Kaarvan - AA & RK romance...pg 92 & 93 - Page 79

hiya Pragzs... what an scintillating part that was phew... super hot!!!!!👏👏👏

and i have to ask why do you feel unmotivated??? such a talented writer as yourself doesnt needs motivation...your an inspiration to yourself!!! you rock!!👍🏼 Your writing moved me soo much to want to write my fanfic... so a huge thank youuu....for being such a moving writer.. and sharing Kaarvan for all of us...

OKay to the part:

Thank God kasturi got saved by her backpack.. lucky girl, what a relief to know that nothing happened to her..

i luved how you wrote out RObbie's fear and concern, his love for kasturi was sooo evident.. very touching part. i luved how he said mein to daar gaya tha...says it all..so sweet how they hugged.. and now i know why i call you the Queen of romance cause you can take a single hug and make it into something soo deep and meaningful..the pen is a mighty tool!!!!👏👏

Shivaniiii is soo sweet how she didnt say anything.. good for her... she assess before she talks.. smart girl..

Ajay's a really fine individual.. very level headed, and kind hearted, i simply love how you write about him...(for some reason i feel your very close to this personality.. am i wrong in thinking this?cause the way you describe him it seems as though he's real...😳)

finally robbie is getting ready to introduce kas to his family.. mentally he's preparing himself.. right on!!!

Ohhh the dress was lovely but i too thought since casual is sooo in now adays that alaana would be over dressed. but i luved how robbie turned his words around..to make alaanah feel special...what a sweet bro he is...i really luve the bonding that the saberwals have, i like the teasing, the laughs the cries everything!!!i feel very close to the family...well written.

ohhh for me the party was awesomeeeee.. luved it from start to finish.. what a treat thanks pragzs...

Robbie's shirt and his comments on them are a blast to read!! where do you come up with these Pragzs😆 very witty...👏

ohhh the way Ajay walked up to Alaana i could feel the butterflies in their stomachs..lol!! and that neha very infuriating but totally agree she gave Ajay that final push into bliss of love.. finally Ajay and Alaana know that their dastak of luve is calling....ohh and i luved the way ajay said its simply difficult to be beautiful !! my fav. line awesome...

and i luv these two bond. for me their their luv stoy has become my all time fav... i can just soo relate to ajay and alaana more... fantastic part please continue sooon.. Pragz...luved it ....i'm at a loss of word to tell you how much i enjoyed reading this part...

luv robina

Hey pragg wow dear both parts are awesome 😳👏 ..u are very Great writter dear ....👏

Divya ne toh kamaal kar diya yaar 😆👏 i really like her ..and her bachpana😆 ..cos main divya meh apne aap ko dekhti hoon ...sabar naam ki cheez nahi hai 😆😆

tumne part ke last meh toh jhatka hi de diya ki kastu ko goli lag gayi ....but thank god usse kuch nahi huya ...

shivani ko ab maloom toh ho hi gaya hai RoKa ke baare meh ...pragg main chahti hoon ki ek baar shivani aur robbie iss barre meh baat kare ...actully main dekhna chahti hoon ki shivani apne bhai ke realation ke baare meh kya sochti hai ..and robbie kessa feel karta hai ..i hope u understand ki main kya keh rahi hoon ....cos tumne alaana robbie ,shivani, divya ..inn charo ke beech rihta bahut aacha dikhaya hai ..i really want to know ki wo robbie ke saath hai yaa nahi ...

Alaana aur Ajay bhi mujhe RoKa ki tarah hi aache lagne lage hai 😳 ajay is so sweet and caring 😳..lekin robbie jitna nahi 😉😳😆..cos uski toh baat hi alag hai 😳

Pragg mujhe bahut aacha laga ki tumne neha ko iss part meh add kiya ..actully aggar pyar aur dosti easly ho jaaye toh kahi na kahi koi kammi lagti hai ...aur aggar mushkil ke saath ho toh dosti aur pyar aur bhi gehra ho jaata hai 😳

wow kastu ne toh kammal kar diya ...saaf saaf raunak ko samjha diya ki chakkar kya hai 😆 ab dekhna hai ki raunak ka reaction kya hoga 😆...usse toh kastu ne ussi ke ghar meh aa kar jhatka de diya 😆😆

Pragg kehne ki jaroorat nahi ki tum aachi writter ho 😳..kyu ki isme koi shakk nahi 😳...jali de next part likhna am waiting

Sorry dear for late reply ..and sorry for small and simple comment

Manpreet

Originally posted by: yummys

That's a relief Kasturi didn't get shot!! Otherwise the drama would come in.😆 Hey Yams!!! That is the precise reason I stopped Kasturi from getting hurt!! 😆 I just wanted to avoid all that drama and get to my next track!

Ajay is so sweet with Alaana, love where this is going!👏 Whatever is going on between them........won't stop now! 😆 😆

WoW! Kasturi is shocking at the end with her sudden reaction. I wonder what Raunak will say to this...🤔 Well, you will know soon....I am planning on posting the next part by tomorrow evening!

