Whispers in Wind (the game)Pt. 40PG 115 - Page 37

Originally posted by: fanNO1

Look who's 1st today yes yes its me ...aray bhaie mai he hoo

well well just read this and its amazing Appi 👏now i hope u can realize i am not mad at all with you)

great to see you back,(what is wrong with this font.😕i swear everything is wacked on IF for me now adays.. anyway i knew you werent mad at meeee..😃
oopss just caught the last line ..and must say khoda phar nikla chohaa

haan yeh baath toi tumnah sahi kaha...😉seriously i just really couldnt think, but there were a few guys one was that Ashadeep from Kuch is tarah.and another guy that krishi really likes but cant remember his name...seen him in Kasuthi Zindagi ki...

now i Edit my post

1st of all lets be fair !!Appi i am telling you ur Roman Urdu/Hindi..or whatever is very bad (i am sorry)

yeah seriously my hindi does suck..!!! 🤣but kiddo i luv Urdu/Hindi, and maanu says i speak it just fine,i'll try to make it better promise..😕

Now Generally speaking i really feel robbie and kasturi are really great Characters in this FF.i just hate this lady nandni what the hell she think about her self😡...but app ke Devika buhat pyari haii must sayy(lying)😆

haan yaar devika serial mein to bardaasht nahin horaha hain mujhe se(hows my hindi now).. so i thought i'd make her super nice here😃😆

I am amazed that I have not come across this story a late sooner.😃I absolutely love love love Fab, Fab, Fab, totally outstanding part,i don't know why but what a lovely part is that I'll always return to this part esp to read it, because it has just something addicting that I have to return to read this all over again (promise)

awwww so sweet kiddo, okay good luck on your seminar and look forward to you coming back soon.. will miss you .... Feeaman-Allah....Appi

Originally posted by: kay

Hey Robina hiya kay

I have to say the Devika in your FF is great 😉 so loving and caring 😆 😆 😃
yeah for now i think i'll keep her sugary sweet😆 but agay dheekho kya hota hain...

Mr Barr 😡 😡 😡 what a pain in the backside for Robbie raichand 🤬 🤬 but im sure everything will work out 😉

Mr. Barr will be the strom that robbie and kasturi will wheather together, and make them stronger...or soo i hope..😉

Kasturi feeling Robbies love now 😳 😳
Anita can keep on dreaming 😆 😆 😈

yup the next couple of parts are going to focus on kasturi's feeling towards robbie...😃 and anita will really help wake kasturi up....

So who is Mr Bhaat going to give the proxy to? 😉hahaha seriously still debating over it with my husband.😆

waiting for next part 😃 thanks kay.. luved the comment robina

Kay

Originally posted by: sahib29

ok start karte hai ...so kasturi feel love for robbie 😳..How sweet 😳

thank god finally yaar i got to this part, seems like it took 4ever....phew!!!

par yaar..mujhe samaj nahi aaya ..ki robbie bhi toh itna rich hai ..Mr barr ki supari de deta 😈😆..i mean uss tape ko kisi tarah wapis le leta ..itna dukh sehne ki kya Zaroorat thi ??😭..duffer kahi ka 😆...joking 😆Haan Mr. Barr is very cunning and robbie ka kamzoori woh jaan chukha hain.😡 iss liya woh robbie koi aapne ishaaroon pe naacha raha hain...

And girish play kar raha hai Mr barr ka character ..yaar mazza nahi aaya 😆...tu devika ko banati na villian 😆...really usse yee roll bahut aacha lagta hai 😉 yee girish toh baccha sa hai 😆

Haan i understand ke mazza nahi aaya lekin, phir bhi chaalo...devika koi tum chordoiiiii...😡

anyways sab tere haath meh kab kya tu kar de kya pata ??😉

haan aub tu aayi nah line pe😆

Next part kab likh rahi ho ??😳

phela tu woh kaam karo joi main ne tumhain bola hain karne koi..phir main likhoongi...robina

Manpreet

Originally posted by: knumnum

Aaaarrrghhhhh First, Why didnt u put any sweet romantic scenes in the cave????😆😆 Second, y did u end the cave scene soooooooooooo soooon?😆

Uff tum aur tumhari romantic scenes ki toi!!!😡I swear krishii, if you had it your way all the fan fics would be 24 /7 romance😆

Who is this barr yaar... He is sooo wicked and Iam liking this character tooo... Woooowww, Robbie is such a cute sweet strong manly man😆😆😆 I luv him way tooooo much in this FF becos he is the perfect example for Knight in shining armor😆

yes krishii Barr will be the storm that robbie and kasturi will have to wheather together... 😉 and you know i think we all deserve a Knight in shining armor..😳

post the next part soooon... No more excuses Lady!!!😡😆😆

yeah my party's over now, so defintely no excuses.. but hey you better keep commenting and make your comments longgggerrrr...😃robina

Originally posted by: storyteller

@robina loved the part dear... am so glad kasturi remembers everything now and this mr barr appears to be a real pain in the backside for robbie and kasturi 😡 ...

