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Posted: 15 years ago
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@ mini1roka
Hey mariam!! the intro is wonderful.. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Thank you so much priya i am glad you liked it ๐Ÿ˜›
sounds vry interesting...๐Ÿ˜‰
thanks again i am glad you liked it
wowww..a college love story..fantastic idea..๐Ÿ˜ƒ
i love to read collage storys so thought of starting one thanks for liking the idea
plzz post the part 1 asap..๐Ÿ˜›
i will post by the end of today hopefully
can't wait to read..๐Ÿ˜ณ
thank you so much for your lovely comments priya will update asap love Mariam xx๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thank you so much mini1roka, missindia26, ..-..RoKa.._.., robbii, for liking my post?
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Posted: 15 years ago
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omg......maraima...is it true....ohhhhhhhhhhh i'm soooooooooooooo happy yaar....again a roka ff!!!!
but i wud like to tell u one fing dat i ownt be able to comment for one month as i'll go to india!!!
but still wen i cum back i'll defo catch up wid ur parts!!!
keep on going yaar!
Nechu
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@ RoKa PraNeev
omg......maraima...is it true....ohhhhhhhhhhh i'm soooooooooooooo happy yaar....again a roka ff!!!!
๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† yep its true nechu i thought of starting a new ff and keeping our roka alive thanks for supporting me yaar.
but i wud like to tell u one fing dat i ownt be able to comment for one month as i'll go to india!!!
No Probs Nechu enjoy yourself and do a lot of masti and dont forget to take pics i would like to defo see them. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
but still wen i cum back i'll defo catch up wid ur parts!!!
aww thats so sweet Nechu do tell me how you liked it then
keep on going yaar!
thanks so much for your sweet comments ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Nechu
Love Mariam xx
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Guys how r u all and how was eid hope everyone had fun well thanks for your superb comments and support well i am posting the first part and pics of the main four ppl in my story so there is no confusion ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Robbie Sabarwal
Kasturi Chawla
Natik Singhaniya
Akshara Meshwari
Part 1
In Mumbai at 3 am

Kasturi: Acha baba raat kay 3 baj gay hain ab toh phone band kardo...baki ki baat kaal college main karle na

Robbie: Tum Sona chati ho na mugger kya karo jab tumhe apne sare dil ki baatein batao nahi mujhe neend nahi ati hai .

Kasturi: ahhhhh mujhe to ab sona hai tum aik kaam karlo meri picture se baatein karo kyuin ki mein to ja rehi hoon ab

Robbie: Ok Ok fine mugger jaane se phele help me with the assignment its due in tomorrow aur maine kuch nahi kiya aur kal mujhe dant professor ki zaroor parage

Kasturi: Sleep is necessary

Robbie: Nahin plz mere help kardo na main tumhe kabhi tang nahi karo ga phir se

Kasturi: haha no chance us waqt kai tum jo fazool baatein apne Girl friends ke baarein me karein te you should asked me for help then

Robbie: you are so mean bye

Kasturi: (smiling) thank you bye

Back in Meshwari Household

Akshara talking to herself

Akshara: Neend nahi arahi...kya karo mein thoda aur study karleti hoon...nahin nahin aur read kiya to mar hi joon gi idea tv dekh leti hoon.

As she is about to go downstairs, her cellphone rings

Akshara: Hello

Robbie: So nahi pa rahi thi

Akshara: Tumhe kaise pata chala

Robbie: dosti main yehi hota hai anyways maine soocha keh tumhe phone karloon kyon ki tum bore ho rahi hogi

Akshara: Haan... tumne acha kiya Robbie main kal kay liye bohut ne..

Robbie: Nervous ho janta hoon mugger tu chinta maat kar you will do fine on the exam duniya ki sab se achi doctor bane gi tu

Akshara: Tum hi ho wo jo mujhe calm down karne main num 1 ho

Robbie: So main sooch raha tha kay tumne apne exam kay liye prepare kar liya hai will you help me on an assignment.

Akshara: I don't know

Robbie: Come on yaar plz say yes Kasturi bailed out on me aswell.

