The Blessed - poem - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

22

Views

1.7k

Users

17

Likes

4

Frequent Posters

...B... thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#11

Wow that was truly amazing...You wrote it so well that I was able to play the whole scene in my mind...👏👏👏

B
Shabz. thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#12
kit that was lovely...take a bow hun👏
PourQuoi thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#13
Krithika Rangarajan Take a bow my darling! AWESOME!!! Beyond beautiful!🤗
krangara thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#14
🤗
^Glad you both liked it
🤗
soul76 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: krangara

Bouncing along the sunflower fields

Her silky veil dancing in the breeze
Her silver anklets jingling against her feet
Her thick, dark, long hair flying as they please
She looked like a divine angel;
Who made everyone's heart swell
A vision in yellow;
When she smiled, even the sun had to bow
Kneeling down, she reveled in the dewy freshness
Brushing the soft petals against her face
She felt alive and breathless

Like in a happy daze

Suddenly, she threw her head back and laughed out loud
Her musical tone echoing far and beyond
Placing her arms apart, she twirled around

Like she had no worries, only happiness abound

Then, hearing soft footsteps, she stopped
And looked at the blurry figure Just stepping out of the horizon Slowly walking towards her As majestic as the picturesque dawn Her pulse thumped, her heart dropped
Unshed tears of joy twinkled in the light
As she sprinted towards the man - her only delight
Throwing herself into his warm embrace

She repeatedly kissed his strong, handsome face

He gazed deeply, holding her near
And said the three words she always wanted to hear
Her heart flew, just as the birds began to sing

For he could understand her every innermost feeling

Together, they strolled beneath the balmy blue skies
A picture of purity, perfection, and passion In comfortable silence, in quiet elation

Blessed by nature, they were in paradise

- Krithika Rangarajan

*********** Hope you all liked it :)

Just loved it especially the part in red..... I believe it's for Michi kinda reminded me of the first promo run for Kayamath where Prachi dances in a field full of sun flowers.
krangara thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#16

Thanks for your feedback, Munee

🤗
Yep, her introduction scene inspired me to write this...I picturized her running across the fields to finally meet her soulmate - her Milind :D
Monu-SunNaa thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 17 years ago
#17

Kitti KOO...amazing, the poem is beautiful. I was visualising Michi 😍

Bee-dz thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#18
yeah Kits, i aint gonna say any different :) beautiful!! 👏and then some...
another one of your amazing literary works! glad to be able to read it..
krangara thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#19
Thanks Emu and Bee!!!!!!!!🤗
Deepika26 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: blind horizon

Just loved it especially the part in red..... I believe it's for Michi kinda reminded me of the first promo run for Kayamath where Prachi dances in a field full of sun flowers.

Krithika that was a wonderful wonderful one. esp the last two phrases was soooo good i read atleast 5 times.good jobbb and this is for u👏

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".