Fariii, hey dearie.. barr is a major pain in the you know what, but robbie and kas will pay him back in with interest promise..😆

. am soooo glad the way u have potrayed nandini's character... is waqt serial dekh kar I get really angry with her.... cant wait for the day she learns her own son's ugly truth....

yes she is preening like a peacock and needs her feathers to be ruffled, i too cant wait for her darling son to show his true colors...nandini will be sooo mmmm, i cant say that she will be mad, she'll probably find a way to blame kasturi for that too😕

and love devika .. I know u r partial to her.. isi liyae us ka character itna achaa hay?? right??? 😳 ... but hey who's complaining... 😆 .... waiting for ur next part
yeah me very partial to devika, but cant stand her right now in the show. 🤢 yaar soon, hopefully i'll post quicker this time... luv robziii
FAri

Originally posted by: prettywomen

loved it.. so great that kas remembers everything now.. dunno why, but my heart flipped when i read the lines, about tired robbie saying that i have always wanted to kiss and suck upto oly one person and she is not remotely interested.. somehow those lines did something to me 😳

No friggin way seriously😃 that is exactly how i felt when i wrote that line, sooo happpy you caught on to that.. man your alot like moi..

and ram's character has been written so well and his dialogues esp the dammit, is so like him 😆

yeah Ram's a blast to watch in kasm se . so i'm really enjoying penning down his dialogue.

cant wait to see anita get it while she tries to expose jp saab 😡
thanks a lot and loved it 😛

i dont know you pretty women but we think alot alike and its been fun getting to read your thoughts, so thanks for coming out....hope to see more of you.robina😃

Originally posted by: *princess*15

fab part dii 👏 👏 lving this story so much 😉 😳
finally!!!!!!!!!! 😆 she remember everything 😆

yeah mani seriously 21 parts later... geeze never knew i could be soooo slooooooowwwww..😆

nandini kabhi nahi sudhragi 😡 shiv being kind wiv her 😔 nd she argh 😡 😡
lv ur devika dii 😉 lolz 😆

i think shivani didnt feel it approprieate to tell nandini off in her office, and plus of course i why rock the boat even further..this nandini is pretty much out to Lunch and doesnt seem to be coming back anytime soon..😆
shiv nd kas frendship is so nyc 😍 unlike in serial 🤢 lolz 😆
i was wondering who is playing mr barr's character 😕 cuz u aynt mentioned in previous parts 😕 but @ the end of part u mentioned it 😆 now i dnt hv confussions😆

yup i reavealed who i thought would work out, but lets see if you gals like him in the next coming up parts..i'll keep my fingers crossed...robina dii
cant wait 2 read da nxt part 😆 😳

Originally posted by: livelygal

Naman Shaw ko hi banana tha!!!!! oh god! kyun? Waise I like him a lot...reason 4 my outburst!!! Robina diii!!!

Oops so you like him huh, well i hope you like him here too, cause he's gonna be wicked😆

Yaar words and praises are running short dont blame me if 4 ur next update I put only hose smiley emotions clapping!!!

no Pallavi i luv your comments dont you dare just put emoticons... i luv your thoughts..😃

I loved that part where mr.bhatt hugged robbie...I could feel the warmth of that hug!!!

I'm so glad you felt that warmth for i too felt it would be very natural for Ram to hug his nephew for he almost lost robbie for a second time..

Poor shivani....kis jungle min phas gayi! But surely this tangle is gonna clear up!

maybe i should send shivani and ronauk to the jungle to get away from nandiniiii😡
Robert Barr.....uuuuffff ggggggrrrrrrr(rhyming 😉 )
Naman shaw...yaar plz pm me and tell me sum other guy's name...I will never be able to imagine naman as negative even though I saw him as girish cause...I always think of him as that love-sick nakul or dashing pushkar!

yup he's done a great job in both roles i agree, but i think he's ready to be a negative character again, if only in my fanfic..hope you keep reading...Pallavii... for you never know😉

Originally posted by: herman_4u

so everything is revealed. and shivani's answers to nandini were pretty smart i thought. kasturi finally realizing her love robz , really love robbie for letting her take her time, shows a true love of his, and a perfect understanding between them.

seriously herman all relationships need is time.. good and bad time never stay.. and i think in the end i would luv for people to leave with that lesson from my fanfic.. thats is..love is a strong emotion enough to start any relationship, but only patience can make a relationship flourish...😃(jeeze sorry that sounds pretty preechy...yikes 😆)

and i love wen she said are u done kissing Mr. bhatt 😆 and as usual i loved rob's reply to it.

i luv it when you gals get my humour, for its really off the wallish.. 😆

so naman shaw is the one who's gonna play the character, i thought it was someone old and it would have typical if an oldy had crush on a young girl but i loved ur choice for mr. barr's role. adds so much interest to the story and i'm really luking forward as wat's gonna happen.

