Kaarvan - AA & RK romance...pg 92 & 93 - Page 4

OMG!!! Pragz Congrats you have become a IF -dazzler! 👏 👏 👏 Keep it up! 😉 😆

Yeah! first part is here! 👏 Too short yaar...where is my Robbie dear?? 😳 OK let me first tell you that I am finding it really difficult to accept these personalities of Devika, or Alaana 😆 ..,,,I think it will take some time! devika..so sweet mom! 😳 I could easily imagine puru helping around 😆 ..but Devika doing rotis 😛 😆

I have a few questions...so is Robbie just a student? No rockstar 😭 😆 ...one very important thing..is Raunak there? 😉 😆 Please Pragz clear my doubts ...am really waiting to see how Robbie will be!! 😍

PS: Pragz I have a request...I was just reading kashmakash again 😳 (only the romantic parts 😉 )...can you please put the index no. of parts in your first post of kashmakash! Pleeaassee!

prags..nice start..i came to see if you post or not..there you posted..i love to read this FF..
waiting for next part

Congrats Pragalbha!! You became an IF-dazzler!!!😳 😳 👍🏼

You have a wonderful start to the story👏 👏 👏 .. a nice calm sunday afternoon... OMG this Devika and Alaana actually cook??!?! 😲.. I can't imagine that 😆 ..I can only imagine Nandu doing the cooking but.. I guess I'll get used to this middle class Devika soon 😃.

The part where Divya and Alaana fight is hilarious!! 😆 😆 ..This time I can imagine Devika trying to seperate them 😆...& our Puru.. I'm so proud of him😊.. he's actually helping out his family instead of spending time with his wine!!! 😆 Can't wait for Robbie to come!! 😳 Will he still have his attitude😎 or will he be like our sanskari Kasturi in the show??! 😆 It would be cool if RK swap personalities for once 😊.

A very very good starting dii...Loved it...Devu cooking🤣 that made me crack..Juz wonderfull and You switched that Bajaj scooter nah😉i just wonder if I can imagine Puru and Devu in a bajaj sccoter going to the fish market.🤣🤣🤣And dii where is Shivani?Waiting for Ro to enter the story..You write really so well di.The way you bring out small details are so beautiful😃 OK hanging on to read the next part...😃

jaanu

Great start Pragz di 👏 . Mein phir se aapki fan ban gayi hun 😳 . Puru repairing Bajaj scooter reminded me of one eppy where JP was repairing his scooty yaad hai aapko 😆 .De is so nice and name chutki is so cool too .Devu math teacher my mom too is a maths teacher .Waiting for Ro's entry 😃
Rosy

Ohhh WAoo WAoo Prags 🤗 🤗 Excellent start 👏 yarr sorry for being so late actually i can't saw this post earlier but one thing i love to read this FF so all the very best 👍🏼 and can't wait for next the part but remmember Devika ke watt laga ne hai 😆 😆

Harman : Thanks dear! 😃 And you can't call this, leaving the audience hanging!! The story is just starting up, no suspense yet.. 😛 ...Next chapter, Robbie is introduced.

Kay : Yes Kay, its up! You got it exactly right Kay, its a normal and happy family....very different from the serial where the daughters disappear on their mother for years together and still she does not seem to care!!! 😆 😆

RK_fan : OMG.....I have become IF-Dazzler!!!! 😃 Thanks for noticing that. 🤗 Actually RK, in the first few chapters I am trying to build the story, hence the parts might be short. They might get bigger as we move on!
And that was exactly my fear that trying to visualize a normal Sabharwal family is gonna be difficult!!! In fact there are more suprises on way!! 😃
Yes Robbie is a student........he ain't a rockstar....atleast not yet! 😆 And yes Raunak is there!!
And I will create an index for Kashmakash.....thanks for the suggestion!

aksn : Good to see you here!!! Yes I just started off today! 😃

Pooja : Thanks, sweety!!! It is tough to visualize middle class Devika but it is not too tough either!! I was trying to imagine her in that avatar while writing!
Oh in this FF, Puru is also gonna be waaaaaaaayyyyyyyy different!!! 😃

Jaanu : Did you like the Bajaj scooter idea?? 😆 Shivani is very much present......she is a book-worm in this FF. She will be introduced in the next chapter! 😊

Rosy : Thanks a lot dear! Devika is a really intelligent lady and so I could not make her anything but a Math teacher!! 😃 Yes, I remember that JP scene......JP is gonna be very different here!!!! 😆


Jima : Thanks a lot for all those kind words!!! Now to clarify the doubts......Devika teaches high school students....10th, 11th adn 12th grades. And this is again a punjabi family. And her attire mostly comprises of salwars....with dupatta and sarees! 😃 Thanks for that tip, I will describe their attire too from now on.


Wajiha : Thanks dear! I am sure I need that luck!! Devika ki waat nahi lagegi iss FF mie, Kasturi ki waat lagegi.....and that too a little later!!!! 😆


All.....next part will be up by tomorrow morning!

Pragggggggggggg Thankuuuuuu verymuch ...kyu ..ki tumne mere aur kishu ke kehne par FF start ki 🤗...really i have no words ki kesse tumhe thanks kahu ...cos thanks word toh kuch bhi nahi ..kash tumhe mil pati toh tum apne aap meri eyes meh dekhti ki main kistni khush hoon aaj 😃...love u dear ...love u verymuch 🤗

Coming to part ..verywell written ...aur wesse bhi tum sabdo(Words) ki muhtaaj nahi ...😳..sabdo ki tarif se kahi upper ho tum 😳...i love ur writing style ..har cheez ko itna aacha explain karti ho ..ki kabhi mujhe nahi laga ki main read kar rahi hoon ...lagta hai ki jo likha hai wo dekh rahi hoon 😳

am shock😲...ki devika aur rotiiiisss🤣🤣🤣....Robina where are u dear? ..tumhari devika ne roti banani seekh li 🤣🤣....pragg aacha hai humhe usko ek middle class meh dekhne ka bhi mauka mila ..😆..nahi toh sara waqt status ko roti rehti hai 😆...aur alana ,shivani ,and divya,Puru ..bahut aacha parichye diya hai tumne 😃 ..dekhe hai humhara robbie kessa hota hai 😳..jaldi kar wait nahi hotaaaaaaaaaaaaaa😆😆

Manpreet

@ prags Oyeee agar kasturi ke watt lagee naa too 😡 mai nai tumhare wat laganee hai 😆 but anyways Roti ka idea brilliant hai 😃 or woh bhee Devika ...all thanks to u finally devika ko kam mil he gyea 😉

very well written 👏 ur an awesome writer 😉 ur writing style is mindblowing 👏 😳
devika nd rotis 😲 omg all characters r opposite 😕 😆 i wonder how robbie will b 🤔 is he spoil brat 😆 or sedha sadha ladka 😆 lol is raunak is in story 😆