~When Silence Speaks~ *Wrong fall* pg34 - Page 20

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Niki...jus read thru ur whole ff....wow...ur an amazing writer!....do love the switch-ups u did wit names n stuff...its fresh!

Do update soon...will b waiting! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
nikki glad to see you back.. 😃

of course very happy you are updating the fanfic.. 😃

read it from the beginning once more and the new parts fantastic and well penned down.. 👏 👏 👏 ..

cant wait to read if adi will get jealous on seeing kas hugging abhishek... 😉

you doing great keep it up... 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

Nikkiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

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bas..jaldi jaldi next part likho yaar....Come onn pllllllsss becos i wanna see who pays the bill😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
Ommmgggggg!!! Soooooo many compliments and such enthusiastic responses!! My PM box is flooding lol!!
First of all I want to give a huuuuuuuuuuuuge thank you to all my readers, it's your encouragement and such uplifting thoughts that keeps me wanting to come back and write more for you. I promise the next part will be up soon (Now however I must clean my room first- as it is a TIP coz my mum will *kill* me otherwise. And I seriously don't want that happening just yet! lol)

Now my individual replies to all you luuurrvveeely people! 😛 ....

qau24: Thanks hun! I'm so glad you liked it. I just hope you'll find the next part just as good.

nehagupta_9: thanks alot hunnie!! 😃 I feel sorry for Kasturi too, I just hope something good will happen to her! 😭 😛

angelic shaz: lol! You joka I loved your comment! 😛 Thanks a looot for the compliments. I hope Adi gets jealous too... it's really quite hard to read him sometimes... is all I shall at this point! 😛

Jk: lolollolollololololol you joka!! Your posts ALWAYS crack me up. Achcha darls I'm sooooo sorry (Holds both ears) Maaf kardo na pretty pleeeeeease? 😳 I promise to update yaar! Pukka! 😛 (Aur haan! Read my pm btw! 😛)
and nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii little Pragati is *mine* 😈 😉 [:D/] 😛

bmp94: Thanks hun! Will do soon.xx

Shaguuuuuuuunnnnn!!! 😃 😃 😃 Thaaaan choooo hunnie! Hehehe I hope Adi gets jealous yaar! Hopefully he'll start showing some feelings! Heheh 🤗

Pallavi (livelygal!!): 😃 😃 Awwwwwwwwwwwww thanks alot babes!! You've made my day by saying that. Really you're blessed with such sweetness. And yes Kasturi has to face sooo many problems... but isn't there saying... 'every cloud has a silver lining'... 😛 😃

sweet_dreams22 (Priya!): Hey hun! Thanks alot babes! I will update soon. xxxx

starsmiles: Awww thanks hun! I'm so glad you like it. Heheh yea I wanted to do something different rather than stick to people you see in the soap! 😃

Khyatee (My girl with the beauuuutiful name!) 🤗 I haven't spoken to you in aaaaaages!!! 😃 Mwah! How are you?!!! Awwww hun thanks so much once again for reading my fan fic and liking it!! 😃 I'll update soon promise! 😃

GAPS!: Hey babes! How're you doing?! 😃 😃 Heheheh awww bless. thank you so much for the avation! 😃 😛 I promise to update soon and I just hope you'll like it just as much as you liked the others. I've seen your fan fic hun! Just haven't had the time to reply!! Keep it up darls you're doing a brilliant job! Need more writers like you! 🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
Righto Rightoooo! I'm back with my update! 😃 And without babbling on I shall begin...

