laugh. It still evoked equally deep and familiar feelings within her but Prachi quickly suppressed those feelings before entering the room. "Milind", said Prachi. Milind got up as soon as he saw her. Milind's heart leapt slightly. For the first time in the longest time, she wasn't looking at him angrily or hurt or disappointedly. "Milind, is there something you wanted to talk to me about?", asked Prachi when he didn't say anything after a while.
"Yes", replied Milind, quickly gathering his thoughts, "It's about the insurance payout.". "I thought we already decided this.", said Prachi, immediately feeling defensive. "I know but I want you to look at this.", said Milind handing her a file. Prachi took the file and read through it. After a few minutes, Prachi looked up at him amazed, "Milind, I don't know what to say." Milind smiled, "You could say you agree.". "Of course, it's a wonderful idea.", said Prachi quickly.
"What's a wonderful idea?", asked Ayesha curiously. Milind and Prachi, suddenly realized, she was still in the room, busy feeding Sumit. "Milind wants to start a scholarship fund in Kshama's name.", explained Prachi. "It should be open for both high school and university students.", further explained Milind. "So, by when are you planning to get this started?", asked Prachi. "Soon, I don't think there is too much legal work involved and we can award the first scholarship before the school year ends.", replied Milind. "Let me know if there is anything I can do to help.", said Prachi.
Milind smiled at her again. His smile crinkled his eyes but he still looked tired. Prachi suddenly found herself wondering if he was sleeping enough, eating enough. She was sure he was drinking too much. And with that, came back bitter remembrances and she couldn't return his smile. Milind sensed something had suddenly changed between them. But before either of them could say anything, they were interrupted by Soumya. "Sshuu, there is Mamma. No need to cry, baby.", she said to a crying Asha, as she handed her to Prachi.
"What happened, baby? Are you hungry", asked Prachi as she cuddled Asha. Milind suddenly felt as if someone had hit him in the gut. For a few minutes there, while discussing the scholarship fund with Prachi, it had been so easy to forget everything, to pretend everything was fine. But seeing her with the baby, just brought him back to earth, reminding him of how far apart their lives had grown. She had a new life with this child, a child that wasn't his. "I'll just get her bottle.", said Prachi, carrying Asha into the kitchen.
"I finished.", announced Sumit proudly, breaking Milind out of his thoughts. Milind smiled at him, "Lets ask your Mamma for ice cream." "Mamma, ice cream!", demanded Sumit. Ayesha smiled at her son, "Go ask Mausi, okay, she is in the kitchen." As soon as Sumit ran out the room, Ayesha turned to Milind. "Prachi told me about the shares and now this scholarship fund ... She has been hurt enough.", she said protectively. "I know. That's why I agreed to divorce her.", replied Milind bluntly. "Even though, you really don't want to?", asked Ayesha. Milind was saved from replying by the door bell ringing. "I'll get it.", said Soumya quickly.
Milind looked up to see the stranger entering the room with Soumya. "Ranvir, this is my brother-in-law Milind. Milind, this is Ranvir.", said Soumya doing the perfunctory introductions. "Nice to meet you.", said Ranvir extending a hand to Milind. He quickly dropped his hand when he saw Milind had no intention of shaking it. Milind gave him a cold look and then said to Soumya, "Tell Prachi, I had to go.". After a few minutes, Prachi returned to the room with Asha. "Where's Milind?", she asked. "He said he had to go.", said Soumya. Inspite of herself, Prachi couldn't help feel disappointed.
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Posted: 16 years ago
BC, I was pricked when I read how Milind felt when he saw Asha with Prachi. And Prachi's concern for Milind's health, her disappointment as he had left- will she reconsider the decision on divorce?
I am moved by the pain you have captured in this FF. thank you and please continue soon.

Nargis: Me first to comment 🥳
Edited by michifanreal - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hmm this isn't going anywhere Pam what are Prachi's intentions as I'm quite clear on Milind's yes I know she wants to move on divorce him raise Asha. But then what the love the resentment it's complex will she get through it all? Why the bloody hell is that pathetic Ranvir in the picture could feel Milind's heart cut in a million pieces looking at him I believe he has an idea of the friendly status Ranvir enjoys in Prachi's life. Why is it so hard for people to talk it's so bloody frustrating I'm sorry but I'm involved with this ff in particular emotionally I feel for the characters specially Milind who I believe is wrongly accused for a crime he did not commit. In his guilt he's accepting it makes me believe he's quite like the KIT Milind self inflicting and self assuming.Good update though very short.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Great update BC. I wonder what destiny holds for MP now. Please continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Sorry...it took me while to comment...But..(Shubs) I was the first one to read it...YEH!!!😆
I love this FF.....there is so much tension....I could literally feel uneasy as I read the update. Poor Milsi...so totally loves her...and doesn't want to hurt her...he is so lost. Even Prachi loves him to death too...but both Duffers won't talk it out.
So is there a mis-understnding between them about Mallika? Because i can't imagine that Milsi would really sleep with anyone else...no matter how drunk he was???😕😕
Milsi is totally shattered when he see Ranvir...please claer this up for him...I can't see him in so much pain!😭😭
Loved the idea of a Scholarship in memory of Kashma...so sweet. 👏👏
Thanks for a great update...please continue soon...and make it a long update....(me greedy) no small teaser please!😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
Nargis how do you prove you read it first. I might have read it before you.. so let's share the honours this time.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: michifanreal

Nargis how do you prove you read it first. I might have read it before you.. so let's share the honours this time.

Oh Shubs...I will share the HONOR with you any day babes.....what's mine is your!!!😛❤️
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Posted: 16 years ago
looks like michi still haven't had closure, sigh, but its good to see them behave in a more mature manner...its just a shame that the divorce will go through:( i love what milsi is going to do with the insurance money, and prachi seemed happy and lively...she even offered to help....will this venture bring the two together?

so prachi was disappointed when milsi left, thats a good sign :D

hope we get more michi interaction in the next update. thanx for the brill update BC

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