FF: Tune zindagi mein aake...Teaser on pg 81/2 :) - Page 33

Originally posted by: hmughal1

hey TJ-J-J-J-J-J-J-J-J-J-J-J-J-J-J-J-J-J-J-J-J-J-J-J-J-J-J-J-J-J-J-J-J-J-J-J-J-J-J-J-J-J okay thats enough lol!!!! 😛 lol 😆

Part 27:

Wikid update sweety!!!! 😃thanks 😛

i absolutely adored this part!!! 😳yay! 😊

Kasturi on the plane was so cute!!! and robbie comforting her was even more cute!!! 😳aw glad you liked it 😛

Atif aslam!!!! Awesome!!! i havnt heard him in ages and fink he's absolutely fab!!! 😛I love him too! 😃

Loved the paper game and how robbie scooped kasturi into his arms!!! Soo romantic!!! 😳uff i know 😍

Hehe good touch with all the fans surrounding him!!! Poor guy!!! hehe bechara just too popular 😛

😆 "titliyan" love that!! cool 😃

liked kasturi's way of pretending 2 get annoyed!!! 😉lol I thought she should have her turn to wind him up a little 😛

Oooo robs has a plan!!! wonder wat it is!!! Gonna catch the next part!!! 😛hehe wait and see 😊

Great update huni!!! Thanks again Hinna xx

Hinna

"Ek minute, Kasturi. Mein capre badalraha hoon."

"Robbie? Sirf mein hoon, koi aur nahi."

"Nahi, nahi, mujhe sharam lagenga."

Mystified, Kasturi waited. Since when had Robbie been like this?

"Aapne yeh khaana kudh banaaya?"

"Um..nahi, niche se mangvaaya. Par agli baar, kudh banaaoonga."

Originally posted by: hmughal1

Part 28: (almost there!!! 😉) lol yay! 😃

WOW TJ!!!! im speechless!!!! 😲 This part was just magical!!!! So fanatical!!! i loved it!!!! i think it's probably my fav part up until now!!!! 👏 standing ovation dude!!!!! 👏oh wow ur favourite part! cool 😃 and thanks very much 😳

Yu really are an awesome writer!!! Just lyk a pro!!!! Hats off yaar!!!! 👏👏👏aw Hinna you're too sweet 😛

O hello waapis aa jao!!! itna urne ki zaroorat nahi hai!!! itna bhi acha nahi tha!!!! hahaha lol jus kidding!!! it was FANTASTIC!!!!! 😛lol dont worry im still here😆

Awwww robbie's way of manaoing her was just too romantic!!!! 😳aw 😊

"Ek minute, Kasturi. Mein capre badalraha hoon."

"Robbie? Sirf mein hoon, koi aur nahi."

"Nahi, nahi, mujhe sharam lagenga."

Mystified, Kasturi waited. Since when had Robbie been like this?

😆 sharam aur woh bhi robbie!!! 😲 sach mein robbie doesn't know how 2 make excuses!!!! lol Loved this part!!!! 😃i know bechara: saw through it in a second

I loved the way yu described the food!!! mmmmmmmmm made me hungry!!!!😛lol me too! I always eat when I write or read FFs 😉

"Aapne yeh khaana kudh banaaya?"

"Um..nahi, niche se mangvaaya. Par agli baar, kudh banaaoonga."

hehehehe another amazing line!!!! 👍🏼 luuurrrved it!!! so cute!!!! aw 😛 lol dw I wont let Robbie forget about that promise 😉

aw how cute robbie sang her to sleep!!! shoooo shweeeet!! 😳hehe 😊

ooo wow all these places sound fab!!! 😛 have yu been mauritius before tj??!!! no i really want 2 go! I just looked on the Internet a bit ( 😕 btw it was supposed to be malaysia sorry if i was inconsistent but I havent been either place anyway lol)

aww robbie put a flower in her hair!!! so sweet!!! 😳hehe Robbie's just a darling 😊

yu really explained this part beautifully tj!!!! well done!!! 👏aw thanks once again 😃

woohoo only 1 more part left and then i'llbe up to date with yur ff!!!! yippee! 😛

Hinna xx

Originally posted by: hmughal1

Part 29!!!!!

Amazing update......once again!!! Take a bow girl!!! 👏Hinna you're too complimentary 😛

Kota Tinggi Waterfalls hehe this name sounds so funny!! 😆lol

Aw how cute robbie and kasturi playing in the water!!!😛hehe I know so sweet wow its so hot here I really feel like going too 😃

Mmmmmmmmm 😛 grilled-lemon-and-chilli-corn-on-the-cob yu make my mouth water so much tj!!!! id love 1 ryt now!!!! 😃lol me too me too!