FEELING LOVE


Set-back: Kasturi is in the arms of her fiance, why has he suddenly turned up at her college. What is he doing here? Let's hope he helps poor Kasturi
Kasturi, as she cried would not let go of Abhishek ji and he did nothing to push her away! Intead he held her and comforted her. 'My poor Kasturi... gone through too much' he thought to himself sadly caressing her head. Watching this, Adi clenched his fists! Right now all he wanted to do was punch that Captain in the face for a reason he did not understand why!
"Sssir..." she stammered through sobs. "Shhhh kuch mat kaho!" said Abhishek ji softly, still holding her tightly "It's ok! Everything will be fine! Main vaada kartha hoon" He continued. In an instance Kasturi had pulled apart, she felt a sudden burst of emotion... she felt a scream coming... "AARE KAISE TEEK HO JAYENGE?!!!!" she screeched. Strong emotions she had contained within her over the past few days came tumbling out of her... "KASIE??!!!!!" she screamed pulling on her hair. Abhishek ji stood back in shock and feeling sick. He could feel Kasturi's pain as if it was his own... that's when he realised he was in love... however, it wasn't only him who had this wierd feeling; Adi stared at Kasturi, his eyes full with worry... Adi shook himself... 'what the hell is happening to me'... he thought...
Shivani, Kritika and their gang stood there flabbergasted at Kasturi's outburst. Everyone in the vinicity who heard her had come to watch this drama scene unfolding. "AARE MAIN AAPSE KAISE BATAAO?!!!!! MUKTI IS DYING!!!! YOU HERE ME SHE'S DYINGGGGGGG!!!!"she screamed through tears. "AUR JAAN NA CHATHI HOON KI WORST BAAT KYA HAIN?!!! THERE'S NOTHING I CAN DO!!!!" she continued. "NOTHING!! SUNNA AAPNE?!! NOTHING" she screamed pouding on Abhishek ji's chest. Abhishek ji made to calm her down; "Kasturi..." he started towards her trying to get her in a hug, but she wouldn't have it. She pushed his arms away... "nahi sir!!!" she said dropping her voice. Adi took one step forward to where Kasturi was standing... seeing this Shivani glowered at him. She began to panick. 'OMG!' she thought to herself as she saw Adi's face. His expression was hard to read, however she knew deep down that something was changing in Adi's behaviour towards Kasturi... Indeed it was... all he wanted to do was hold Kasturi tightly in *his* own arms and stop her from crying... 'what the hell?!!' he thought to himself 'This is ridiculus!' he thought impatiently. 'This is waaay too ridiculous! What the hell am I beginning to think?'... He shook himself once again to clear his crrrrazy thoughts to focus on what was happening. 'So Mukti is dying! Woah! that's big trouble I guess' he thought with somewhat of compassion.
Kasturi once again had spoken... "Aur sir..." she had cried so much that now her eyes seemed to have swollen and no more tears were pouring down her face... instead her emotions of sadness had been replaced with anger and self disgust... She was tired... her whole body ached... her migrain had returned in full blow... she knew now nothing could possibly take it away... she had eaten or slept... there were bags underneath her bloodshot eyes... "I can't work!!" she said hysterically. Abhishek ji looked at her confused. "Haan!! I can't even work... kyunki the person I chose to work for doesn't even want me to work for him!!! Haan!" she continued in the same hysterical voice. "Do you want to know where I got the job?!" she asked him, with each word increasing in tone "ROBBIE SABBARAWAAL'S HOUSE!!! HAAN!!!! ROBBIE SABBARAWAAL!!" she screamed. Kritika and Shivani stood there shell-shocked. Kasturi had gained entry into their lives without their permission! This thought aggravated them so much that they wanted to strangle Kasturi then and there. However, judging Kasturi's condition they decided against it. Adi's heart skipped a beat! So she had been in our- my house all last night and he had not known!
"AUR DO YOU WANT TO KNOW WHAT HE DID TO ME?!!!" she screamed. Abhishek flinched. "HE MADE ME CHOOSE TO LEAVE MY JOB!!! AND FOR THAT I'LL NEVER FORGIVE HIM!!! KABHI NAHI!! DO YOU HEAR ME?!! I SWEAR TO GOD! BECAUSE OF HIM I CAN'T SAVE MUKTI!!!" she screeched, pulling on Abhishek ji's collar and falling against his chest crying.
Adi felt sick, seeing Kasturi like that. He wanted to do anything to help her...
As Kasturi cried, the onlookers stared at her in silence. Nothing could be heard apart from Kasturis' sobs... they all pitied her. Suddenly she stopped. She pulled away from Abhishek ji and slowly turned to where Adi was standing. There eyes locked... his eyes were full of sympathy... her eyes however were full of malice...
"Tum!!" she spat. "Tumhara vajese yeh SAB hua!!" she continued, her voice full of venom. "If it wasn't for you, I wouldn't be ashamed of my life right now! I had to start work because of you!" she continued... suddenly her eyes rolled back... the pain of her migrain had taken its toll... before she knew it she had blacked out...
She fell... Adi grabbed for her before she hit the ground... 'Oh no...' thought Adi panicking. Abhishek ji ran towards his fiance... grasped Kasturi out of Adi's arms into his own. "Don't you DARE touch my fiance! I'm here I can handle her myself!" he growled at Adi. Adi stood back without protesting. Adi had felt the most wonderful sensation of holding Kasturi, warmth had spread from the point of contact of his fingers right down to the very tip of his toe... he wanted to hold her once more... but he knew that would never happen again... (Seeing all this Shivani clenched her fists and stormed off with Kritika following closely behind her)
Abhishek ji turned from Adi and lifted Kasturi up carrying her away from this cursed college to his car. He was now worried for her health. She looked really bad.

