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Posted: 17 years ago

@pragalbha diii thanx a lot..and Rosy-Girish pair may work..But i have someone else for her😉...OK dii we'll give Ro to Dr.Mannu so that she will operate on him and i will give each part to each one .OK😃...Arre yaar u ppl are sooo cruel to poor Kastoo🤢..
@Robina dii...OH MY GODS..i am at heaven now😳 (not with RA😉) UR comments make me go red and redder each time dii☺️☺️.. But i bet UR FF is exciting my BP day after day and I am so proud that all my friends love ur suspense dii😃..I just love that work....It is so entwined but the knots of words are strong to hold all the diwwanis of UR FF😃..and i will surely give U the humour potion if U exchange the writing skills..And whaaat was that ..so jiju too in grade B...😳😆
@Mannu dii:i was planning to have a "CUT RO MISSION" with U as the cordinator😎..But now U too want him fully......oo bad bachoo too bad..🤢😆
@rosy kutty..i got all ur hugs bachoo.. haan Ro ninne aadyam thalli😳, pinnei kasturi thalli.😭.saaramilla poote..a tree oru 3-4 meeter pokkamullathaarunu..Saaramilla..nee Ro'de aduthalei irikyunei😳..Avanum tree's defecting aanu😆...and me too will miss you bachoooo.come soooooooon😃

PS:To my other friends who are reading this :Thanx a loooooooooooooot guys.😳..I love u alll..... and keep reading it..
Next part dbl post tonight..OK
Jaanu

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Posted: 17 years ago

A SURPRISE ENTRY

Jima dii and Dr.Mannu are decorating the tent with nets and roses😳.They are at the Indraprashth Nagar a way away from the main city.This place is calm, quiet and seriene. the lake with house boats floting are stationed are making the place look like a gorgeous lady.😳
Jima dii: yeh rosy bhi naah..all the time she is like this.Irresponsible😡.When i was her age i used to help my parents a lot.😆😆
Dr.Mannu: arre Jima ki bachii chodo yeh sab.U now how are todays kids😉.Once when i was working in Germany i had....
Within a flash of second Jima dii apparted into thin air😉, unable to listen to another gr8 adventure of Dr.Mannu.😆

Kasturi and rosy are in Seemati Saree Sansar selecting sarees after sarees to wear for the small party.Kas seems satisfied with a white designer saree embedded with stones and pearls.But Rosy, the Fashion Creek 😉is looking and looking for Antique at the same time modern designer cholis.
Rosy:Yeh dress achi hai lekin Kasturi dekho yeh thread strong nahi hai..👎🏼
Kas:Choose something Rosy. You are not going wrestling to say that is not strong{😆.}.It is strong enuf to hold U in it..Now select something..And there are going to be no boys so anything wud do.{😆}
Rosy:Who said anything wud do...You can never say whn will those two spcl eyes fall on you😳.You must always be prepared for that😳..
A gasping suddenly make both of them turn round.
"KIDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS😃"
Kas and Rosy was so surprised.The girl, their sweet friend whom they missed each sec are right infront of them😃....They ran to her with open hands and a sweet kiss..🤗
Kas:AISHOO tum... What a surprise man...😃
Rosy:Surprise nahi SHOCK😃....I am dumbfound..
Aishoo: i am just back from UK yaars.Its only yesterday i came and i was coming to meet you this sunday.😃
Rosy:SUNDAY..U mean 4 days after today😡..HOW RUDE..😡.
Aishoo:How rude ka kya matlab? Ju never called me when i was away😡..Stupid KIDS..😆
Kas:Haaaaan what a contentment on hearin that KIDS.😳
Rosy :OK Aishoo yeh sab baathein chodo..ajj raath ek party hai at the usual spot.So must turn up there..OK..and Robina dii Ko bulao😃.Pragz missed her a lot😭.We'll give her a surprise.😃
Aishoo:yeah sure and i'll take a friend of mine too... so see you guys tonight..ok...😃