Aw 😭 this is meant to be a happy face with tears of happiness but there's no such smiley on here 😡aw I understand anyway 😊

anyway this is for the words robbie says to kasturi!!! How sweet!!! 😳 okay i really need 2 find some new descriptive words!! Compared to yur vocabulary mine is cheese balls!!! lol aw lol no its not I love ur writing, whereas 2 mine at last all that English exam revison paid off 😳

Hand in hand, they watched the sun glow as it set on the sea in a spectacle of crimson, violet, tangerine and gold. The coloured light danced on their faces as Kasturi rested her head on Robbie's shoulder.

Wowjust wow!!!! Beautifully described!!!!😍 Im not going to say anymore on this because it's unexplainable!!! 👏Aw thanks so much 😊

Keep up the amazing work huni!!! 👍🏼Thank you sweetie 😊

And now i can say....waiting 4 the next part!!! 😉 Lol u sound so pleased 😛

So hurry up and update!!! says Hinna demandingly hehe 😆

Waiting 4 next part huni!!😛Hehe will do asap going out 2nite and 2mz but will be up by wknd 😊

Love Hinna xx xx

Originally posted by: nehaaa nawab

sorry for commenting late.... No problem 😉

looks lik robbi and kasturi and making the best use of their honeymoon.....Hehe of course 😊

it was a very romantic part..... Thanks 😃

pls update soooon.....as soon as I can 😊

"Istana Besar? Koi mahal hain kya?"

"Jee, ek bahut hi khoobsurat, ali-shaan mehal jisme Johor ka sultan rehta tha. 1866 ma Sultan Abu Bakar ne banaaya."

Hand in hand, they walked towards the palace, admiring its architecture.

"Mujhe chaht bahut pasand hain." The roof was blue, built under the Anglo influence, contrasting beautifully with the white stone walls.

" Jee haan. Acchha, pehle hum Royal Abu Bakar Museum mein jaayege."

They browsed the artefacts for some time, taking pictures and whispering about the decorative relics.

"Ab balai besar mein chalte hain," decided Robbie.

"Balai besar?"

"Audience hall hain. Yahaan

"Oh. Bahut hi bhara hain. Par Robbie, aapko yeh sab kaise bata?"

"Vahaan lika hain."

"Uff. Mein bhi kitni buddhi hoon."

"Nahi Kasturi. Aisa mat kehna. Bas, Milind ko yeh museums bahut pasand hain. Hamesha mujhe keechta tha apne saath. Aur phir, mujhe bhi thoda thoda jaan-pehchaan hogayi."

"Woh dekho, aage jaana manaa hain. Toh chaliye, Robbie, bahaar jaate hain. Wahaan saamne bazaar hain. Dekhte hain."

They wandered between the stalls, looking at the embroidered wall-hangings, period turbans, mullioned glass trinkets and various perfumes.

"Ab chaliye, Kasturi?

"Ek minute sir, mujhe kuch kareedna hain."

"Toh chal saath chalenge na?"

"Nahi, Robbie, tum yahi ruko. Mein do minute mein aati hoon."

Mystified, Robbie shook his head and wandered over to the palace entrance, to admire the sublime ruins once again. He snapped a few more photos, before Kasturi joined him with a smile, clutching a package wrapped in brown paper.

"Chalo, Robbie, ab chalte hain."

"Tum mujhe nahi bataaongi?"

"Baat mein, Robbie."

"Achha baba theek hain. Chalo."

***

Kasturi was admiring the view from their hotel balcony.

"Dekho vahaan Robbie, ek lake hain. Aaj raat hum vahaan chalte hain."

"Jee, Kasturi. Bahut romantic hoga, na. Tum jaakar tayaar hoja."

"Theek hain.

***

Kasturi re-entered the bedroom half an hour later, dressed in a crimson and cream chridaar suit. Robbie was leaning against the headboard of the bed, on his laptop.

"Kya dekh rahe ho, Robbie?"

"Bas e-mail tha, concert organiser se. Jab hum vaapas Mumbai pochenge, usse phone kardena. Par ab tum chinta mat karna. Hamara kaam sirf enjoy karne ka hain. Baitho." He switched off the screen and moved towards her. He slowly stroked her cheek, gently and slowly. But he stopped as he noticed Kasturi's tensed expression and fidgety movements.

"Robbie, mujhe tumse kuch baat karni thi.."