Amaazinngg Work!!🤗 Thanks a lot! 😳 Your encouragement helps me write!!! 🤗

-Yams

Originally posted by: nrasheed

hiya Pragzs... what an scintillating part that was phew... super hot!!!!!👏👏👏 Awww!! Thanks Robina for such wonderful comments!

and i have to ask why do you feel unmotivated??? well you know......sometimes you are surrounded with so much negativity that it gets difficult to remain positive! such a talented writer as yourself doesnt needs motivation...your an inspiration to yourself!!! you rock!!👍🏼 Thank you very much for cheering me up! 😊 Your writing moved me soo much to want to write my fanfic... so a huge thank youuu....for being such a moving writer.. and sharing Kaarvan for all of us... All I can say is that I am very flattered! 😊

OKay to the part:

Thank God kasturi got saved by her backpack.. lucky girl, what a relief to know that nothing happened to her.. Yep.......she was very lucky!!

i luved how you wrote out RObbie's fear and concern, his love for kasturi was sooo evident.. very touching part. i luved how he said mein to daar gaya tha...says it all That is true! Though Kasturi does not knw yet but fear of loosing loved ones is something very hard for him to bear! and so this dialog become even more poignant! ..so sweet how they hugged.. and now i know why i call you the Queen of romance cause you can take a single hug and make it into something soo deep and meaningful..the pen is a mighty tool!!!!👏👏 Thank you Robina..........you are too kind! But I am very glad that hug could touch you so much!

Shivaniiii is soo sweet how she didnt say anything.. good for her... she assess before she talks.. smart girl.. She is still trying to guage the situation and yes, she is very smart! 😳

Ajay's a really fine individual.. very level headed, and kind hearted, i simply love how you write about him...(for some reason i feel your very close to this personality.. am i wrong in thinking this?cause the way you describe him it seems as though he's real...😳) Oh wow!! That's a huge compliment! But I am afraid I don't derserve it..........in fact whatever qualities I don't possess, I try to reflect those personalities in the characters I write 😆

finally robbie is getting ready to introduce kas to his family.. mentally he's preparing himself.. right on!!! Yes........and that meeting will be something!

Ohhh the dress was lovely but i too thought since casual is sooo in now adays that alaana would be over dressed. but i luved how robbie turned his words around..to make alaanah feel special...what a sweet bro he is...i really luve the bonding that the saberwals have, i like the teasing, the laughs the cries everything!!!i feel very close to the family...well written. I really wante to create a very close-knit family as opposed to what gets shown in the serial! And so have tried hard to show them close and realistic! Glad you like them so much!

ohhh for me the party was awesomeeeee.. luved it from start to finish.. what a treat thanks pragzs... Thanks you Robina! 😳

Robbie's shirt and his comments on them are a blast to read!! where do you come up with these Pragzs😆 very witty...👏 I just love making up one-liners and sometimes when they don't fit in the storyline, I put them on Robbie's T-shirts!! 🤣 🤣 🤣

ohhh the way Ajay walked up to Alaana i could feel the butterflies in their stomachs..lol!! They are very attracted to each other! and that neha very infuriating but totally agree she gave Ajay that final push into bliss of love.. finally Ajay and Alaana know that their dastak of luve is calling Yep! They can't escape it now, they will have to answer that knock! 😉 😆 ....ohh and i luved the way ajay said its simply difficult to be beautiful !! my fav. line awesome... Is it?? Great!

and i luv these two bond. for me their their luv stoy has become my all time fav... i can just soo relate to ajay and alaana more... fantastic part please continue sooon.. Pragz...luved it ....i'm at a loss of word to tell you how much i enjoyed reading this part... Thank you very much Robina!! You have left me all encouraged and rearing to write the next part! 😃

luv robina

Originally posted by: Herman_4u

uffffff, keha se start karooo. that was like wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. 👏 simply superb, fantastic, mind blowing etc etc. Hermoo sweetheart........you really made my day! 😳 I was not feeling too good about my FF but you have perked my spirit up! Thank you! 🤗
the way u saved kasturi and hanged ur readers in the last part just cuz of dat stone was pretty smart. Glad you liked it!!! 😆 😆 I was actually worried that everyone was going to throw shoes at me for putting you all through that tension!!! 😆
wow, shivani knows about them, never saw this naughty side of her. 😆 but why isn't robbie worried. Why should he be worried?? He is not scared of telling the truth out! He just does not want to yet, but if push comes to shove, then he is very much prepared to tell the whole world about his love! alaana took so long to get ready, totally understood her situation man. 😆Why do you understand her situation? Are you a time-taker too??? 😆 😆 and watever happened at the party was like amazing, ppl do get jealous cuz they can't or don't know how to dress up, so they just make other feel bad in order to make themselve feel gud. Yes! I have experienced this first hand and in fact still do! i really iked that part too. and i love AA. did i tell u that i never imagined the ajay in serial for this ajay, i just can't imagine him, his hair style doesn't suit this ajay 😆 i imagine someone better than him, but his face is always like vague. dunno who to imagine Same here.......when I write this character, I do not imagine the serial Ajay, I imagine Vivaan Bhatena in this role!!! 😳 Vivaan is he who played Samraat Singh Shekawat in Choona Hai Aasmaan. He also plays the character of Shabd in the serial Maayka. 😊 so ppl r finally getting to know about roka. cool. bechchara ranauk. u know how kas held rob's hand and told ranauk about them, seems like i have seen that scene before, maybe in some movie. but it was shocking how all this happened so sudden. let's see wat happens next. Yes, people are getting to know, because I basically want to move the story to the next track. Next track will be revealed in the next 2 parts! 😃
love
harman 😛