Kasturi and Rosy and Jima dii and Dr.Mannu are sitting in Tropica each sipping a Pista shake😉 and gossipping abt Nikky (Nikhila) their former neighbour 😆who was jima dii's PET( i mean An INSTANT ALARM in the mornings😆) Just then Pragalbha dii enter the cubicle loaden with colas and Lays and Prinkles.😳
after sometime they left the bakery each taking a big basket of Food for their Monthly Moon light party......😳

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i know it was a smaal part but the party will be loooooooooooooooooooooooooooongg becos i had already written it...😃
So see you at the party and a bunch of REAL surprises.... i think my bulb is too charged today....
comment soon guys and next part tonight.....

jaanu😳

Edited by GAPS - 17 years ago
sahib29 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago

Jannuuu Very nice part dearrrrrr 😳👏

but but but ,...ek baat bata ki main aur Jima ..party ka tent decorate kar rahe hai kya ??....aur aggar haan ...toh tune mujhe Dr. se kaam karne wala bana diya 😡😡😡....main tujhe nahi chordungi 😡

and Rosy ..tum chup chaap jo kastu buy kar rahi hai usse karne doo ..nahi toh tumhare liye kahi pratishodh na shuru kar de 🤣..

so ab Aisha aur robina ki entry ho gayi 😆..so dekhte hai kya karte hai yee 😆

Very well written ..am waiting ur big surprise 😳

Manpreet

Edited by sahib29 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

hey jannu just caught up wid ur ff 😉finally lolz😆 ur a brilliant writer👏 ur writing skills r amazing😉 lyk ur thoughts jannu😉

PART 1 YEH DOSTI

OMG kasturi nd rosy r sitting on branch🤣🤣🤣 wat an idea😆 OMG dat cracked me up lolz😆 BTW u lyk cricket😉 nd i bet ur fav cricketer is dhoni isn't😉lolz😆

PART 2 A REAL ODI

haha kasturi called robbie a frog😡 🤣 roka fight is so nyc i lyk their nok jhokes 😉rosy fancy all da cricketers lolz😆 BTW i dnt noe ishant who is he????😕 u didnt invite me 4 da lunch 😭😭 not fair😭

PART 3 FIGHTING TO WIN

wat SRK nd Preity😲 lyk preity😳 but SRK 🤢 robbie is da best yaar😉 OMG girish nd robbie r buddies 😲this is really interesting😆 OMG rosy was thrown out of da tree 😲 kasturi the attitude girl lol 😆she dont leave a chance 2 annoy robbie😆 my poor robbie hv 2 tolerate her attitude 😆

PART4 SURPRISE ENTERY

rosy lykes western outfits 😉lyk me lolz😆 aishooo😲😲 nd robinna dii😲😲 this is gettin so interesting😉

im so relaxed now haaaa ur amazing 👏👏u bring all ur frndz in ur fic😳 so sweet of u 😳now write da next part ASAP im waiting 4 it 😉 just read ur 4 parts 😉but still yeh dill mange more😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jima

aaray yaar today u patched up with manuu ....omg she is more dangerous than pragalpha...alteast pragalpha is ready to share the things with me.par yeah mannu tho selfish hai....particularly in robbie's matter...all alone she will loot him...and disappear....

Hayye rabba Jima ..Main means Mannu aur selfish 😲..arre maine kya kiya hai ?😭...ok tumhe hero hi chahiye na ...so jayo diya tumhe mera raunak 😉..jaayo aur ashh karo 🤣🤣🤣

plzzzzzzz give me the welcoming job 👏to me ...so that i can welcome robbie with rose water , sandal paste and with sugar cubes...omg ....now i an going to faint if i imagine that scene....and i dont want anybody to stand beside to me😡..... even for help...

Wow yee theek hai ...Jannu yee Job tum Humhari Jimma ko de dena 😳..yee uska welcome karegi ...aur bad meh jab robbie andhar aayega ..toh hum dinner karnge robbie ke saath 😳...aur Jima gate par hi robbie ke jaane ka wait karegi ..cos bye bhi toh karni hai 🤣

Manpreet

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Posted: 17 years ago

@mannu dii..first of all thanchooooo😳 and dont worry dii decorating tend is not as bad as having Ra around you..😉 and dii Me too was telling Rosy to buy what Kas proposed.but yeh Rosy bhi naah..*phew* OK dii my next part will be up tonight..Just collecting some patch work for it and i need to type it.Thats all...😃and thanchoos once again...

