FF-Thoda Sa Pyaar(RoKa)NEW-part-47 to 50 pg107 - Page 14

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Innocent02

awesome update............thanks dear
it was very sweet of robbie to say that she is a college girl n he wants her to remain like that. thanks for liking that .when i was writing i thought you people will not like that. but noe i found almost all the readers like that point .You described the decoration of the tables very well. thanks Finally married..yep.....lest see what happens next try to guess...๐Ÿ˜ƒ.i like when my readers guess my ff

I enjoyed reading it.
it was very good.thanks for liking it dear

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: missindia26

Fabulous part Shumi! ๐Ÿ‘thanks dear
So much description I could imagine it all ๐Ÿ˜good you can๐Ÿ˜ƒ.

The tables sounded lovely ๐Ÿ˜Š.yummm...feel hungry isn't it?
Uff this Robbie I thought he was gonna feed Kasturi he just ate it himself ๐Ÿ˜†hahaha...i know you people will expect that.that is why i did not write in that way....heeee
But his "college girl" comment was sweet ๐Ÿ˜ณthanks
Hm there is an age difference it will be interesting after they're married ๐Ÿ˜ฒ.it is going to be tedious for me to write that combination.i will try my best
Wow their clothes sounded gorgeous ๐Ÿ˜ƒtook lot of time to write that discription...uffff
Loved the cute pic ๐Ÿ˜›.no doublt roka always cute pair
Ah theyre married at last ๐Ÿ˜‰.yep.now i have to create post marriage between them.
Loved this part eagerly waiting to read what happens next
๐Ÿ˜ƒ.try to post soon

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: amitarocks

So cute part yaar๐Ÿ˜ณ thanks Really liked the way Robbie said that he wants her to remain the way she is๐Ÿ˜› thanks for liking that.it was unexpected to me.i thought my readers will not like that.

Fantastic.....finally our love birds have united๐Ÿ‘! Great part! thanks again for your kind comments.it means a lot to me
Update soon!!! will try to๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: mini1roka

hey diii all this was so fabulous. thanks dear ..wowww roka got married me too happy

the description of tables n clothes worn by robbie n kasturi is greatttttt๐Ÿ‘thanks.to be frank it took lot time to write that...heee
robbie is the best..he is always..love him when he says "lets her remain a college girl"๐Ÿ˜›thanks for liking that.i thought you people may not be liking it.
n me too hops that evey fing becums honey sweet in thier lives...๐Ÿ˜so true๐Ÿ˜‰
but it wud be interesting to see how kasturi takes revenge...she won't be taking revenge like our serial kasturi did...spoiling robbie and made him insane.i hate that.n i want to knw abt kiran's story soon...๐Ÿ˜ณwill reveal soon
cant wait for nxt parts...update soon๐Ÿ˜Š i will inshallah

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
part 9... dii wat is da prblm wid kasturi???? y she is acting like dis,i het her in ur ff currently but wen i move onto hinna dii ff i just love her.....lol.... i hope she bcums gud in ur ff also!!!! super b part dii... heading to wards next part!!!
Nechu
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: reenbana

hi di how r u? fine dear great finally our love birds have united yep great going di good job !๐Ÿ˜Šthanks

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: RoKa PraNeev

part 9... dii wat is da prblm wid kasturi???? y she is acting like dis,i think you are not understanding my story line.it is all because of kiran's past.i het her in ur ff currently don't worry she will fall in love with robbie soon.that will be the end of my ff.but wen i move onto hinna dii ff i just love her.....lol....i know i hope she bcums gud in ur ff also!!!! yep super b part dii...thanks for liking it heading to wards next part!!! where were you? ๐Ÿ˜•

Nechu

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Posted: 16 years ago
PART-14
in shiv mandir:

after the marriage, robbie and kasturi stood together in front of the god ,made a small prayer and came out of the temple.from the mandir they were suppose to go to chawala house.robbie and kasturi walked together towards the car.they reached the car and robbie was about to get in to the driving seat .

alana:'robbie..ab thum dulhay ho.rock star nahee๐Ÿ˜Š...'alana stopped him.
robbie:'tho?...๐Ÿ˜•'
alana:'you will not drive the car...'

robbie:'dii...mandir aathay waqth mainay he drive ki ya tha...'

cousin:'thab thumaari shadi nahee huwe thee....'

