The Blessed - poem

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Bouncing along the sunflower fields

Her silky veil dancing in the breeze
Her silver anklets jingling against her feet
Her thick, dark, long hair flying as they please
She looked like a divine angel;
Who made everyone's heart swell
A vision in yellow;
When she smiled, even the sun had to bow
Kneeling down, she reveled in the dewy freshness
Brushing the soft petals against her face
She felt alive and breathless

Like in a happy daze

Suddenly, she threw her head back and laughed out loud
Her musical tone echoing far and beyond
Placing her arms apart, she twirled around

Like she had no worries, only happiness abound

Then, hearing soft footsteps, she stopped
And looked at the blurry figure Just stepping out of the horizon Slowly walking towards her As majestic as the picturesque dawn Her pulse thumped, her heart dropped
Unshed tears of joy twinkled in the light
As she sprinted towards the man - her only delight
Throwing herself into his warm embrace

She repeatedly kissed his strong, handsome face

He gazed deeply, holding her near
And said the three words she always wanted to hear
Her heart flew, just as the birds began to sing

For he could understand her every innermost feeling

Together, they strolled beneath the balmy blue skies
A picture of purity, perfection, and passion In comfortable silence, in quiet elation

Blessed by nature, they were in paradise

- Krithika Rangarajan

*********** Hope you all liked it :)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: krangara

Bouncing along the sunflower fields

Her silky veil dancing in the breeze
Her silver anklets jingling against her feet
Her thick, dark, long hair flying as they please
She looked like a divine angel;
Who made everyone's heart swell
A vision in yellow;
When she smiled, even the sun had to bow
Kneeling down, she reveled in the dewy freshness
Brushing soft petals against her face
She felt alive and breathless

Like in a happy daze

Suddenly, she threw her head back and laughed out loud
Her musical tone echoing far and beyond
Placing her arms apart, she twirled around

Like she had no worries, but happiness abound

Hearing soft footsteps, she stopped
And looked at the blurry figure
Who had just stepped out of the horizon
Slowly walking towards her
As majestic as the picturesque dawn
Her pulse thumped, her heart dropped
Unshed tears of joy twinkled in the light
As she sprinted towards the man - her only delight
Throwing herself into his warm embrace

She repeatedly kissed his strong, handsome face

He gazed deeply, holding her near
And said the three words she always wanted to hear
Her heart flew, just as the birds began to sing

For he could understand her every innermost feeling

Together, they strolled beneath the balmy blue skies
A picture of purity, perfection, and passion
In comfortable silence, in quiet elation

Blessed by nature, they were in paradise

- Krithika Rangarajan

*********** Hope you all liked it :)




Loved it Kit, awwwww... very sweet...👏 You are amazing!!!

BTW, "She repeatedly kissed his strong, handsome face" waiting to see this from your gal!
Edited by michifanreal - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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WOW Kitssssss I LOVED it! AWESOME!👏
Thank u so much for writing it!😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow sis awesome👏 👏I love it thanks alot 🤗 🤗OMG Prachi in wonderland and Michi😍what a wonderful world it's to love and to be loved back wow love is truly beautiful😍thank u sis🤗😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks, yaar!
I got inspired by her introduction scene in the serial - remember the yellow salwar one? :)
Edited by krangara - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: krangara

Thanks, yaar!

I got inspired by her introduction scene in the serial - remember the yellow salwar one? :)

yeh i imagined tht scene but with milind.....😍
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: fahimataq

yeh i imagined tht scene but with milind.....😍

YEah...I wanted her to run towards Milind across the fields..lol
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Posted: 17 years ago
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WOW.......kitto.....amazing👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏👏👏 Kitty Koo....Amaziing...wow... Lovely poem...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Kitss..beautiful...hope our doll holds his handsome face and kisses him like that...soon

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