@Manni bachii any doubt who is my fav crickter..its Dhoni Dhoni all the way😳..And Ishant is the new super duper star of Bowling in India.His full name is Ishant Sharma.He is a taaaaaaaaall Guy among the small Indians..😉yeah dear Rosy twicw fell from thw tree and Ro was really annoyed and he was after my blood when i saw him after the match😆haan yaar she like western but her Choli has a job in the party😉 thats why I made her choose a choli.😃 THanx yaar thanchooooo so much...... loved all ur words and it makes me more humbled...😳next part will come tonight..so wait for it😃

@Jima dii...Dr.Mannu is fine compared to Pragalbha dii in matters of decorations😉.She decorated Ra nah and he went straight ..wooooosh to uupper😉...😆.(Staight line with slope c)...And jima dii you have a "SET MUNDU" woooooow I can imagine you in it dii😳..With mullapoo, set saree,tulsi and chandanakuri😳 ........haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Ro will dir for U sure..😳dii check my siggy ro was and is in it all hot as usual..And dii we do such welcomings on marriage days.i'll surely give you that honour when Ro is gonna marry So dont worry and i am sure none wud disturb you too as many wud be in Mannu dii's treatment out of crying😆Watch OUT for next part pls....

thanchoo all once again....

jaanu

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jima

issay bayhather hotha thu mujay golimar thay thee

Ok dear tumhara Hukam sar aankhon par 😳😉..yee lo ...and aur yee lo ..with two guns ...and Jannu aur raunak aajayo ..aur Jimma ko le jaayo ....Now am happyyyyyy

mai bhee saath saath andhar aawoongee..

Kyu?????????????? kya karogi andhar aa kar

khaanay kay ilaawa aur bhee kuch aatha hai kay thum loog ko..?..

Nahi aata kuch ..cos khayenge toh toh jinyenge ..aur jinyenge toh hi robbie ke sapna dekhenge 😳😍

mai tho wosko khelawoon gee😳...

Kyu robbie ke haath meh chott hai kya ??😆

ohai mannu bye karnaay ka kaam theraa hai. kaam chor kaheen ki ...puraa kaam muchsay karwawo gee kay?

Oyye ..main robbie ki behen hoon ...main kyu essa wessa kaam karu 😡..tum sab uski diwani kis liye ho ???😉😆..kaam karo Phal ki icha mat karo ...Phal apne aap mil jaayega 😉

Manpreetttttttttttttttt😎

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Posted: 17 years ago
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but well wait for the next updaute !!!

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*do compelete more an more*
*and iloveeeeeeee yaaaaaaaaa soooooooooo much*

Your's
AishooO!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Monthy moon light party 🤣
That was just too funny, I was laughing so loudly!!!! 🤣 🤣
Good part....Jaanu, And now I am waitihng for the party......big time!!! Ek accha gaane bhi daalde part mei!!
And I am going to go and get some pringles to eat now!!!

Mannu, Jima loved reading your comments 😆 😆
Jima.....mei Robbie ko share karne ke liye ready hoon 😉 😆


