Hatred-The shade of love? FF

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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Posted: 15 years ago

I'm starting a ff 4 Robbie-kasturi & Shiv Gauri.I wrote 4 parts.1st 3 parts r ful of SG.4th part onwards r-k hav imp.plz read d 1st part & comment.Then i will post d next 3 parts.

Hatred-The shade of love? Part 1

Shiv Kapoor and Gauri Kapoor are Business rivals.
Shiv is a tough man who is the son of Mehen Kapoor and Nikhila Kapoor.Gauri is a smart bold lady who is the daughter of Rishab Kapoor and Mihika Kapoor.They are family friends even though Shiv and Gauri are enemies.

Gauri launches a hair product.For that she conducts a party....
She has worn a black gown and diamond ornaments.
G:Hi guys...this party is to inform you all about the new hair product i have launched.It makes your hair healthy and beautiful.

Suddenly somebody enters the hall clapping hands.Her eyes are on him.
G:Shiv!
S:Well done Miss.Gauri...you are launching hair products.You say that it makes your healthy healthy and beautiful.So the hair growth will be more if your hair product is used?
G:Sure..no doubt..
S:How can you make sure that it helps to grow your hair longer?Have you used it as a trial?
G:Ya...i feel good.
S:Then why your hair is not long?To be frank seeing you here i thought you are not launching a hair product..but diamond ornaments...because you have worn beautiful diamond ornaments..but your hair....no hope.
Gauri feels insulted.
G:You have also launched a hair product.Will it help girls to have long hair?
S:Yes..ofcourse...i will show you an example.Ipshita....
Ipshita comes inside with an attractive smile.
S:Look at her hair.It's so long and beautiful.Gauri looks at her hair.Ipshita has got beautiful shining hair.
Shiv smiles:Now you accept failure Miss.Gauri.Ladies...if you want good hair..use the hair product i have launched.You will have beautiful hair.
G:I will show you a girl who has beautiful hair after using my hair product.Kasturi....
Kasturi who is sitting among the audience is nervous.
G:Come on...
Kasturi comes onto the stage.
G:Look at her long beautiful hair.It is the result of using my hair product.Right Kasturi?
Kasturi smiles slightly:Ya...
Gauri smiles.Shiv stares at her.

Kasturi,Gauri and her parents are together in the park.Kasturi is Gauri's best friend.
Gauri laughs:You both should have seen Shiv's face expression at that time.so funny.
Mihika:Kasturi just used your hair product recently.But the result is not clear.
K:But i trust Gauri completely.She will not launch a product unless it is good.
Gauri smiles:Thank you so much Kastu...
Rishab:When are you and Shiv going to stop fighting?
G:That is impossible.He is sick...

Shiv tells his parents:I just can't stand Gauri.A girl with attitude.
Shiv goes away.
Mehen:We should put an end to their fight.
Nikhila:Yes...it should not continue like this.

Edited by jasminerahul - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

Interesting start

Look forward to reading more

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shumshad parveen

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Posted: 15 years ago

wow...one more new ff write.welcome dear🤗

after reading u r ff i will edit my post soon😊

yep...i am back...the starting sounds interesting with full of kapoor fammily.

oh first three parts will be for SG.so we have to wait for the fourth part to see our RoKa😛

hahaha...first meet of G and S was intesting...shiv started with insultinf Gauri😉

aw...kasturi has beautiful hair.no wonder she has 😊

nice to see gauri and kasturi are friends😊

yep sure u have to put and end to G and S fight...but how?😕

enjoy reading u r first part.waiting for u r second up date😛

Edited by shumi. - 15 years ago

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hatred - The shade of love? Part 2

Nikhila:Shiv..you are successful in the business field.Then why don't you get settled?
Shiv:I'm settled Mom.But not by marrying.I hate marriage.
Mehen:But why?Don't you think that your parents are happy in their married life?
S:Yes.But that does'nt mean that i should get married.I'm married to my job.
N:Your opinion will change after marriage.
S:No way....
M:No Shiv...it's time for you to get married.Don't delay.
S:Ok....you find a girl.I will marry her.Only for your sake.
They both smile.
N:We have chosen a girl.Don't you want to know who she is?
S:No.I don't care who she is.
He goes away.

Rishab:Gauri...you are getting older.You should have a family life now.
Mihika:Ya...you had promised us that you will once you are established in the business field.
G:Ok..ok...i'm not denying...i will marry anyone you choose.But to be frank i'm not interested in marriage.I;m not interested in any guy.
M:So we are fixing your marriage.
G:Ok fine...
R:Do you want to see the guy we are interested in?
G:No...because i have no dreams about my guy.

Wedding place.Gauri is dressed up like a bride.
She sees the bride groom coming.She is shocked to see him.
Her lips shiver:Shiv!
Shiv is shocked to see his bride.
S:Gauri!

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shumshad parveen

@shumi.