In the stationary car (infront of college gates) Abhishek ji is trying revive Kasturi... She's unconcious... will she wake up or will she also end up in hospital herself? Who is going to help Kasturi..
"Driver, paani le kar aa! Kasturi has fainted. She needs aid immediately!" Abhishek ji barked at his driver. "Ji saab" her replied and ran off to find some water. "Kasturi?!" she said shaking her face softly. "Ei Kasturi?! get up na" he continued. Just then the driver arrived with a glass of water. Taking the glass Abhishek ji sprinkled some water on her face waking Kasturi up. "Mmmmmm huh?" she moaned. Realising where she was she sat up in a flash "Oh my God main kahan hoon?" she asked. "You're with me, in my car Kasturi, you fainted!" replied Abhishek ji. Kasturi looked around disgruntled. Her migrain still hadn't subsided. "Kasturi, I think you should..." but before he could finish his sentence... "Mukti!" she whispered... She had to save her... without wasting time any further she had gotten out of the car and broken into a run. "KASTURI!!" yelled Abhishek ji after her, but it was too late she had already disappeared out of sight.
Kasturi ran as fast as her legs could carry her. It was almost afternoon and she still hadn't arranged any form of money.
She reached the entrance and caught her breath before she entered the hospital to talk to the doctor. She only waited a few seconds and rushed in. She found the doctor who treated Mukti in the corridor and ran up to him "Doctor saab! Doctor saab!" she called hurriedly. Realising it was Kasturi the Doctor smiled! "Aah, Kasturi! Thank you so much for arranging the money in such a short space of time! We've carried out the operation! And it went perfectly fine!" he said happily. Kasturi stood there gobsmacked and so confused. "Doctor yeh aap kya kehra hain?! I didn't arrange any money!" she replied, confusion etched upon her face. "What?!" asked the Doctor now just as confused. "Sach main Doctor saab! I didn't do anything!" she replied. The doctor shrugged "well you have Baghwaan looking over you! Coz He sent you an angel to solve all your problems" he said and walked of leaving Kasturi with her confused thoughts. 'Who had paid for all those bills especially in such a short time?' she asked herself. Just then she heard her name "Kasturi! ... Kasturi?!" it was Abhishek ji. He had followed her all the way to the hospital. "Kya Kasturi!! Why had you run off like that!! I was so worried. You weren't even feeling well!!" He said in concern. He seemed to be out of breath, indicating that he had run too. Noticing that Kasturi was worried he asked if everything was ok. Kasturi shook her head. "Abhishek ji, someone has already paid for the bills!" she replied. "what?!" he asked astonished. "Haan!" she replied. "Bataa nahi, but whoever did that, I'm really grateful... but who could help me like this?!" she asked in question. "Hmmm... don't know Kasturi, But there is a way to find out!" he answered. "Chal mere saath!" he said taking Kasturi's hand and leading her to the cashier point. As Abhishek ji lead her to reception she felt calm and secured. She was beginning to feel happy for once since the past few days...
"Excuse me Miss?..." he asked from the lady at the counter. She looked up and said "yes?! May I help you?". "Ji eerm, can you tell us who actually paid the bills for Miss Mukti Deshmuk in ward I.C.U bed numer 3?!" he asked.
"uuurrrm, this information is private and I'm afraid I can't give you this information!" replied the lady. Before Abhishek ji could say anything, Kasturi had moved forward... "Dekhiye maam, Mukit meri behen hain! And I want to know who paid for the bills please!" she asked desperately. "Oh ok, fine, let me just check..." she said looking through the accounts she had handled earlier that day. She found the correct form and realised her lips had to be sealed! She said "I'm sorry lekin, whoever paid for the bills prefered to stay anonymous! Matlab they haven't written their names here." she lied.
"Kya?! Aise Kaise ho sakta hain! Lao mujhe in papers doh! I'll check!" said an impatient Abhishek ji. "NO sir! I'm afraid I can't do that! It's against hospital policy! And I'm telling you that is what's written here! Now can you please leave before I call security!" she said almost yelling.
Crestfallen Kasturi and Abhishek ji left the counter. 'Thank God! They left!' she thought breathing a sigh of relief. "I'm sorry Kasturi ji, lekin that person asked me NOT to tell you this information." said the counter lady to herself and went on with her work.
"She was lying!" said Abhishek ji who looked really annoyed. Kasturi nodded. "Haan, there was something she wasn't telling us! I wish I knew who it was!" she replied. He sighed, "Chalo lets go and see how Mukti is doing!" he suggested. Kasturi nodded in agreement and hand-in-hand they made their way to Mukti's room.