Akshara: acha soochu gi

Robbie: sochne ka waqt nahi hai I need to give it in tommorow

Ma: Akshara beta tum abhi taak jaag rahi ho kya

Akshara: got to go before ma comes bye see you 2morow

Robbie: suno to (she already cut the call)

Akshara: Ma wo mein thodi si study kar rahi thi lekin ab mein khatam hoge hi hoon

Ma: Bus ab so ja

Akshara: Acha

Robbie: kaise dost hai mere madat waqt kam bi nahi ate hai kal to mujhe daant to zaroor parige aur us Kasturi ko mein choro ga nahi

Next morning at Saint Xeviers collage

Natik: Robbie yaar tum kitne late kyuin ho kidar te us waqt ke tum

Robbie: Yaar yeh soch soch ke mere halat karab hogi hai ke aj mein konsa bhana professor ko doo

Natik: Phir se tumne assignment nahi kiya hai kya

Robbie: Bhool gaya ta aur raat ko Kasturi aur Akshara se jab madat mangi dono ko neend agi thi dafar kai ke tu hi mere madat karde abhi

Natik: Mein tere kya madat karoon yaar the class will begin in 5 minutes you could have came earlier

Robbie: theek hai yaar ab lecture mat dena shuru kar dena

After 15 minutes the three of them entered inside the lecture room when the lecturer spoke

Lecturer: Good Morning your Highness apne tashreef lane ke liya class mein bhoot bhoot shukriya

Robbie: No problem sir mujhe aur mere dost ko koi problem nahi hai late hone mein apko be in logo jaise Lagta hai na ke main aik superstar hoon aur you must heard of the phrase a celebrity never on time.

Lecturer: Robbie tum apne tareef kar kar kai kabhi takte nahi ho

While the lecturer was telling Robbie off Kasturi and Natik escaped from there and went and sat on their seats.

Robbie: actually I will tell you one thing mere mom kaite hain ke I am one in a million aur mere ghar walle mere tareef kar kar ke takhte nahi hain you know

Lecturer: woh tumhare gar walle ho gain now go and sit down I don't want to hear anymore of your nonsense

Robbie: aj apko mere baatien nonsense lag re hai magar jab mein aik bara superstar banoo ga to phir ap ko garv ho ga ke mein apka student tha

The Professor gave him a stern look and he went and sat down

While at the examination hall Akshara was scribbling away it seemed like ages when the two hours finished and finally everyone came out of the hall she made her way down to the cafeteria where the rest of the crew were waiting

Robbie: dekho age Hamari future doctor kaisa ta tera exam

Akshara: Theek tha muje Lagta hai mein pass hoge hoon tumhari assignment ka kya hua

Kasturi: pooche mat as usual hum late thee and he made the professor mad wo bachare bool gaya tha ke ag koi assignment be due in thee

Robbie: ok lets order something to eat guys

Natik: Robbie tumhari waje se we can't step in the canteen now you don't pay yourself and let any of us pay either

Robbie: Chill it's our reputation man

Natik: Kya reputation agar kise ko pata chala tho

Robbie: Kisi ko nahi pata chale ga agar lag bi Gaya tho samje ge ke munna ab bara hoge hai

Natik: Not funny Robbie tumne mera pet name girls ko kyuin batya its so embarrassing and it's not funny guys you know hum jab bi masti aur hungama karte hain it always leads to trouble

Kasturi: Kuch nahi hoga Natik tum chinta mat karo

Akshara: Haan Kasturi theek kare hain Munna

She started laughing and ran from their and Natik chased after her which followed Robbie and Kasturi they weren't aware of their surroundings and bumped into someone which left shocked, puzzle scared expressions on four of their faces.

Precap:

Robbie: guys you know there is a Goa field trip coming up and we all should go

Kasturi: nahi Robbie jo aj hua mujhe nahi Lagta kai ma aur Bauji mujhe permission de gain

Akshara: haan Kasturi theek kare hain

Robbie: Natik ko permission mil gay ge aur rahi tum dono ke baat I have got a plan

What is going on in Robbie's mind will it cause chaos and trouble for the gang again

Ok guys here is the first part sorry if it was boring and forgive me for any mistakes will be waiting for your comments feel free to criticize ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Love Mariam xxx

