I wrote a fanfic too! QUESTION TO U ALL! - Page 10

Nav,

Just read the last 2 parts!!! Very good!!! Their pain was so real. But yes, it was a little difficult to understand the punjabi words, but no problemo, I can still get the gist of what you are trying to say, so its all good!!!!

Waiting for the next part.....

Nav...
thanku for making Robbie realize his love for Kasturi... 😳
continue soo..ill be waiting..!! 😛

that was wonderful Canadianaddict....keep it up 👏

Fari

eh pagal guess who got an account lol - actually i only got it because i wanted to go to this page and it said members only so i just made one up - btw fanfic is grrreatttt

as if i read it lol

Wow Nav
too good
love the last part
it has so much pain, but i could see the love that he has for her, i was imagining everything
i felt bad for robbie 😭
but it was great, continue soon 😊

Originally posted by: CanadianAddict

really i do that, lol.

i was writing this one with my cuzin and she kept changing it to punjabi words but its cool

ah it all sounds basically the same 😆

😆 well, i think there are a lot of Punjabi's here so they can understand it. and yeah it does sound the same.😆

nice part!!!waiting for next part..

As usual guys thanks for all the comments and taking the time to read (even thought I mix with Punjabi) appreciate u guys still reading THANKS <3333 Continuing on…

Part 18

THE NEXT MORNING INSIDE ROBBIE'S ROOM

Robbie: *looks outside standing on the balcony and thinking about his life, he seems to be dressed for work*

*Devika walks in and sees robbie dressed like this and seems a bit confused*

Devika: robbie…robbie *notices that he is lost in thought and walks away, but before walking away she notices his briefcase on the floor near him, she gets even more confused and goes into her room*

Devika: purushotam! Kahan ho tum???

Puru: devika? Kya hua??

Devika: yeh saab kya ho raha hai? I mean robbie ka sath kya ho raha hai??

Puru: kya?

Devika: oh purushotam don't act so confused…I mean robbie ka behaviour aaj kaal kitna ajeeb hai, na woh teek thara sa kaatha hai (doesn't eat properly), na woh parties main itna jatha hai, ghar itna early aay jaatha hai aur kaal rath itna disturbed kyun tha??

Puru: ajeeb bath hai Devika, agar woh aaj kaal parties main nahin jatha tho tuma tho kush hona chahiya

Devika: likyan purushotam…woh kaafi dusturbed hai aur mujhe malum hai ka tuma iski vaaja patha hai

Puru: mujhe??? I don't know what your talking about

Devika: oh God purushotam! Yeh natak math karo…mujhe hakk hai jaan na ka mera beta ki zindagi main kya chal raha ha?

Puru: phir tum usae khudh pooch lena…vaisa bi robbie na mujhe kaha tha ka kisi ko math bathana

Devika: yeh kaisi zidh hai???!

Puru: devika, sorry par main robbie ko aur troubles nahin thana jatha is liye tum usae kudh pooch lena *leaves the room*

*Devika rolls her eyes and walks out of the room too*

*Puru leaves towards the car and when he arrives outside he sees robbie standing near his car and walks over to him*

Robbie: dad main soch raha tha ka kyun na main tumara sath aaj kam pa chalun

Puru: *puts hand on robbie's shoulder* of course son! Is din ka tho har baap ko intazar hai

Robbie: hain dad…*looks off to nowhere*

Puru: likyan robbie agar tumara aaj mood nahin hai tho-

Robbie: nahin dad, thakh gaya hun main is party lifestyle sa…bus aab aap ka sath hath barana chatha hun

*Puru just smiles uneasily because he can still see that robbie is visibly upset and he gets into the car, robbie gets into the car with him and they both drive off*

AT THE OFFICE

*Raunak is working happily at his desk when robbie walks in, he puts down his pen and smiles but is shocked too, he stands up*

Raunak: robbie tum??? Yahan???

Robbie: hain raunak main, socha tha aaj sa dad ka sath main kam karun

Raunak: *smiles* very good! Mujhe malum tha ka ek din tum zaroor kam pa lago ga apni marzi sa

Robbie: hain actually, dad na mujhe tumse woh um…Gateway company ki file lana ko kaha tha

*Raunak smiles and gives the file over to robbie, robbie smiles and raunak just pats him on the back and robbie walks out of the room, devika sees robbie coming out and quickly goes in*

Raunak: aunty ji aap?