robbie:'omg...you people are too much.teek hai now tell me where should i sit'

alana:'thumaari hee gadi mai,par peechay kay seat mai...'

robbie:'gadi koon chalaya ga...'

cousins:'uss ki fikr math karo...hum hai...'two of them came forward opened the back seat door ,helped robbie and kasturi to get in.slammed the door and went to the front seat.robbie took out his turban and garland kept it at the back. kasturi too did the same with her var mala.

they were driving on the high ways.alana and others followed them in separate cars.

kasturi and robbie were leaning backward on the seat sitting comfortably and relaxing.'pandhra din may sab kuch badal gaya hai.kith na sukoon hai.sab kuch achcha lagraha hai..'a feeling of pleasure and happiness passed through his veins.
robbie slightly turned his neck and looked at kasturi.he cannot believe him self ,a girl that too a college teen sitting beside him,without hugging,leaning,kissing ,touching not even care to looking at him.it is his first experience.in fact that is was impressed him.'she has very less physical attraction. par her adaayean...'he thought looking at her.

cousin:'robbie...kuch gana suna thay na...bahuth din ho ga yeah thumaara gana suon kar...'

robbie:๐Ÿ˜Š

cousin:'please mana math kar...long drive is tiring...hamaray leyeah nahee tho sahee atleast for the sake of your newly wedded dulhan...'

robbie:'..ahem..'he cleared his throat looking at kasturi.he too felt like singing,that much he was happy.

girls listen to this audio.it is a beautiful song.you will like it.

http://www.lyricsmasti.com/song/4586/get_lyrics_of_Mera-Pehla-Pehla-Pyaar.html

robbie:

Na jaane kab yeh hua (robbie turned towards kasturi)

Na kisi ko khabar(looked at her)

Na khud ko pata (gently took her right palm in to his left)
...........
Kaise samjhaau tumjhe(slide his fingers in between her fingers)

Mera phela phela pyaar hai yeh (griped it tenderly)

OO OO O O
Aankhon mein aitbaar hai yeh(he made her feel his love with his emotional voice and passionate hold, which she don't want to)
OO OO O O

Mera phela phela pyaar hai yeh(he played with her bangles moving to and fro with his other hand)
OO OO O O

he sang in deeply touching voice looking and smiling at kasturi,holding her hand in to his,playing with his bangles which disturbed her very much and became restless on her seat.

cousin:'lag tha hai thum nay gana nahee dill ki baath kaha rahay ho...๐Ÿ˜‰'

robbie:๐Ÿ˜Š....he keep on playing with her bangles till they reached chawala house.
the chawala house was flooded with guest and robbie's fans.some how ajay and shaantha managed them and took robbie and other sabarwal family in to their house.as soon as they entered kasturi escaped to her room and fall on her bed up side down.the emotions so far she was controlling burst out as tears.she never knew how long she cried.

shaantha:'kasturi bitiya...utto..chai peelo...'she brought hot cardamon milk tea which was her favorite.she badly need some thing hot to drink.she got up and sat on the bed.shaantha gave the tea cup and went out.kasturi felt bit energetic after the hot tea.she looked at the bangles with which robbie was playing so far.immediately she removed them from her hand and kept it beside her on the bed.one by one she removed all the jewelry.she gathered them all ,went to her cupboard to keep them in.she was surprised to find her wardrobe was empty.she turned and looked at her book shelf and found empty.

kasturi:'bhiya...'she came out calling.

shaabtha:'kya paray shaani hai ?...'as ajay was busy shaantha came to her.

kasturi:'mai ray kapaday...mai ray books...'

shaantha:'wo tho hum log pack kar kay sabarwal house bejwa thee....'

kasturi:'kyun?๐Ÿ˜ฒ....'

shaantha:'kyun...kya kyun?aaj kay baadth thumai wahee raha na hai.wahee thumaara ghar hai...' her statement made kasturi freeze.so far that thought did not strike to her mind.