Originally posted by: sahib29

Hey pragg wow dear both parts are awesome 😳👏 ..u are very Great writter dear ....👏 Mannu!!! Good to see you after a long time! 🤗Gosh...... July 29th kab aayegaa!

Divya ne toh kamaal kar diya yaar 😆👏 i really like her ..and her bachpana😆 ..cos main divya meh apne aap ko dekhti hoon ...sabar naam ki cheez nahi hai 😆😆Lekin saath saath woh bahut diler bhi hai 😳

tumne part ke last meh toh jhatka hi de diya ki kastu ko goli lag gayi ....but thank god usse kuch nahi huya ...Nah.........usse kuch nahi hone doongi! Robbie ki khatir! 😆 😆

shivani ko ab maloom toh ho hi gaya hai RoKa ke baare meh ...pragg main chahti hoon ki ek baar shivani aur robbie iss barre meh baat kare ...actully main dekhna chahti hoon ki shivani apne bhai ke realation ke baare meh kya sochti hai ..and robbie kessa feel karta hai ..i hope u understand ki main kya keh rahi hoon ....cos tumne alaana robbie ,shivani, divya ..inn charo ke beech rihta bahut aacha dikhaya hai ..i really want to know ki wo robbie ke saath hai yaa nahi ...Mannu, ek Shivani hi nahi, mei har behen kaa reaction likhne waali hun jab unn sabko yeh pataa chalegaa ke Robbie aur Kasturi ka rishta kya hai! Yeh sab scenes next 2-3 parts mei aanewaale hai! Tum padhna zaroor!

Alaana aur Ajay bhi mujhe RoKa ki tarah hi aache lagne lage hai 😳 ajay is so sweet and caring 😳..lekin robbie jitna nahi 😉😳😆..cos uski toh baat hi alag hai 😳Sahi kahaa! Mere liye bhi Robbie seh badhkar aur koi character nahi hai! He is the ultimate!!! 😆

Pragg mujhe bahut aacha laga ki tumne neha ko iss part meh add kiya ..actully aggar pyar aur dosti easly ho jaaye toh kahi na kahi koi kammi lagti hai ...aur aggar mushkil ke saath ho toh dosti aur pyar aur bhi gehra ho jaata hai 😳 Mannu.........tum hamesha badi hi gehri baat karti ho aur yeh baat bhi tumhaari kitni sacchi hai!!! 👏 👏 👏

wow kastu ne toh kammal kar diya ...saaf saaf raunak ko samjha diya ki chakkar kya hai 😆 ab dekhna hai ki raunak ka reaction kya hoga 😆...usse toh kastu ne ussi ke ghar meh aa kar jhatka de diya 😆😆 Raunak ko bataane ka waqt aa gayaa tha! Kasturi usse aur badhaava nahi denaa chahti thi!

Pragg kehne ki jaroorat nahi ki tum aachi writter ho 😳..kyu ki isme koi shakk nahi 😳...jali de next part likhna am waiting Thank you very muc Mannu! Jo tu samay nikaal kar aayi FF padhne! 😳 🤗

Sorry dear for late reply ..and sorry for small and simple comment Itne badhiya comments ko tu kis muh seh simple keh sakti hai??? 😡 Looking forward for more of these 'simple' comments! 😃

Manpreet

Pragz dii the part was FANTASTICCCC👏

Kasturi got saved by her backpack😲 what a relief 😆

The most thing i like in this part is Robbie😍 i love the way you show Robbie's concern for Kasturi☺️

Their hug😍☺️

Shivani saw them 😲but why she didnt ask from them😕 hmmm 🤔maybe she dont like Kasturi as her friend😉 i think she want Kasturi as her bhabi😉😆

cmon Robbie 😉you gotta introduce Kasturi to your chacha and chachi😉😆

the dress is lovely dii😳 its so pretty😳

When Robbie sudenly changed his words that was amzing dii 🤣he really care for his loved ones😳

the party was rocking dii😉

AA bits were rocking😉 i just love it😉 but Neha spoil it😡 but because of her AA spent some time alone😆

looking forward to the next part😃

Congratulations dii🥳 you cross 100 pages

you are a fab writer👏 i really like your writing style 😳and cliff hangers lol😆 you make your readers wait huh 😉thats bad 😆but thats why we called suspence😉 lolz😆 i like everything about you dii😳