Devika: hain raunak actually tumse kuch zaroori bath karni thi

Raunak: ji aunty boliya kya hai??

Devika: look raunak, I don't know if tumne note kiya likyan aaj kaal robbie ka behaviour kaafi different hai

Raunak: hain, kaafi mature hona laga hai

Devika: woh tho hai…likyan aajanak…kuch vaja tho ho gi

Raunak: hain…shayad

*Sees that raunak doesn't seem to know and gets a bit frustrated*

Devika: do you know what it is…I mean tum uska best friend ho…uska jigaari dost

Raunak: sach main aunty robbie na mujhe kuch nahin kaha

Devika: *puts on her sad expression* main tho sirf itna jaan na chathi thi ka mera beta ki duniya main kya chal raha hai

*Raunak walks up to devika and puts his hand on her shoulder*

Raunak: tum fikar math karna aunty, main robbie sa bath karun ga

Devika: thank you my son, I just wanted to know ka vaaki main saab kuch teek hai

Raunak: you just don't worry aunty im sure everything is fine with him

*Raunak walks out of the room to deliver a file and devika smiles to herself*

BACK AT KASTURI'S HOUSE

*There is a knock at the door and Kaushalya fixes her chooni and goes to the door and swings it open, she has a surprised expression on and in steps a girl, who is around kasturi's age, modernly dressed and she gives kaushalya the biggest hug*

Kaushalya: aara Shalini tum! Tum kaab delhi sa aayi

Shalini: aabi aabi aunty, socha aap saab sa pehla milun…kasturi kahan hai! *very excited*

Kaushalya: upar apne kamara main hogi

Shalini: main usae surprise kar ka aathi hun! *runs up the stairs very excited*

*Kaushalya smiles and shaked her head, and closes the door*

*Shalini walks excitedly up to kasturi's room and sees her looking outside her window and she slowly walks up behind her and puts her hands on her eyes*

Shalini: guess who!

Kasturi: SHALU! *takes hands off her face and turns around and both girls scream and give each other the biggest hug ever*

Kasturi: tum kaab aayi!

Shalini: aabi aabi

Kasturi: par main tumse bilkul bath nahin karthi! Mera best friend ho kar tumne mujhe delhi sa ek phone call nahin kia, 6 months ho gaya jaab sa tum gaayi ho

Shalini: tuma tho malum hai ka yeh saab settle hona ka chakar main fus gaayi

Kasturi: acha choro yeh saab, yeh batha delhi kaisa hai

Shalini: its great! Itna bara shahar itni choices, parties-

*Kasturi hears this and starts remembering her and robbie's argument about parties on the picnic and gets lost in thought, when she is shaken by shalini*

Shalini: kya hua kasturi…

Kasturi: kuch nahin…who bus *gets a bit teary and looks down*

Shalini: Kasturi, kya hua???

Kasturi: nahin bus…

Shalini: jhoot math bolna, sach sach batha ka kya bath hai

Kasturi: shalu aab tuma kya kahun

Shalini: *takes kasturi's hand* please kasturi maan halka ho jaya ga

*Kasturi looks up at her and then tells her everything about robbie and the computer incident and how he lied to her the whole time and the end she is very upset*

Shalini: im sorry kasturi, woh idiot kaisa meri pyaari si kasturi ka sath kar saaktha hai, par mujhe apne aap sa aur gussa aa raha hai…ka main tumara sath yahein nahin thi tumara thukh bant na ka liye

Kasturi: likyan yeh bath tum kisi ko math bathana

Shalini: kyun???

Kasturi: main nahin jathi ka ma, bauji, saab bina matlab parashaan ho, aur waisa bi main nahin jathi ka robbie ka paarivar ka sath hamara relation karab ho

Shalini: kaushalya aunty ko bi nahin malum??

Kasturi: nahin…vada karo ka tum kisi sa kuch nahin kaho gi

Shalini: okay vada kar thi hun…likyan agar mujhe kabhi robbie mila na tho main tho uska woh haal karun gi ka woh-

Kasturi: tu kuch nahin karagi samaj gi??

Shalini: *gets angry* fine, tum bi zaroorat sa jaada achi ho

*Kaushalya walks in carrying some clothes*

Kaushalya: aara tum yahein ho…dekho neecha maina samosa rakha hain

Shalini: acha! Great!