"Kahiye na, Kasturi. Kyun hichkicha rahi ho?"

"Woh..main.." She took a deep breath. "Mujhe yeh kaam mein mazaa aata hain, par mein..mein phir se actuary banna chahti hoon. Mujhe woh kaam bahut pasand tha. Par Raunak ne.. mein phir se 'agar tumhe theek laga.."

"Kasturi, kitni baar samjaao? Teri khushi hi mein meri khushi hain. Aur yeh toh bahut acchhi baat hain, ke tum itni kabilat aur akalmandi ki nokri karne chahti ho. Mein tumhe kyun rokhoonga? Jaise hum Mumbai pochenge, tum refresher course karlo aur phir hum dono tumhare liye nokri dhoondenge."

"Thank you, Robbie."

"Yeh kya? Thank you? Mein koi ajnabee yah paraaya hoon?"

"Nahi, nahi, sorry Robbie. Mein bas bahut hi khush hoon. Dheere dheere mere sab armaan pure horahe hain, yakeen hi nahi hota."

"Bas ek problem hain."

"Kya?" asked Kasturi anxiously.

"Mein tumhe har din nahi dekhoonga. Kaise kattenge yeh din?"

"Robbie," she squeaked, an admonishment on her lips. But she melted at his comically puppy-dog face and shyly hugged him instead.

Chapter 30 ~ Jahaan tu muskuraye meri manzil wahin (english)

"Istana Besar? Is it some palace?

"Yes, a very beautiful, extravagant palace in which the Sultan of Johor used to live. Sultan Abu Bakar built it in 1866."

"I really like the roof." The roof was blue, built under the Anglo influence, contrasting beautifully with the white stone walls.

"Hmm yes. OK, first we'll go to the Royal Abu Bakar Museum."

They browsed the artefacts for some time, taking pictures and whispering about the decorative relics.

"Now we'll go to the Balai Besar."

"Balai besar?"

"It's the audience hall hain. Here . .

"Oh. It's very big. But Robbie, how do you know all this?"

"It's written there," he explained, pointing to the sign.

"Uff. I'm so stupid."

"No Kasturi. Don't say that. Its just that Milind likes museums a lot. He always drags me along, so I've picked up a little knowledge."

"Look, we're forbidden to carry on ahead. So come, let's go outside. Opposite there's the bazaar. Let's look."

They wandered between the stalls, looking at the embroidered wall-hangings, period turbans, mullioned glass trinkets and various perfumes.

"Now shall we leave, Kasturi?

"One minute, Robbie, I want to buy something."

"OK, lets so together then."

"No, Robbie, you wait here. I'll be back in 2 minutes."

Mystified, Robbie shook his head and wandered over to the palace entrance, to admire the sublime ruins once again

"Come, Robbie, now we can leave."

"Won't you show me?"

"Later, Robbie."

"OK fine. Let's go."

***

Kasturi was admiring the view from their hotel balcony.

"Look there Robbie, there's a lake. Tonight let's walk by it."

"Yes, Kasturi. It will very romantic. You go get ready."

"OK."

***

Kasturi re-entered the bedroom half an hour later, dressed in a crimson and cream chridaar suit. Robbie was leaning against the headboard of the bed, on his laptop.

"What are you looking at, Robbie?"

"Just an email from a concert organiser. When we return to Mumbai, you should phone him. But don't worry about that now. Our work is just to enjoy. Sit." He switched off the screen and moved towards her. He slowly stroked her cheek, gently and slowly. But he stopped as he noticed Kasturi's tensed expression and fidgety movements.

"Robbie, I wanted to talk to you about something.."

"Tell me, Kasturi. Why are you hesitating?"

"That..I.." She took a deep breath. "I enjoy this work but I..I want to become an actuary again. I really liked that job. But Raunak had.. I want to start again..if you think it's right.."

"Kasturi, how many times do I have to explain? My happiness is in your happiness. And anyway this is a good thing, that you want to do a job which requires such capability and intellect. Why wouls I stop you? As soon as we reach Mumbai, tou can do a refresher course and then we'll both find you a job."

"Thank you, Robbie."

"What's this? Thank you? Am I a stranger or an outsider?"

"No, no, sorry Robbie. It's just I'm so happy. Slowly all my desires are being fulfilled, I can't believe it."

"There's just one problem."

"What?" asked Kasturi anxiously.

"I won't see you every day. How will I survive the days?"

"Robbie," she squeaked, an admonishment on her lips. But she melted at his comically puppy-dog face and shyly hugged him instead.