FF: Forgiveness Part12: Pg37: 21/09 - Page 12

It seems my dear, you have made it your mission to make my mascara run everytime you update😡😭

Part 7: Urgh...this is so so painful. The whole process, the memories it dredged up. I was thinking...could they not just have donated the money from Kshama's insurance to a charity? But I'm assuming that Milind may invest it for Asha or something. I read somewhere you wrote that "the divorce looks likely doesn't it" and see I'm not sure 😆 as crazy as it'll sound, what would I want to see? If they can re-discover love for each other after divorce? If it's better they Divorce? If it all come to blows just before divorce? The last scenerio looks extremely likely but then again, you may surprise me...and do I kinda hope so? Maybe. Boy dont I soound like an anti-michian right now😆 but I have immense faith in your writing ability Ela and whichever way you take it, it'll be great I'm sure.

Part 8: OMG😃Sumit is AD-OR-ABLE!! I'm saying it just like that...trust me! Why dont kids like Veg?!! They're yummy!😆

I LOVED it! Love it...the whole scene between Ayesha, Milind and Sumi😉Just served to show, Milind would have made a FANTASTIC father.

and OHHHHHHHHH So thats what he plans to do with the money...I guess it's right as well. He hasn't bonded with Asha nor feels any connection to her for him to do as I suggested. This makes a lot more sense.😊

I also like the paralleles you have drawn between Milind and Prachi. While Asha is a way for Prachi's pain to heal, she seems to be the cause of fresh pain for Milind. That was very well done!! I dont know what I hope for them (Michi), but I hope to see Asha bring some hope/happiness into Milind's life too.

Now...Ranveer...I wonder what went on there...🤔...in all your fics, all your characters have served a purpose, so I'll wait to see what's in store for us regarding this guy.

Thank you Ela for another WONDEFUL update! I do wish I could make you more often😵 but I'll take what I get😭😆 It really is a very well etched out story, my favourite out of all of them!
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they are divorced, now wat will happen?????

Pam, this is simply wonderful. I am always a fan of your writing and read your first two Michi FF but did not read the one with the leap and Michi kids because the theme did not appeal to me. The title of this one put me off it because I knew it would be a tear jerker. Today, out of sheer curiosity I read the last part and was sucked in immediately. I went back and read the whole story. Though as expected it is painful, it is so well protrayed, I was literally clutching my hand to my chest.

wow a gr8 part cont soon

loved Milind's part with Sumit..very cute...
and also Ayesha wanting to scream at him, but doesn't do it because of Sumit😆
Milsi jealous of Ranvir😆... but then with the way Soumya was introducing, looks like Ranvir's interest lay elsewhere😉
pls continue soon😃

good part ...so prachi still feels for Milind.

Pam,
Please update this FF. I love it as the pain in this FF is haunting me.

hey BC i hve enjoyed readin this ff alot! as u hve brought out the pain and hurt in MP's realation..esp in this part where u can see that prachi still worries abt his health n is dissappointed when he leaves with out meeting her! and also milsi's pain when he sees her with asha!

great fic yaar

BC update it please......i think u have forgot about this FF.