Kaarvan - AA & RK romance...pg 92 & 93 - Page 28

OFC.......Got it!!! 😆 Yep Kasturi will do a lot to get into the groove.....his groove!!

@pragalbha you had me going..... i thought ajay would foresure notice robbie's staring at his sis... and a huge brawl of words would have been exchanged, but this ajay is so preoccupied with thinking what is it that makes robbie special???😆 and i totally understand for some people are born with an natural inate charisma... and that makes them stand out over the rest, not just intellect its an aura of oneself that they carry... so i totally understood that and you've done a good job brining robbie's charisma to the forefront...👏

Uff yeah Anand, is very infuriating, i totally hate people who cant handle their liquore in take for then it becomes not just their problem but everyone's around them🤢 which you showed us later on. and i liked that...for anand just made an ass out of himself.. which is what usually happens..😡

you mentioned that kasturi involuntarily shivers, that line gave me goose bumps, very deep feelings kas has for robbie, she's just not mentally aware of it.. her body though is... very sly pragalbha..😃

I have to tell you i'm a bit dissappointed in Katuri's attitude..for i was at my kids school volunteering and the principle came on the PA system and talked about the kids have alot and that though having alot of stuff is your right, given to you by your parents, but with every right comes a huge responsibilty.. and i was like i wish the world of HAVES would realize this.. and i know your kasturi will change and it will be robbie who will show her the way, cant wait to see how you bring that metamorphisis..waiting for it....

I think i really like how you didnt over do roka's first offically meeting.. it was done with just the right amount of attitude, and feelings.. over all fantastic job looking forward to the next part., you've said a couple of days... will hold you to it...

thanks robina

Robina....I agree, people who have no control with liquor in them should not do it in public!!!
Kasturi is attracted to him at a deeper level then she knows....in fact that is why she does not know it yet!

Kasturi is exhibiting the attitude she has always seen around her. All her friends are rich and many of them spoilt and so she does not know a different world! But now she will know......slowly but surely and she will the biggest lesson of her young life!!

I absolutely loved your comments and am so thankful for having such wonderful readers as you all.....helps me to stay motivated!!! 😃

Part 11 and Part 12:

Pppp, I think these parts were more like putting a base for future RK track So it was like fillers😆.. I know u ll come behind me to hit me but kyaa yaar, u made RK see only for few scenes😆😆

Liked Robbie's speech abt how one shud take failure. Y do I feel tat Robbie will join singhania company at the end and will get ready to leave to s'pore😉😆😆

Ajay is becoming a khadooos day by day but Iam sure he will turn sweet once he comes to know tat alaana is Robbie's sis😆😆

I dont know why but kuch mazaa nahin aaya yaar reading abt RK in the last part.... Something was amiss and I felt ki it didnt come out as expected.... Or may be Iam not in the right mood to read and enjoy it😆😆

But I loooveed the last line of Robbie tat she is not of his type. Ur robbie is one heck of a practical guy and no fantasies for him👏😆😆

Next part is after few days??? Par kab?? Woh tho bataa de, mann halka hojaayegaaa😆

Krishi

nice part..kasturi really attrack him..he so handsome in clean shave..robbie already deciside she's not her type..let see how he broke this word.ajay don't like robbie at all..the way ajay told robbie about resume means he might get job chawala..but i am sure later he sure gonna join ronak..lets where they meet again..


waiting for next part..

Hey Krishi.......Kahin tu Bhagya Rekha kaa last part padhke toh yahaan nahi aayi thi na??? 🤣

Sorry that it did not satisfy you but if you were expecting passion between them right from the first proper meeting then it would be very unrealistic!!! And you are right, this is like a base but the base always has to be strong. I want them to fall in love, really fall in love and not just have an infatuation for each other!!!! 😃
By the time I am done with this FF I pomise you will absolutely love it!!! I have planned a lot between them! But I do appreciate your honest comments! 😃


Payal.....next part will give some insight into what is going to happen with Robbie's career....I will post probably by Tuesday night. 😃

i lyk dere eye-look sesions it was vry well described pragz 👏 👏 👏 nd wooooo both r attracting towards eachother fast 😆 i think robbie never heard "opposite attractions" 😆 well he need 2 realise soon dat he is in love wid kas 😳 cuz i noe dis attitude kas wont confess her love 4 robbie 🤢 he has 2 do this as allways 😆 continue soon dii 😃

Hey Prag just caught up with the new part 😃

So Robbies decided Kas is not his type........Kasturi will do the running around then? 😉 Love it! 😆 😛

Yep its easier to imagine Kasturi in western dress now after watching SA on SBS 😃

I cracked up at the part where Robbie looks down at Kasturis boots 😆 😆 😆

Waiting for next part! 😃

Kay

Prag. ...wow!!....robbie can't take his eyes off of her when she's on the dance floor?...aww....n then he turns arnd but she keeps luking at him.... 😳 ....sooo chweet...... 👏 👏 ...wonderful part!.....

like I said...ur a brilllliant writer...n wish the creatives wld lear frm u.... 😭

but robbie decides she's not his type...awww...well im guessing u hv sumthin in mind abt dat...so won't question it....n by reading into her character a bit...at first glance they do seem to be yin n yang...but then opposites do attract rite!

cont. soooooon.... 😃

alright, Ppppppppp di, here's my comment

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, first of all, i really like Ajay as a brother, i mean he's always there for kasturi, really caring brother. made me adore his character too. kasturi ke character per koi reham kar, ab tum usse itna sharabi bi bana rahi hoo 😆 i don't know why, i just don't like the idea of people consuming alcohol even it's a beer. so, i was quiet shocked to see roka doing it. kasturi's slap was superb. can understand wat robbie must be going through. how can he see the girl he likes dancing soo close with other guys and having completely different opinions and attitude towards life and people. and not just only him but also kasturi, cuz they both are not each other's TYPE. yaar tum ff writer Robbie ko aaj kal itna smart kyun bana rahe ho, i mean even robina did the same. but i really liked that idea of making robbie the smartest guy. update the next part wenever u have time Pppp di.🤗

love
Harman 😛