Hatred-The shade of love? FF - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

I know that jattionfire.But i don't hav d patience 2 stretch it too long.I envy shumi who writes long ffs.earlier i used 2 write long ffs.for 3 yrs i did'nt write ffs.Recently i started writing again.But now i lack patience.I finished this ff long ago,but i'm slow in posting it as it lacks readers.

Thx a lot 4 ur support & suggestion

ohh hehe., allright,,., its okie dear 😳 your ff is still great 😛
awww i love this part as usual 👏 😃
shiv and gauri are falling for eachother 😳😳
i just love how shiv held gauri😉
yayyyyy Kasturi and robbie are engaged 👏😛
thanks for this wonderful part,. n your message,.😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32
nice part at last robbie n kasturi are engaged.. is it moving fast....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
hey jasmine sorry yaar late ho gaya but ur ff was so good yaar roka engaged terrific keep it up!👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34

fantastic😊 i love ur story, its really nice...... i liked shiv being so concerned for kasturi😊 thank gos all the differences have been sorted out😊 robbie changin himself because of kasturi remeinded me of the serial...... wow robbie nd kasturi r engaged.... shiv nd gauri are also liking each other, thats nice😊 wonder who the guy is, hope he does not cause ny trouble..... lookin forwards to the next part, do update soon😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
#35

Hatred-The shade of love? Part 9





He:Gauri...you married Shiv to avenge me?I'm sorry..i'm back.
Shiv:Who are you?
He:Gauri knows me.
G:No,i don't know who he is.
He:How could you say that you don't know me?I admit that i have done mistakes.But now i'm back.Now you don't have to live with your enemy Shiv.
G:What are you saying?Are you mad?
S:Tell me who you are?
He:I'm Shashank..Gauri's ex-lover.
All are shocked.
G:No..he is lying.I'm seeing him for the first time.
S:No...she is angry with me.That's why.We both were deeply in love.But due to some misunderstandings i had to be away from her.She was pregnant at that time.
All are shocked.
G:No!!!!
S:She aborted the baby to avenge me.As a part of revenge she married her enemy Shiv.
Now i regret.Come back to me Gauri.
Gauri slaps him:Liar!
Shiv stares at Gauri with anger.He drags her to their room.
He slaps her:Having an affair and also carrying his baby.But acting like a feminist.Wow!Grand performance Gauri.
He slaps her again.
G:Stop it Mr.Shiv Kapoor.Even if i had an affair in my past what is your problem?How does it affect you?You don't love me.Right?Then why are you so upset?
Shiv has no answer.He thinks:Why do i overreact?Why do Gauri's past bother me?
Shiv goes out of the room.Robbie and Kasturi are seen outiside the room.
K:Shiv..i'm grateful to you for returning Robbie.So i will not lie to you.I know Gauri completely.She did not have any answer.No one dared to woo her.She was a tough woman.Recently only she became a little more softer.May be because she has started having feelings for you.
R:Shiv..why did'nt you tell me that your marriage was a drama?But somehow i feel that you both have feelings for each other.Your hatred for Gauri is a shade of love Shiv.
Shiv turns back and looks at Gauri.Gauri is crying.

Shiv meets Shashank outside.
S:You misunderstood Gauri.That means your love was not true.
Sha:No..it was true love.
S:Rubbish!Leaving her alone and going somewhere due to some silly misunderstandings and coming back to her after her marriage.Are you not ashamed?You say that Gauri stays with me to avenge you.That means she hates you.Then why do you want to go back to her?Silly guy.Listen to me...I will not leave Gauri for you.
Sha:Why do you want a girl who betrayed you?
S:That is none of your business.
Shiv goes away.
Shashank phones someone:Madam..our plan is failed.Shiv's reaction is unexpected.
Somebody snatches the mobile from him.He looks at him with fear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
Me first
arey it it that shiv's frnd yaar.. i forgot her name...