Kasturi: nahin ma mera mood nahin hai

Kaushalya: aara! Dekho na shalini, aaj kaal kasturi kitna upset rathi hai

*Shalini looks at kasturi who gives her a pleading look*

Shalini: aur mera paas ek idea hai…kyun na kasturi mera sath kuch dino ka liye delhi jaaya

*Kaushalya looks a bit shocked and kasturi looks up at shalini shocked, and gives her a mean look*

Kaushalya: aara shalini, itni dhoor…aur tuma uska bauji ka sath bath karni para gi

Shalini: and main karun gi!

Kasturi: shalu! Yeh kaisi idea hai…ma yeh bilkul pagal hai

*Kaushalya laffs*

Shalini: likyan poochna main kya takleef hai

THAT EVENING AT KASTURI'S HOUSE EVERYONE IS INSIDE THE LIVING ROOM

Bauji: shalini nahin beta

Shalini: likyan bauji…sirf 4-5 dino ki tho bath hai…aur wahan woh koi ajnabee ka sath nahin ra rahi…mera sath hai…meri ma ka sath hai-

Bauji: likyan aaj sa koi larkhi apne parivaar ka bina itni dhoor nahin gaayi

Alka: hain bauji…aur yeh ham kaisa thor saktha hain

Shalini: likyan-

Alka: dekho shalini, bauji tumari yeh bath suni yeh kaafi hai…aab jo uno na ka thiya tho bus wohi ho ga

Bauji: *is about to go upstairs and shalini start crying and he stops*

Shalini: acha bauji agar aisa hi hai tho aisa hi hoga…main tho sirf apni dost ka sath kuch waqt bithana chathi thi, I mean wahan shift kar ka main kaun sa har din dekh thi hun usae…aur phir shaadi ka pehla larkhi agar thora maaza lena chathi hai…*wails like a baby*

Bauji: *gets hurt* shalini bus bus rona nahin beta

Shalini: nahin bauji please, apne aapni decision kar li hai, aur vaisa bi mujhe tho sirf is bath ka thukh laga ka pehli bar kasturi kuch apne liye karna chathi hai…hamesha apni parivaar ka liye tho kam kar thi hai-

*Kasturi tries to say something and doesn't know what to say*

Bauji: *goes over to shalini and turns her around* teek hai…agar tum chathi ho ka yeh ek bar tumara sath chala tho teek hai

*The whole family smiles and alka and pooja look at each other and pooja rolls her eyes and alka flips her hair and leaves the room in total frustration*

Shalini: KYA?! Phir sa kaho bauji

Bauji: hain bi hain!

Shalini: YES! Bauji aab tho itna kam hai, main kaal hi ja rahi hun, kasturi ko packing bi karni ho gi

*Shalini gives bauji a hug who is startled and gives her a hug back*

LATER ON IN KASTURI'S ROOM

Shalini: dekha na kasturi

Kasturi: shalu…main nahin jaana chathi

Shalini: likyan kyun…dekho wahan jaa ka tumara mood teek ho jaa ga

Kasturi: likya wahan tho robbie woh saab ratha hain

Shalini: aara ding dong! Delhi itna bara shahar hai, what are the chances you will run into them

Kasturi: likyan-

Shalini: *puts on a sad face* mera liye bi nahin???

Kasturi: okay

Shalini: YESSSSS!

BACK TO ROBBIES ROOM THAT NIGHT

Raunak: robbie can I come in

Robbie: yeh sure, kya bath hai

Raunak: who bus tumse kuch kehna tha

Robbie: kya???

Raunak: main bohoth kush hun ka aaj tum itna responsibilty lena laga…likyan itni change itna kam saama main…iski vaja kya hai

Robbie: kuch nahin yaar, aur jo vaja thi aab uska bara main bath karna ka koi faida nahin

Raunak: likyan robbie-

Robbie: please raunak, main bus aab ek beta ki responsibility lena chatha hun

Raunak: fine *leaves the room*

Robbie: *to himself* tuma main kaisa kahun raunak, sorry ka main tumse nahin kai paaya…aara kya faida…I have to move on…woh mujhe kabhi nahin milna wali

ENDS WITH ROBBIE'S SAD FACE AND KASTURI PACKING HER BAGS FOR DELHI

amazing part, can't wait to see them met in delhi😳

ohhh im sure u will make kas meet rob in delhii 😍 dis part was lovely part 👏
do contiue soon 😃