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Posted: 15 years ago
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me firstttttttttttttttt......!!!!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
reserved.....
extreamly sorry dear.i came back very late...
starting with the pics.ofcpurse no need to tell about RoKa.as usual they are mind blowing.ther two Natik and Aksha...i think they are from yeah rista...i don't watch that serial because it is anti ekta serial...i hope while reading u r ff i will start liking them...
achcha...robbie and kasturi know each other in the begining itself. good start...
kasturi told robbie to talk with her pics...omg! very bad ...poor robbie...poora serial mai wo wahee kartha raha...yahaan pay bheee????
hahaha...our robbss did not complete his assignment ...๐Ÿ˜‰
aksha too did not help my robbss???...lol i don't like her...๐Ÿ˜ก
Lecturer said' I don't want to hear anymore of your nonsense...Lecturer nay robbie ko daanta๐Ÿ˜ญ...oh! my sweetooo....don't worry robbss.we are with u...
he made the professor mad wo bachare bool gaya tha ke ag koi assignment be due in thee...hahahaha...welldone robbie...๐Ÿ‘...there u are...
lol they pumbed in to whom???..kahee wo kadooss lecture tho nahee...
precap:
filed trip to goa...wow...mazaa aayeah ga...
wonderful part mariam.loved reading it.thanks for your brilliant up date.once again sorry for my very very late comments...
Edited by robbii - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Mariaaaaaaaaaaaaaaam!!!!! ๐Ÿค—
Okay let me warn yu first...i am quite a hyper person n i love to drag my words sometimes and i love leaving long comments so if it gets a bit tuu much for yu...........too bad!! Yu gotta put up with it now!! ๐Ÿ˜†
Coming to yur ff:
Briliiant start!!! ๐Ÿ‘
Kool choice of friends...seems realistic!! ๐Ÿ˜›
Hahaha Robbie seems to be the trouble maker of the gang!! ๐Ÿ˜‰
Aww no-one was helping him for the assignment...and it was due in the day after ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜† hawwwww....ugh memories i always end up doing assignments the night before it's due in!! ๐Ÿคข
Ooo kool akshara is becoming a doctor!! ๐Ÿ˜›
hahaha robbie asked naitik to help him 5 mins before the class ๐Ÿคฃ
Loved the scene between the lecturer and robbie...awesome dialogues so funny!!! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ And it worked as well....the professor forgot about the assignment lol
haha robbie doesnt pay for the canteen bills tut tut ๐Ÿ˜†
hahaha awww munna what a cute nick name ๐Ÿ˜› but embarassing tho ๐Ÿ˜†
oooo i wonder who it is which scared them all
Great promo!! i wonder what robbie has got planned!! ๐Ÿ˜‰
Fab part mariam!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Very funny and cute!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Can't wait to read the next part!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Update soon!
Ooops i didn't mean to leave a loooooong comment in the first part...didn't want tu scare yu already ๐Ÿ˜†
Hinna xx
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Mariam ๐Ÿค—
Awesome part, really fun and cute ๐Ÿ‘
Absolutely loved it!
Yay as well as RoKa you have one of my other favourite jodis, NaKsh! ๐Ÿค—
Hehe Robbie disturbing everyone at 3am ๐Ÿ˜†
Lol Kasturi's right, he shouldnt have been praising his long list of girlfriends and boring her to death
Oooh so Akshara's gonna be doctor..cool she'll be a good one ๐Ÿ˜›
Hehe love this mischevious, rebellious Robbie...love the excuse he gave to teacher ๐Ÿ˜†
Aww can totally imagin Naitik blushing ad whining about being called "munna" ๐Ÿ˜›
Uh oh have they bumped into college bully or somehting?
Cant wait to read on, update soon ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Love TJ ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Mariam!!๐Ÿค—

Gr8 beginning sweety..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
I love the gang..they all r rockin!!๐Ÿ˜‰
Robbie didn't complete his assingnment n was askin Kasturi n Akshara fr help in nyt..๐Ÿ˜†reali adore his carefree attitude๐Ÿ˜ณ
hehe.the way he spoke to the lecturer was gr8..lol buddhu professor..he frgot to check the assignments..๐Ÿ˜† lol he's a rockstar afterall!!!
Kasturi seems gr8 to..n ye Akshara wants to bcuma doctor..kwl!๐Ÿ˜›
Lol naitik's nickname is Munna n Robbie calls him by this name in front of girls..bechara Munna..๐Ÿ˜†
Nw i reali can't wait who they bumped into..๐Ÿ˜•
Was that a techer or Princple or sumfin..lol can't guess๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜†
Plz update soon!!! Can't wait to read more!!!๐Ÿ˜›
Edited by mini1roka - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey mariam fantastic yaar great!

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