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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: hmughal1

yur welcome sweety!! 😛aw 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi everyone 😊
Thanks for all your lovely comments, they are much appreciated 😃
Heres the next part, quite short 😉
Do tell me what you think 😳
Love TJ x
Chapter 29 - Ghule Gulzar, Kya Kehna

"Dekho waha Kasturi, woh hain Kota Tinggi Waterfalls. Kitne khoobsurat hain."

"Haai Robbie, bilkool chamatkaar jaisa hain."

She took off her sandals and held them in one hand; Robbie did the same; with their free hands they held each other's. The walk towards the plunge pool at the base of the waterfall was slippery, but fun. Finally, they reached the edge of the water.

"Chalo, Robbie, ander chalte hain," appealed Kasturi excitedly.

"Ander? Kasturi, hum bheek jaayenge!"

"Kya, Robbie. Tum bhi na. Bahut mazaa aayega, chalo na. Kyun dar rahe ho? Sirf paani hain." Playfully, she reached forward, scooping a handful of water and splashing him.

"Kasturi!" Robbie was flabbergasted as the spurt soaked his hair, face and shirt. Kasturi shrieked and rushed into the pool, trying to escape. Robbie followed behind, spraying the icy, fresh water back at her. Breathless, Kasturi slowed down. Robbie caught her and spun her round in the water, Kasturi giggling in delight.

Drenched, they emerged and flopped on the rocks beside the waterfall. Still grinning, Kasturi turned to Robbie and asked:

"Ab kahaan?"

"Chalo, ab bus lehte hain aur Desaru beach chalte hain."

"Robbie! Aise? Bheegi bheegi capre mein?"

"Idea kiska tha?"

"Mein w-," declared Kasturi, flustered.

"Sorry Kasturi, mein sirf tang kheechraha tha. Chinta mat kar, yahaan sab log aise hi karte hain. Aur phir, hamara honeymoon hain, hum jo chahe karsakte hain. Log kya kahenge..?"

"Toh phir chalte hain!"

***

"Dekho, Robbie, makai, chalo kareed lehte hain. Mujhe bahut bhookh hain."

They bought a grilled-lemon-and-chilli-corn-on-the-cob each then sat side-by-side on the beach, gazing out towards the rippling sea in the calm evening air.

"Kasturi, tum jaanti ho, aaj tumhaare saath, aisa lagta hain jaise mujhe sabkuch milgaya hain. Sabkuch."

Gently, he kissed her forehead. She blushed, lowering her eyes at the praise. But then she looked up into his eyes, her own eyes intense and sincere.

"Robbie, mein bhi bata nahi sakti, mein kitni khush hoon. Aapne mere saare sapne pure kardiye. Mein tumse bahut pyaar karti hoon."

"Mein bhi tumse behat pyaar karta hoon."

Hand in hand, they watched the sun glow as it set on the sea in a spectacle of crimson, violet, tangerine and gold. The coloured light danced on their faces as Kasturi rested her head on Robbie's shoulder.

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Posted: 16 years ago
Chapter 29 - Ghule Gulzar, Kya Kehna
"Look there Kasturi, that's Kota Tinggi Waterfalls. They're so beautiful."

"Wow Robbie, honestly they're like a sensation."

She took off her sandals and held them in one hand; Robbie did the same; with their free hands they held each other's. The walk towards the plunge pool at the base of the waterfall was slippery, but fun. Finally, they reached the edge of the water.

"Come, Robbie, let's go in," appealed Kasturi excitedly.

"In? Kasturi, we'll get wet!"

"What, Robbie. Sometimes, you. It'll be such fun. Why are you scared. It's just water." Playfully, she reached forward, scooping a handful of water and splashing him.

"Kasturi!" Robbie was flabbergasted as the spurt soaked his hair, face and shirt. Kasturi shrieked and rushed into the pool, trying to escape. Robbie followed behind, spraying the icy, fresh water back at her. Breathless, Kasturi slowed down. Robbie caught her and spun her round in the water, Kasturi giggling in delight.

Drenched, they emerged and flopped on the rocks beside the waterfall. Still grinning, Kasturi turned to Robbie and asked:

"Now where?"

"Come, now we'll take the bus to Desaru beach."

"Robbie! Like this? In these wet clothes?"

"Whose idea was it? Now if people stop and stare, what can I do?"

"I w-," declared Kasturi, flustered.

"Sorry Kasturi, I was just pulling your leg. Don't worry, here everyone does this. And then, it's our honeymoon, we can do what we want. What can people say..?"

"Then let's go!"

***

"Look, Robbie, corn, come on let's buy some. I'm really hungry."

They bought a grilled-lemon-and-chilli-corn-on-the-cob each then sat side-by-side on the beach, gazing out towards the rippling sea in the calm evening air.

"Kasturi, you know, now with you, it feels live I've gained everything. Everything."

Gently, he kissed her forehead. She blushed, lowering her eyes at the praise. But then she looked up into his eyes, her own eyes intense and sincere.

"Robbie, even I can't tell you how happy I am. You've fulfilled all my dreams. I love you very much."

"I too love you immensely."

Hand in hand, they watched the sun glow as it set on the sea in a spectacle of crimson, violet, tangerine and gold. The coloured light danced on their faces as Kasturi rested her head on Robbie's shoulder.

Thanks for reading 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
awww that waz a sweet part. Continue soon dear. Thnks for the PM!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey TJ thanks so much for the PMs......sorry for the delayed response......actually i'm logging on after quite a while.....😊

this honeymoon sounds like a dream.......robbie is so sweet & romantic.....😍....lucky kasturi....😛

also he sings songs for kasturi....so sweet....😳

loving it....😊


ps......since long have been meaning to thank you for translating the entire story in english for those who don't understand hindi.......thats really thoughtful of you....👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jessica18

awww that waz a sweet part. Continue soon dear. Thnks for the PM!!!

no problem thanks for your lovely comment
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: swan20

hey TJ thanks so much for the PMs......sorry for the delayed response......actually i'm logging on after quite a while.....😊oh thats no problem 😛

this honeymoon sounds like a dream.......robbie is so sweet & romantic.....😍....lucky kasturi....😛lol glad you liked it I agree lucky Kasturi 😛

also he sings songs for kasturi....so sweet....😳hehe after all hes Robbie the rockstar 😃

loving it....😊thanks 😛


ps......since long have been meaning to thank you for translating the entire story in english for those who don't understand hindi.......thats really thoughtful of you....👍🏼oh so do u read in english? and dw its no problem im glad people find it helpful 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey TJ
Thank you for the PM
And again thank you for a wonderful update as usual
Aww RoKa are so cute together on their honeymoon
Cant wait for the next part!
Edited by Aaliyah01 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
awwww so cute teejay i dovt have words yaar roka rocks kitne cute lagte hain dono !great all over it was amazing good job!👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
the water fall sounds exciting.
grilled-lemon-and-chilli-corn...my mouth is watering😛,that too sitting in the beach and eating 😳.i love to do that.
sweet honey moon dear😛.hope this hiney moon will continue😉

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