'aaj kay baadth yeah ghar may ra nahee hai?.bachpan say jahaan palee padi huon wa ha ghar maira nahee hai?.ab mai yahaa raha nahee sakthee?. chod thoon yeah sab? that too far the sake of a stranger with whom i have no interest...'her thoughts made her week she was broke down and fall back on the bed.she was tired of fighting with herself.

it was dinner time.a simple dinner was arranged on the terrace for the guests.the terrace was covered by big colourful shamiyana.robbie went to the terrace along with his cousins.he looked around.it reminded him the day he came to this terrace and confessed his love to her.he searched for the swing and found missing.instead there was a special table arranged for the newly wedded couple RoKa.
cousins:'sit here...'they showed the seat for him.some of them brought kasturi too and made her sit beside him.
on the table there was a single china clay plate ,in the middle of it there was a panjabi small size desi ghee roti , in a small bowl dall makhani and there was a coke can beside it.
robbie:'is this my dinner๐Ÿ˜›?'

cousins:'yep.a small correction not my our dinner..'
robbie:'what๐Ÿ˜•? one for two...'

cousins:'this is one of the post marriage rasam.both togeter will eat this single roti from one plate, with the same bowl of dall...the one who eats the last piece will win over the other...'

robbie:....looked at kasturi.

cousins:thayk kya rahay ho?...shuru ho jawo...' they encouraged.robbie initiated it.he break a small piece of roti dip it in the dall and gently put it in his mouth.he closed the mouth to chew the roti.

robbie:'ooo...ssss...๐Ÿ˜ฒ'the dall was so spicy.it was intentionally cooked like that.he immediately grabbed the coke can, opened in hurry and took two ,three sips continuously,till his tongue chill down.

cousins:'what for you are waiting? start eating...'they forced kasturi.she under stood they are not going to leave her.she too took a piece of roti dip it in the dall and put it in her mouth.

kasturi:'uuuu...fff......๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ญ'water peeped in her eyes due to spice.

cousins:'theekah hai na๐Ÿ˜‰?.then drink coke...๐Ÿ˜‰'they suggested.kasturi looked at the coke can which was drunk and left over by robbie.she don't want to drink from the can which he used.

cousins:'kya sooch rahe ho? continue eating...'by that time robbie finished eating his second mouth and stretched his hand for coke again.kasturi's tongue and the whole mouth was hot and spice.she could not tolerate it.she too stretched her hand towards the coke.robbie looked at kasturi and slowly pulled back his hand to enable her to take the coke.kasturi did not care all those thinks.she took the coke with out hesitation and drank it to cool down her tongue and mouth.
both of them started eating simultaniously from the same roti but from different sides.their cousins surrounding them were cheering for their each mouth and when they want to drink the coke at same time.the size of the roti was continuously reducing and became a very small piece...finally...reduced to last piece for them to eat.
robbie's cousins:'come on robbie...it is the last piece,don't leave it....๐Ÿ˜Š'

kasturi's cousins:'kasturi...it is your chance ...take that last piece..๐Ÿ˜Š'

robbie's cousins:robbie...robbie...robbie..'they encouraged

kasturi's cousins:'kasturi...kasturi...kasturi...'they cheered her.

robbie and kasturi looked at each other.robbie thought let kasturi eat the last piece and win over me,while kasturi don't want to compete with him.

cousins:'what are you looking?...take that piece...kasturi...take...'they under stood robbie is not going to take.finally kasturi came forward to eat that last piece of roti.she took the last piece of roti from the plate, slowly took it near her mouth to put it in.before she could robbie grabbed her wrist and stopped her eating.her mouth was slightly opened and the roti piece was inches apart from her mouth.

robbie's cousins:'wow....robbie...good game...come on ...don't allow her to eat...you cannot be a looser...'
kasuri's cousins:'it is cheating.kasturi it is your chance don't leave it to him...' they supported kasturi.

kasturi:'๐Ÿ˜ก...'she pulled her hand towards her open mouth to eat the roti.but robbie's hold was strong enough to avoid her to do so.kasturi tried to twist her hand ,at least to get rid of his hold but could not.

a minute later robbie leaned forward and took the roti gently with his mouth from her fingers ,carefully watching his lips not to touch her fingers.he left her hand and chewed the last bit with a smile and victory on his face.

robbie's cousins:'woow robbie...kyabaaze maari thum nay?...๐Ÿ‘'
robbie:๐Ÿ˜ณ

kasturi:๐Ÿ˜ก...
' shayaad yeah thumaari aakri jeeth hai.aaj kay baadth you will never win over me...'kasturi said to herself in mind.


Edited by robbii - 16 years ago

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