Kaarvan - AA & RK romance...pg 92 & 93 - Page 6

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ufff Awesome yarr 👏 👏 u came up with amazing writting skills..now i m greedy can't wait for chawla's
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Jima........I am very happy to note you liked it!!! 😃 Oh so, you like him in red, huh? yes he is not Devika's own son, but they share an awesome mother-son relationship! Earrings....No he does not wear any, nor does he wear all those chains! But I can get him to, if you all want!! 😉 😆

Jaanu.....HA HA.. Miss.Jaanu...both those addresses will not be shared with Robbie deewanis......nahi toh tum uskoh kaam kahaan karne doge??? 😉 😆
Thanks a lot for liking it so much.........and you all are comparing me with JK rowling and Rohinton Mistry.....I don't think I deserve so much credit!! But I am happy to satisfy you all with my effort. 😊

Hey Krishi...... I was worried that you might call all this as 'fillers'!!! 😡 😆 😆 Because I don't think they are. It is crucial to establish the base before moving forward. And anyway after a while it will only be RK throughout!! Robbie's details will be established in the next part.
Next part will also continue with describing Robbie. And yes I totally think of him as an emperor, hence the title!! 😆

Krishi, 2 things I can assure you about my FF are...1) It will be realisitc 2) There will be no loose ends!
The rest of the things such as romance, passion, suspense, sentiments......I can't say anything about them, I will have t just see how it plays out! 😛


Robina.........no need for any apologizing.....Please read at your convenience! 😃
I understand what you mean when you say you miss her ruthlessness! But I figured the serial anyways gives us a good dose of that, so I will give it a little rest in my FF! 😆 😆 And yes the girls are ambitious and want to do something in life!!! Kasturi and family will be coming up soon....Thanks for the support, Robina!!! 😊


Kay.....he sure did!!! Yes, Robbie not being Devika's son must have been a little shocking! Thanks for liking it.......and RK will meet soon! 😃


Shara : Atleast this way, I can make you visit the Kasturi section again!!! 😆 And I appreciate that honest statement you made! Yes, this FF is a little better planned than the previous one. The previous one, I was using the same story as the one in the serial and so I felt constrained at some places, but this story is completely mine and so I feel more in control!!! 😃


Pooja : I love them too! They seem so real and strong! Robbie is not exactly adopted.....but yes that will play out importantly in one occassion.....that's all I can say for now! 😆 The Chawlas will be introduced in a couple of chapters! Nah..........Kasturi won't be a rockstar...well maybe an aspiring one! 😆


Wajiha : I am soooo glad you liked it....Chawlas will come up soon enough. 😃


Friends........next part.....will be up by Monday evening. I am going out of town this weekend. I will be back only on Monday afternoon. Sorry for the delay!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
robbie is not their own son he is adopted 😲 but he is so caring 😳
my thought is just lyk mike00rules 😆
dnt worry hun take ur tym 😳 i wait 4 ur nxt part 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ohhoo Prags ...amazing combo of recollection and imagination,keep it up..ur speculation was damn cool 👏so that was a very neat post, For a moment I thought it was written by someone of that age. Pretty good idea Robbie as a adopted son 😉i m Amazed at the time you take out for each this post and they all are written well so far i love ur style of writing loved it and Mughliyea language ke too pochho mat 😆 ... but what is this yar wait till monday for chawla's 😕 (kidding)

chaloo have fun and enjoy ur trip have a nice and safe journey 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
Wow Pragz di our Robbie is so loving, caring cutie pie 😳 . And ye kya di he is not their son . U r giving shocks frm the beginning 😆 .And why that man called him Ranbir and this was Robbie's real name in ur 1st FF too na 😕.
Waiting for Kastu entry 😉
Rosy
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
Excellent Ppppppp, i loved the way u introduced robbie's character. so ordinary and yet so special with his great personality. just loved all this family saga. he's totally different than the rockstar robbie. and the reason i said that u kept the audience hanging was that we were luking forward for robbie's introduction. 😉

love
harman 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Pragggg ...kya kahu re ..main toh shock hoon ...reason yee hai ki robbie itna brilliant .and innocent hai 😆😆...i love him yaar ...😳..tumne serial se bikul diffrent robbie ka intro. diya hai 😳

and devika bhi bahut hi caring mom hai 😳..bahut aachi family dikhayi hai tumne ...sab ek saath mil kar rehte hai 😳..cos serial meh toh maine ek din bhi puri family ko nahi dekha 😆

and yee kya robbie devika aur puru ka beta nahi hai ??😲...kiska Beta hai wo ??...kahi chawlas meh toh kisi ka nahi ...nahi toh kasturi aur robbie ..bhai behen ban jaayenge 🤣🤣...just kidding 😆

Very beautifulll partttt dear 🤗..love u dear 😳

tu arraam se ghumne jaa ..hum wait karenge tumhara 😳...jaldi aate hi part post karnaaaaaaaaaaa😛

Manpreet

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Mani......No, he is not their son! But he loves them like his own!

Wajiha.......Thanks a lot dear! 😊 I am very happy that you liked my style. Chawlas will have to wait another chapter.......phir they will be introduced!

Rosy......In the FF, Robbie's full name is Ranbir. Mr.Sharma does not like to cut short names and hence he calls him by his full name! Me too........don't like short cut names, hence gave him a full-feldged name!!! 😆

Harman.........I am very glad that you liked his intro!! I really wanted it to be very touching and I am glad it worked out!!! 😃

Mannu..........sahi kahaa!!! Serial mei un sabko kabhi mil-julke nahi dekha!!! 😆 😆 Woh kasar , mei FF mei poori kar deti hun!

Thanks for the wishes......I will be back soon enough and post the next part! 😃
Edited by pragalbha - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Pragalbha, if the creatives copy your 'Ranbir' idea too, then I'm going to be laughing my head off 🤣 😆. Anyways, have fun on your trip.. wherever you're going 😊. We'll all be waiting anxiously for the next part on Monday 😃.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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prags nice part..robbie intro was awsome..jahapanna..
in serial they never get gother to eat lunch or dinner..atleast all villan are good in your FF..

have a nice trip..see you monday or thuesday..for both FF..

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