I'm so glad you approve, i knew i'd wouldnt get everyone to like Naman at first for he wasnt my first pick but more i thought about it, it began to come together for me.. any whooo lets see how it pens out.. thanks, hey shouldnt you have like mid terms soon???

love
harman 😛

Originally posted by: mimi0295

FABULOUS! I know that I always say this but I am left speechless! Dii wow! I LOOVE IT!

thanks alot mimiii😳

LOL U have all my favorite actors in your FF; KP, JS, and now Naman Shaw! 😳

yeah could you imagine a show with these guys all in it.. that would be de bomb!!!😃

I loved EVERYTHING! But this one line made me laugh OUT LOUD:

for kasturi shivani was the sister alaanah never was

haha that was too funny! 😆

okay your dii is getting to old, tell me what was so funny??? hey today i really needed you sunshine... it hailed here in my city😕. 😡

---Your Sunshine! =D

Originally posted by: stars_shine

diii...wow...just read it!...hm...no words...poooor robbie... 😭 ...i feel so bad dat he had to sped all that time in jail..confined... 😭 😭

yeah robbie did sometime behind bars before his bail was set, i'll reveal how robbie met robert..soon..

n its reallllly sweet the way he spent all this time trying to protect kas frm that weirdo barrrr...ugh...hate him! 😡 ...he he he...srry.......u shlda seen my clenched fist when i read abt him

ohhhh yikes star, you and the word hate together, i find that hard to believe, your soo sweet...

..but anita!.....shayad u need to give me her address so i can go and knock sum sense into her!

dont worry kasturi will have the honors in doing that for youuu.. in this fanfic and in the serial i'm sure...

um...wat else..oh i hate this..i make so many comments in my head when im reading n then forget when i get to writing them...

hey same problem totally understand...

hmm...ur doing an awesum job as usually....diiiiii...lol luv calling u dat...

I actually luv hearing you gals call me diii, cause i only have one elder sis. never was a dii to anyone..until now😳🤗

😃

hey all my fav. emoticons are back yahooooo.. me doing the chicken dance now... thanks alot star... keepin shining. luv robina diiiii

Originally posted by: JWMRK

@Robziiiii
Great part!!...good that a great deal of misunderstnading is cleared...at least now Kasturi knows where the problem lies 😊 ...and Naman Shaw as negative...thats interesting 😳

hey thanks JW, i had a ton of loose ends to tie up, so me rolling up my sleeves and trying to get the job done... and yeah i'm hoping my penned character will match the actor i choose...always a gamble..robziiii

JW

Robina..........that was long part. I need time to read it! 😃 So, I will comment over the weekend!

**edited**

NO! NO! NO! Robina!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please don't make Mr.Barr, Naman Shaw!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please......I will not be able to hate Mr.Barr them!!! Well, its no secret that I adore Naman quite a bit. I am just waiting for him to get out of 'Kyunki saas.....' and move on to another show, so I can watch him 😆 😆 😆 If you make Naman as Mr.Barr, then you have to make him a good man!!!!!!!! 😆 😆 😆

Loved this part and your comment in the last part about the next few parts being drab, is so not true! Out and out romance is not the only thing that interests me......I really love to read the strories too..........I enjoy all the stories that all the FFs tell!

The connection between Robbie and Kasturi is very sincere, deep and emotional in this FF! Love reading it! And what you wrote, when Kasturi hugs Robbie was too beautiful!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 I loved reading about Shivani....she seems so interesting, would love to read about her more! And God.....what confusion!!! I just hope Ajay does not say Yes!!!! 😕 ANd the emotion between Ram Bhatt and Robbie was very touching and Kasturi's reaction and Robbie's answer to that reaction was hilarious 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Great part 👏 👏 👏 I apologize for the delay in reading it!!! 😊

Originally posted by: RK_fan111

Mr. Ram is one smart guy…he understood the vibrations betn Roka!😆

Oyyyeee where did u get this Mr.Ram??? Isnt he Mr.Bhatt???🤣🤣🤣 Paddssssss, Come out of ur spicy thoughts😆😆 warnaa I wud have to call ur hubby😆

Krishi