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Posted: 17 years ago

THE PARTY

Priyanka( priya) as usual was the first one to arrive at the lake shore.She knew that the lake and its sunset was always so beautifull.But their once-a- month moonlight party made the gorgeous woman, look so sexy with a songs and masthi all night😳. "Why shd boys have all fun😉?" is what they said whenever anyone commented on their get togethers.
Manii:Arre Priya ki bachiiii kaisi ho tum😃.Aur Rohin kaisi hai. He is no more hovering around gurls nah...😆
Priya:Aree nah baba. now all he talk is abt you and only you. 😉Tell me yaar whats the secret of it..😉
Manni: (in a hushed voice) Kissi ko mat battanah...A fine pointed heels😆 ..and she winks while Priya burst into a gr8 smile😃..(Priya is none other than my gorgeous Gauri Of Karam😳).
And as they talk on and on Jima dii, Pragalbha dii and Mannu dii comes in Mannu dii's i-10😉.
Jima dii:"Arre Priya..Manni..How sweet to see you guys.And Manii pls yaar dont sing tu Hai Wohi once more..pls..i'll faint..😆"
Manni:Ohhh Jima dii aap bhi nah...😆
And then Kasturi and Rosy arrive in Honda Pleasure(Pink).they arethe gals who are responsible to bring the food 😉neat and safe..So Kasturi is in her gorgeous stunning saree and Rosy in her choli..If there were any guys around the place, Mannu dii wud have had a job bringing them back of the shock😆...All the girls are so stunning and describing them will take away another part from me.😳
So all of them walk in to warm, cosy tent,with a fire outside it.The tent is decorated so elegantly and the chairs and tables are all waiting to be filled with food and fun.😳😳😳
The girls set to do the job.It is their party and they are the guests.So they love doing the job😳.And they do the chatting while they are opening the cases of food;
Priya:Jima dii yeh kya hai..(And she smells the packet before opening it....)hmmmmmmmmmmm Halwa.... 😃dii i am sure its the red one nah...😃
Rosy: Nah Jima dii its yellow nah....😃
Pragalbha dii: Its neither yellow, nor red it is brown...😉
Rosy and Priya together: BROWN...WOOOOOW we wud love it..😃😃😃
This is the thing that was best among the gurls.their induvidual thinking must be different, but they had many many more common likings too.😳
Kas:Waisei Manuu dii, tell me how is Alekha. Poor child, Dr.Jessi said both her sis died.😭
Mannu(looking up from unpacking the colas) haan Kastoo both the other kids died and we are not sur of Alekha😭. The accident was so bad and her internal bleeding is still serious.
Jima dii:Mannu dont worry yaar, life will not always give you happiness..
Mannu dii:haan i know it Jima😭, 'mera friend'Raunak always used to say this..😭😭😭
Manni:Mannu dii U R still crazy of that Raunak...😡
Praglabha dii:Never mind manni, ppl are crazy when it comes to stupid things. 🤣 🤣 🤣
And before an angry Mannu dii could pounce upon Pragz dii, a car came and braked at infront of the tent.All the gurls looked up to see who is in it😕(it is an open tent guys).
Aishoo stepping out of the Scorpio..:TARAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA 😃Surprizeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😃
All the gurls rush out to hug and kiss their own Aishoo.😳
Jima dii:Aishoo ki bachiiiiiiiii So u R back..Hoo how we missed your choregraphy craze Aishoo..😳😃
Aishoo:But before i say anything, there is anither Surprise...
And the car door opens and out comes Robina dii..gorgeous as she can in her maroon Kaanchipuram saaree😳
Pragalbha dii:ROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOBZ... 😃and they oth broke into a strong hug....... the best friends since college days are meeting after 1 year.And as Pragalbha dii moves out All others take chances to hug her..😳
A man who is watching them interupts: Hmmmm..Now can I get the attention pls....😉
and all of them turnd his way.Kas's eyes nearly ropped to the floor.It is that crazy guy again..😆
And to her UTMOST surprise she hear her right ear drum, vibrating so hard becos Mannu dii and Jima dii gave two loud screamings 🤢
"ROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOBBBBBBBBBBBBIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE" and they fought their way to hug Ro... {😡)"who Will Hug him First" competition went to a draw as Ro opened his hands fo both of them.( All angry girls dont worry😭.wipe ur tears..every gorgeous lady will have a day including me.)
Jima dii (So Surprised) Ro tu yahan, achank....I dont beleive it man..😃
Mannu dii:Me too..And Ro tum is stubble mein kaafi hot lagthi hai.😃😃😃.Do u still expt with UR look yaar..😳😳😳
Ro: Maans its cool nah, only a daring young man take challenges😉, esp a hot honey like me....😃
Jima dii: So true Robbie..😃
Manni:So wud you stop drooling😡 and may i have the honor to know who he is??🤢
Aishoo:OOOh i forgot, gals this is Robbie, Robbie The Heartbeat of 100000000's of gals around the world😳.And me too proud he is my BEST FRIEND😃.
Manni:So How come Mannu dii and Jima dii know him??🤢
Jima dii: Oh Manni he was our neighbour when we were at Delhi Medical College.He lived next to the Girls hostel😳😳😳.
Mannu dii:And all girls used to get up at 4.00 am before the bells to see this chakoo bachoo☺️☺️☺️( and she pulls is cheeks😡, and Ro pass another dimpled smile☺️)
Pragalbha dii who was standing opened mouth go to Ro and shake her hands and hug him and kiss him☺️, and so does every other girl.Manni and Rosy were hugging like lizards.😆
Aishoo:So guys he is here for a friends wedding and i thought why not include some boys to our fun😃.😉
Kas:Boys matlab😕...(she was standing a way away, and Ro hadnt noticed her.But now he too see her)
Aishoo: Matlab, some of Rohin's friends who are at Saint Gits.
Rosy:OOOOOHHH I C..See Kas I always said nah we will never know when will the 2 spcl eyes arrive.😉
ro:Hoo U wear lenses then..😕
Rosy: aapka matlab????🤢
Ro: Naah i just asked becos u were talking abt eyes and all nah.🤢.😆
And every one burst out laughing😆 except Rosy..😡
Robina dii:Oh my dear Ro ki bachoo wo boys ki baadh kar rahe thei...U R a stupid when it comes to romance, still switched to tu Hai wohi😆..Arre yaar its time you change the made to "Mauja Hi Mauja"😆😉