Set-back: Kasturi and Abhishek ji are just outside Mukti's room...
Abhishek ji made to open the door to Muktis' room when he realised Kasturi was a couple of feet behind him not making the effort to go in at all. Instead she was staring at him with utmost admiration and affection. "Kasturi?!" he questioned. "Kya hua?! Why are you staring at me like that?!" he asked her confused. Kasturi smiled. "Bas kuch nahi Abhishek. Just thinking ki tum kyun itne achche ho?" she asked him. He smiled at that. And for the first time she had said 'Abhishek' breaking all barriers of formality. He was extremely happy now... " Aarey Kasturi, you're my honewale patni! And I would do anything for you not to see you cry... Kasturi smiled. "You're too good Abhishek! I'm so glad to be marrying you. Promise me you'll never leave me!" she choked. Abhishek's face fell at the sight of her tears. "Aarey, Kasturi please! Don't cry!" he said wiping away her tears. "I promise! I'll never leave you! I'll be there for you in all your happiness and sadness! Samjoh it's an undying promise of a person in love!" he replied. Kasturi grinned through tears of happiness and hugged him. Just then, the hospital went dark. The power seemed to have failed. Kasturi and Abhishek pulled apart in surprise. People were panicking as they couldn't see where there were going and most of them were worried about their loved ones. Kasturi hoped that the emergency equipment had not been affected and only the lights had gone out. "Abhishek!" Kasturi called out. "Kasturi stay where you are! I'll go and find out what's happening teek hain?!!" he said, every word of his had started to fade, which meant he was already on his way to seek out the problem. Kasturi stood there in the dark all alone. A cold breeze blew across the whole length of the corridor, through the windows. It was now 8.00pm at night. She shivered; she was extremely tired. She wanted to see Mukti but her legs wouldn't allow her to go into the room. She couldn't find the door handle anyway. It was just too dark, so to stay on the safe side she just stood there, when someone bumped into her. Another gust of wind blew lifting her dupatta making it land over her face... "I'm sorry" said the deep male voice. Kasturi knew whose voice that was! She could recognise that anywhere... "Adi!" she whispered... Adi stood rooted to his place. Had he heard right?! His name recited by the girl... he used to or still did hate? Was it Kasturi standing there... he reached into his pocket and took out his cigerrete lighter... As Kasturi slowly brought her dupatta down from her face, she found herself staring back at the handsome guy infront of her...
...The little flame made her tired yet beautiful face glow in front of him... Her eyes widened as she realised it really indeed was Vikram Aditya Mehra...

And that's where I leave it once more!! I hope you enjoyed this. If you don't like any part of it, then please let me know I'll try and do better next time! 😭 😭 I promise! Love you all for reading it though! 🤗 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago

Chalo maaf kitta Well I had to after reading thise SUPERB update👏👏👏 Wonderful kaam once again👏👏👏 Your FF is the only thing worth reading about kasturi😆 Oh well make Adi torture her even more😡 okay maybe not😆 Well whatever the case just PLEASEEEEEEEEEE don't let him take any crap from that missy chawla😡 My Adi BETTER give her loadzzzzzzzz of attitude Even after all that love crap happens between the two of em he shud still be Mr. Attitude😎 Jhakaas😎😎😎

Update soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnn and when i say sooon I MEAN soon so dont make me take up my danda after ju😊

P.S Little Pragati is MINEEEEEEEE *Jk snatches away pragz frm Nikki and runs away wid her*😈

Edited by JK_5 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
nikki yes its been ages we have not spoken.. 😊

i'm fine and busy with studies. 😊

but very glad to see you back and for sure enjoying the fanfic..... 😃

read the last part and it was mindblowing.. 👏 👏 👏 ...

you very well described kasturi's state of mind and her emotional break up..screaming and pouring down her heart feelings about mukti dying..how she is helpless and she cant do anything...very touching scene...

now how to forget about adi and loved the way you described in the same scene how he too is having a change of heart hatred to love for kasturi..

love this bit when he catches her in his arms stopping her from falling next when abhishek took her away from him and wat he felt afterwards..a different feeling and wanting to hold her again in his arms..

very romantic and the end scene with the lighter in his hand ,kas dupatta falling from her face and both looking at each other..just wow nikki...too beautifully described.. 😳

this for you and very well penned down scenes both emotional /romantic...👏 👏 👏 .

cant wait for the next part cos our attitude guy vikram aditya is in love.. 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
Brilliant is the word 😳 I cud actually imagine the entire part, while reading it, its so beautifully expressed...........Wonderful yet addictive part yet again Nikki 👏

I simply love the way characters are not changed, they r still the way they were beginning Amazing part yet again 👏 **Feeling Love** Indeed with this fan fic 😳

PS: Is Prem entering anytime soon

Luv,

Shagun 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wow....Beautifully expressed and written....Even though it is the same old formula(spoilt guy falling for a goody-goody girl)....I still love it because it is set in a college background....PURRFECT.....by the way do u write any other fanfics? I would love to read your other works! 😊

Pls update ASAP! 😃
Edited by moon27 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
mujhe kuch kehne ki zaroorat hai kya..?????
you are a unrivalled genius...chalo..
ab fir ek lambi intezaar karna padega kya....???nahi yeh mujhse nahi hoga...plz update...i swear by god i have got addicted to ur FF!!!!

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