Hatred-The shade of love? FF - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
#11
Nice part
Robbie already seems smitten
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey jasmine your ff seems awsome ok will read all the parts and come back to edit my post.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13
Hey welcome to the forum! 😛
Great start! Yur FF sounds interesting!
Do continue 😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hatred-The shade of love Part 5





Kasturi brings a file to Shiv's house to see Gauri.The door is open.Nobody is there.
She hears someone singing "Tum ko bhi..."{Kabhi alvida na kehna}.She follows the music and reaches a room.She is surprised to see Robbie singing.
Robbie stops singing seeing her.He is surprised:Kasturi!
K:Actually..i came to see gauri.I work in her office.I came to return a file.
You sing very well.
He smiles:Thanks a lot.
He extends his arm ans shakes her hand softly.She felt comfortable.She smiles slightly.Slowly she removes her hand from his.
K:Ok..bye...
She turns back and walks forward.
Robbie sings:Kabhi alvida na kehna.....
She turns backs at looks at Robbie.Her eyes are sparkling.She gives him a cute smile and goes away.
Gauri sees Kasturi:Kasturi...you brought the file?
K:Yes.
She gives her the file.
K:Robbie sings well.Right?i heard him sing.
G:Ya...he is a singer.He does stage shows.Tomorrow there is a stage show.Are you coming with us to see the show.
K:Ah...
G:Come yaar...
K:Ok..
Robbie overhears it.He is thrilled:Kasturi is impressed by me..She is coming for my stage show.Wow!

Robbie's stage show...Robbie's etes searches for Kasturi.He sees her smiling at him.He is happy.He sings...all are jumping with joy...

Robbie goes backstage after the show.He is surprised to see Kasturi there.
R:Kasturi!
K:It was a nice show.You rocked.
R:Thanks a lot.You know..while singing you were in my mind.That's why i could sing well.
She feels strange.
R:I know that you can't believe it.But trust me...you helped me a lot unknowingly.
So you will come for all my stage shows to cheer me up.Right?
She smiles.

Robbie is standing in the rain.He sees Kasturi smiling at him.He goes near her.She disappears.He feels shy.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#15
Hey Jasmine I am back to give my comments 😃
sorry for the delay been busy with 2 of my friends wedding so here it goes
Part 1
awsome start Jasmine 👍🏼I always loved iqbal khan as shiv
Shiv and gauri both are business rivals intresting
omg shiv is so rude to poor gauri😡
uff ishipita i sense she is going to be trouble😆😆
Kasturi and gauri are best friends good loved the way gauri got back at shiv
wonder what shivs parents are going to do now
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16
Part 2
shiv and gauri parents pressurized them both to get married
they both arnt intrested in seeing there future partners
my guess was write they were going to get married to each other
lets see whats happens now 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#17
Part 3
Shiv and gauri both agreed to marry each other for there parents sake
poor gauri was in pain while shiv was full of anger
shiv was rude to gauri 😡
but she answered him back they are going to fight even more now
good part 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#18
Part 4
yeah kasturi came to visit gauri
shiv is really rude 😡
robbie is shivs cousin this is going to be intresting
he shaked kasturi hand but she felt weird
oh thats nice of shiv to tell robbie not to play with kasturi feeling
good part
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Posted: 15 years ago
#19
Part 5 loved roka meeting it was so cute kasturi agreed to come to his concert and robie was excited robbie seems like he is already falling for kasturi great part jasmine do continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
Very sweet part
Thanx for the PM

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