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Posted: 15 years ago

wow...so soon u up dated the 2nd part!

u know what for the past 1 month i did not updated my ff😔

ok coming to your ff....

oh i see shive is not interested in marriage...still he said yes just for the sake of his parent.good son😊

heee...same think with gauri too...eager to know what will happen if these two get married😛

they shocked to eachother in the marriage mandaap😲

good up date dear ...short and sweet update...nice picture selection...😃

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366791

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Posted: 15 years ago

Nice twist

So Shiv and Gauri are going to get married

Cant wait to see their reactions

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hatred-The shade of love Part 3

Gauri's and Shiv's parents are nervous about their reaction.
Shiv turns to his parents:Gauri is my bride?
Nikhila:Yes.
S:Why did'nt you tell me that?
N:You only said that you are not interested to know who she is.
S:I can't marry Gauri.
Their parents are upset.
M:You had agreed to marry anyone who is chosen by us.Now you are backing out leaving us to be embarassed before others.
Shiv is upset:I don't want to upset you dad.But Gauri...

Gauri tells her parents:You knew that i hate Shiv.Then why...?
She sheds tears.
Rishab:We took it as a joke.We never knew that you will become upset like this.
G:How can i marry him?
R:Please don't refuse to marry Shiv.It's our prestige problem.If you don't marry Gauri..your parents won't be able to face the public.
G:Dad...mom...you both will get get embarassed before others because of me.I will marry Shiv.

Mehen:You hate Gauri.But you have always respect her parents.Atleast for them you should marry Gauri.Otherwise their repuation will be harmed.We promised them that we will make their daughter our daughter.
Shiv is confused.Within a few moments...
S:Ok...i will marry Gauri..

Gauri sits on the mandap with pain.
Rishab:Mihika...Gauri was so bold before.First time we are seeing tears in her eyes.
M:Is our decision wrong?
Rishab has no answer.

Shiv looks at Gauri with anger and hatred.Gauri's eyes are wet.He ties mangalsuthra around her neck.He puts sindoor on her forehead.They both look at each other.While Shiv's eyes are full of hatred,Gauri's eyes consits only pain.She is too weak to think of her hatred for Shiv.

Gauri is in the bedroom.Shiv enters the room with anger.
S:Mrs.Gauri Kapoor...don't think that you can enjoy here as Shiv Kapoor's wife.I hate you as my wife.You don't deserve to be my wife.
Gauri loses her control:Mr.Shiv Kapoor.I'm ashamed to tell others that I'm Mrs.Shiv Kapoor.Because being your wife makes me hate myself.Because you don't deserve to be my husband.
He loses his control and shouts:Eh Gauri!!!
G:Don't shout to scare me Mr.Shiv Kapoor.I also know to shout.
Due to anger,Shiv breaks the crystal flower which was kept there.

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366791

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Posted: 15 years ago

Great part

Looks Shiv and Gauri will only clash more now

Thanx for the PM

Look forward to reading the next part

Edited by Aaliyah01 - 15 years ago

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Jasmine

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Hatred-The shade of love Part 4

Nikhila knocks at the door.
Gauri who is sleeping gets irritated:Who is this?
She:The door is not locked.Please come in.
Nikhila comes inside.Gauri wakes up quickly:Mom...you?
She smiles:Gauri...someone has come to see you.
Gauri thinks:Who is that?

Gauri comes to the front room.That was Kasturi.
Gauri is surprised:Kasturi!
K:I could not stop myself from visiting you.
Shiv:I knew that you will come to see your best friend's present condition.
Shiv whispers to her:Don't worry...Gauri is still pure.She can leave this house at any moment to get married to someone.I will be relieved.
Kasturi feels weird.
K:Now only you woke up?
S:Gauri is an ideal daughter in law who wakes up very late.
G:I could'nt sleep last night..because Shiv was snoring like hell.
Nikhila and Kasturi laugh.Shiv is embarassed.

Calling bell rings.
Shiv opens the door.Shiv is surprised:Robbie!
Robbie hugs Shiv.
All are surprised to see him.
N:Robbie...you are back from US?
R:Yes...today i landed.I thought i will give you a surprise.Hi Gauri....after a couple of fights...you both got married?Surprise.
Gauri and Shiv are dull.
Suddenly he sees Kasturi.
R:Who is this pretty woman?
G:This is Kasturi.My best friend.
R:Hi Kasturi..I'm Robbie...Shiv's cousin.
He extends his arm.Kasturi feels weird.Robbie shakes her hand without seeking her permission.He is holding her hand tightly.Shiv observes it.Kasturi takes her hand back.
K:Gauri...i'm going..bye...
N:Have your tea Kasturi.
K:No thanks Aunty...i will have it later.
Kasturi goes.Robbie's eyes are on her:Lovely!

Shiv takes Robbie to a room:Robbie..i know that you are a big casanova.But don't try to play with Kasturi's life.She is a nice girl.Don't hurt her.
Robbie has a naughty smile on his face.

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Mahi

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Posted: 15 years ago

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omg omg omg,., this looks so interesting to me,., god i love your ff 😃 👏 awesome just awesome jasmine 👏 what a great way to put together these two lovely couples 😳 i love it😳