Kaarvan - AA & RK romance...pg 92 & 93 - Page 30

pragz hmm thanks for the part 😳

once again a good part.
hehe loved the kaushalya and robbie part 😆
kaushalya has met her match and damad 😉

village belle is back 😆
robina thanks for whatever deal you made for getting it back
i was also sad when it broke 😭 😭

me waiting for the next part 😉 will robbie become kasturi's dance partner 😍

Heyy Pppp😃

Tat was sooooooooooooooooooo gud yaaar.... Cant believe it ki the part ended... I felt like reading without a stop but the part seemed short becos it was tat interesting. I loooooovvved the intro of Kaushi and also the interview Qs. Aaaaarrgggghhh, this Ajay is such a selfish idiotic fool and he picked kartik???? Aaaaarrhhh, Did u take this Kartik namoona from Santaan serial???😆😆 I sooooo hate him in tat serial tooooo😆

So sad, Robbie didnt get job..... I wonder wat u have in store for us now😃 Please write soooooooooooooooooooooooooon😳

Krishi

gr8 part pragz 👏 👏 lv da last scene 😳 whn robbie came 2 meet kas nd give her dat statue which he broke 😳 i mean he did not but he accideantly broke it 😆 so sweet of him 😳
kasturi is falling 4 him yay 😆
kaush is impressed wiv robbie 😉 nd im wiv her 😉 😆 but not aja he is a jerk 😡 😡
continue soon dii 😳

wow...praz...jus finished reading ur part!....if I was the interviewer I wld hv gived Robbie the job rite there...n a hug! 😳 .....

gud kaush liked him....otherwise that wld b a problem frm the start...but Ajay!...ohhh no fair...u shld keep ur personal feelings aside and give the job 2 da person who really deserves it...which is Rob!

ohhh...yay! the statue is back!...i luved the way u described it the first time...jus cld imagine it....but was really sad when it broke...but now its back...woohoo!

pragz...wondeful writing like always...par yeh kya yaar...no updates till sunday??? 😕 😭 😭 .....how will i wait dat loooong??....chola ab jaldi se sunday ko update karna.....m waiiiiting!

awsome part.. kaushlaya intro was good..her and robbie convo also good..better than devika in real show..kasturi really like robbie..when she show him like lighting up..why ajay hired kartik not robbie..
robbie try to make up with kasturi gave look like village bella..
robbie gonna kasturi dancepartner..
waiting for next part..

payal

Hey Humaira.......see him everywhere 😆 😆 That's a good idea that I might implement 😉 😆
He surely did a great job of impressing Devika but apparently Ajay is not impressed yet!! Thanks for the wonderful comments 😊

Shara.......Damaad 😆 😆 I guess that's true though she does not know it yet!! 😆 😆 😆
Dance partner......not really,...Robbie does not like to dance, but there is an angle to it 😆 😆 😆

Krishi......you liked it??? 😲 Oh God.....I am soo happy!!!!!! 😃 Because I did not expect you to like it that much since it did not have the requisite dose of RK romance! 😆 😆
Ajay cannot shake off his dislike for Robbie that is the problem!!! And yes Kartik is from Santaan 😆 😆
Good stuff is in store for you dear.....good stuff!!!! 😆

Jima........thanks for the great comments!!! Actually the part after the next, I will finally talk about Robbie's parents! The next part is mostly RK 😃 I am very happy that all of you liked the idea of Robbie gifting the statue to Kasturi!!

Mani..........Yes she is falling for him and after this act of Robbie, she is surely there! Ajay..as of now seems like jerk, aage dekhna hoga!!! Thanks for liking it dear!

stars....... 😆 😆 If I was there, he would not even have to interview for me......aise hi job de deti........sorry for the delay but I am sure sabar ka phal meetha hoga! You will like that part! 😃


Thanks Payal! Lekin Robbie dance partner nahi banegaa as such, though there is an angle to it! Lekin milnaa-julnaa hoga....bahut saara 😉 😆

Hiya Pragalbha, okay my detailed comments, wow i felt the heat of the interview.. that was some really dynamic questions..that kaushalya asked robbie.. Yikes shes totally a powerhouse lady, and i believe you mentioned you fashioned after the Ishitah's mom in Karam Apna Apna...and i really liked her in that soap... very dignifed lady...👏

I like Ajay in this fanfic, he's seems to know his shortcomings and works within his parameteres without, outright antagonising robbie.. in a way he's a very realistic character... if i may say soo...

Robbie, i thought him to be a very dignifed younge man, who knows he damn good and will reach the pinnicle of success... just a matter of time.. and i've known a couple of people like that in my life... so i totally luv how he's being protrayed... and i also know that in these types of people's life sometime people try to hold them back thinking its a little too much too early.. but time can not be denied to them.. and so will happen with robbie(or so i'm thinking..Do tell me if im wayyyy off here...)

wooooww finally the statue is left, you know what i luv right now is that the statue in both are fanfics are bringing these 2 together.. i luv it.!!!!!😳 aur yeah kya have to wait till sunday... oohh well all good things....come at a price..😃 great part and really felt kasturi's tarap.. for robbie... especially with the drama/theater being closed all week... so they only get to meet twice a week....how sad i feel for you kasturi...how fustrating....but absence makes the heart grow fonder...😉

great part.. look forward to the next.. have a great weeek...

robina

Pragz : yup i know kaushalya does not know and that is the fun right 😆 😉

about angle 😆 😉 i am waiting for it 😍

after long time i read analysis from you guys
and hehe loved it when you still sounded optimistic 😆
you still have faith in robbie and k-team 😆

i have lost faith 😭 😭 and now depend only on your FF for Roka 😳

Hey Pragg very nice part dear ..aur bahut hi intresting tha 😳..

How sad robbie ko job nahi mila 😕..yee ajay bhi na 😡..lekin apne aap line par aa jaayega ..jab maloom huya ki alaana robbie ki sister hai 😉😆...and kaushi aur robbie ki convo. bahut aachi lagi ..and she is impressed 😉..actully robbie hai hi itna pyara 😳😆

lekin jab robbie ko maloom hoga ki usse job nahi mila..tab usse kitna dukh hoga 😭

so kastu robbie ko like karne lagi 😉..pragg please yaar robbie usse jaldi na pyar karne lage 😆...abhi toh bahut picche bhagana hai 😉..serial ka badla FF meh lena hai 😉😆

bahut aacha part likha hai ...👏Dear u are very talented 🤗..touchwood nazar na lage 😳

So ab next part kab likh rahi hai ??😛

Yaar aaj kal Busy hoon isliye late read kar rahi hoon .nahi toh janti hai na ki mujhe kitna wait rehta hai 😳

Manpreet

Originally posted by: sahib29

so kastu robbie ko like karne lagi 😉..pragg please yaar robbie usse jaldi na pyar karne lage 😆...abhi toh bahut picche bhagana hai 😉..serial ka badla FF meh lena hai 😉😆

mannu yeah mujhe bahut achha laga "serial ka badla FF meh lena hai"🤣🤣🤣