Priya:Abhi yeh bhashans shuru karo, varna food....🤢
Manni:Yeah food, lets move in guys..😃
And all of them move into the tent.
Ro: smelling the air.... hmmmmm.. unniyappam right..😳
Jima di: yah Robbie..I know you love it nah..😳
Pragalbha dii(pushing Jima dii out of the way)..but robbie, i made this Unniyappam with my own hands😳 and Jima neh woh disposible plates laya.🤢.
Ro: hiiiii Pragz "DI" so can i count you in the list.😉
Pragalbha dii (blushing) :YEAH..Sure..😃😳
Manni: Ahem.... didi we are still alive here..ok.😡
Rosy:Yeh Manni the thing i dont understand is that we youngsters are all controlled and controlled but yeh SWEET 16's bhi nah..😆
And right then a group of bikes come to a hault infront of the tent and Rosy rushes out to see who it is.
Rosy: MANIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII IIIIIII😲
And Manni and the others comes out running.Manni is shocked to see Laksh(yeah our Laksh aka Pulkit).
Manni:LAKSH 😲 TUM......................................................... ............😲
Laksh (stammering on his words and shocked to meet Manni at such a plce): Haan manni mein...woh......Aisha....Rohin.........🤢
Aishoo:So u know each other guys...😕
Manni(with a drawn smile): haan Aishoo yeh hai woh " Sonu Nigam ki Mallu version"😆
Aishoo:Matlab..😕
Dr.Mannu:Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh I see... "Maine Pyaar kiya"😆 wala....Fantaztic .. i was looking for an oppurtunity to meet you😉 Mr....er..
Laksh: Laksh..Lashya Verma.😃
dr.Mannu: yeah..Laksya Verma...And this is ...turning to the twoother guys near him..
Robbie: oh..they are Girish😳 and Nikhil😳 my friends..Rosy and Kasturi know them.
Dr.Mannu and Jima dii throw a "How come🤢" look at Rosy, as they know Kastoo.😉
Rosy:ooh its nothing dii, we met in the match last day.thats all.
Jima dii:Phew...😃
So guys, welcome to our party and pls come in..........

And now the set is ready and what is b/w Manni and Laksh.. Jaanei ke liye dekha this FF within a few hrs.....i just wanna type it thats al..
hope you enjoyed it and pls comment fast yaars..
Jaanu

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