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Posted: 15 years ago
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i knew this guy create problems.... but thank god shiv realised his mistake, i wish he apologizes to gauri.... it was sweet of robbie nd kasturi to convince him😊 wonderin who might hav sent him...? think its robbie who took his mobile phone.... lookin forward to the next part😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
wht the heck 😡 this shashant or whtever his name is,., 😡 idiot,.,, 😡 how dare he called Gauri's name from his dirty mouth and say bad things for her😡😡 shashant is a zombie 🤢😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39

Hatred-The shade of love? Part 10








Shiv shouts at him:So it was a drama?Who made you do this?
Shashank sweats.

Shiv goes near Gauri:Gauri...you come with me..
G:Where?
S:I will tell you later.
G:Shiv!
S:Listen to me dammed.It is to solve your bloody problem.
G:Why do you want to solve my problem?
He shouts:Stupid girl..because i feel that your problem is my problem too.
G:How can my problem be your's Shiv?You hate you.Right?
S:Because...i don't hate you anymore.I don't know how my attitude towards you changed.I don't know what i feel for you..friendship..love... or anything else.Even if it's hatred...that maybe a shade of love.
Gauri is stunned.Her eyes are full of tears.She melts completely.
S:Don't worry...i di'nt tell you that i love you.I know that my love hurts you a lot.
Her tears fall down.

Shiv and Gauri reach a house.They see Ipshita sitting there.
G:Ipshita!Why did we come here Shiv?How can she solve my problem?
Ipshita stands up seeing them.Gauri is looking at her long beautiful hair.
G:Ipshita...actually your hair's secret is Shiv's hair product?
Ipshita smiles:Yes.
G:That's why...Shiv's hair product is successful than my hair product.But i'm happy about Shiv's success.His success is my success also.
She smiles At Shiv.
He is serious:You think Ipshita is related only to hair products?
Shiv goes closer to Ipshita:Are you related only to hair products?
He stares at her.He slaps her.Ipshita and Gauri are shocked.
G:Shiv!
S:I thought you are my best friend.But you bit me from my back.Shashank told me everything.
He turns to Gauri:Ipshita only brought Shashank to our life to destroy us.
Gauri is shocked:Ipshita?We all were rivals in the business field.But why did you create problems in personal life?
Ipshita bursts out:Because you snatched Shiv from me.
Shiv and Gauri are shocked.
I:I loved you very much Shiv.But you married Gauri.You both were not happy in the married life.Then what is the point in living together?So i introduced Shashank to drive Gauri away from Shiv.
S:We live together because we love each other.
Shiv keeps Gauri closer to him.Gauri looks at him with wonder.
Ipshita sheds tears.
S:So don't dare to seprate us.If so..you will see my worst face.
Shiv is self determined.

Shiv and Gauri are in the car.
G:Why did you tell that we love each other?
Shiv stops the car with anger.He pulls her closer to him.Gauri is shocked.
S:Because i know that we love each other.
Slowly Gauri smiles.Shiv also smiles.

Shiv and Gauri comes back home holding hands together.Mehen,Nikhila,Rishab and Mihika are surprised to see them together.Shiv leaves Gauri's hand due to shyness.They all smile.
G:Dad...mom...when did you both come?
M:We came one hour back...we were waiting for you both to come back.
R:Our wait did not become a waste.We could see what we wished for.
Shiv and Gauri are blushing.They all smile.

Shiv and Gauri are travelling in a truck with many people for honeymoon.
S:No privacy.I told you..this is not a good idea.We could have gone by car.But you want to try this.
Gauri smiles:But this is an experience Shiv.Have fun..
They both laugh.

Robbie and Kasturi dance in the rain singing the song 'Khuda Jaane...'{Bachna o haseena..}
R:Kasturi...you know..i have dreamt of dancing with you in the rain.But now it has come true.I'm so happy.
They both stand close to each other with a smile.

The end
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
Very sweet ending for both couples

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