NEW FF: YeH ZiNdAgi UPDATED PART 5..PG 11 JAN 9-09 - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
#51
Hey
sorry i dont know your name
how are you?
okay just logged on today and just saw that wow you started a new FF and that to your first one
Congrats on that
and i know you will keep all us kasturians rocked on to your FF
ill comment as i go along

Character Sketch:

Kasturi: a middle class girl but who is modern thats going to be interesting. aww her parents and sisters died bless but shes got a brother. aww

Raunak: omg his kasturis brother. Yayyy atleast this way i wont hate him now and he cant interfere in between roka. First time im reading raunak being kasturis bro and he loves robbies sister wow. twists i tell you lol

Virinda:aww katsuris best mate i think im going to like her in your FF

Ka ra vri bros and sis and best buddys always tehir for each other right
going to be soo interesting

I like devika and puru in your FF 😃
Anita omg thank god shes robbies sister well shes married and a lil son too
that means robbies an uncle 😆
Robbie
aww who wouldn't fall for him 😆
Yug thats going to be interesting too
shivani the youngest but she has a crush on ruanak too 😆 i guess her and kasturi would be good mates if they did meet
Loved the character sketch

Part 1:
kasturi already up.
😆 is that how vrinda is she cant have patience lol
Vrinda nad kasturi applied at the same company
yay thats going to be intresting and they need the money bad lol
Kasturi balck and white salwar
and black hoops go kasturi
takes Vrinda for ever to get ready 😆

hey hey robbie you woke up late and that to for picking your PA
you too in black and white roka coordinated hey
awww omg robbie too 😲 goes to the mandir and takes aashirwaad thats shocking to me wow
and where kasturi gone to

btw love the title Yeh Zindagi
part was great
👏

-Hummy


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Posted: 16 years ago
#52

Hey I just read the 3rd part of ur FF and it was great Kasturi and Viranda came to give an interview hope Kasturi gets chosen for the Job she keeps on bumping into Robbie lol anyways great part I really loved it keep up the great job it was funny the way you put Dhum Dhum at the end it gave a dramatic effect

Update Soon

Love Mariam xx

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Posted: 16 years ago
#53
Part 2:
aww i hope your better now
woww kasturi falling omg dont fall
wow robbie caught her 👏👏
wow roka meet so soon
yay
woop woop
wow kasturi calm down
you going like that
😆 robbie dont worry i guess you'll meet her sooner than you expect
wow vrinda all in blue hey hey
now you think of robbie kasturi
😆 kasturi no lectures like tulsi today
lucky one for you vrinda
wonder whats going to happen now
roka getting the same feeling
going to be interesting


Edited by PrInCeZz07 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54
omg kas was waiting so much time to get her chance for inter view...but it was a lunch break fo robbie...ufff...
wow the person whome she bumped was robbie...
lo i love that DUM DUM DUM...heee
godd work keep it up👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
#55
Aww kasturi bumped into robbie agaiin.........she's one lucky girl....😆 😆.....so will she get the job now......already robbie thinks she's rude for not thanking him earlier...........waiting to know......😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56
Part 3:
Mr Sabharwals secretary
wow kasturi has to get the job lol
oh wow
aww naina she seems nice
making dua too taht they get the job 😆
awww kasturi calm down
you have to get this job
no pressure lol
awww kasturi your going to do this job for your bro aww his education
bless such a sweet sis
wow kasturi
so many questions calm down
omg wow what did you do kastrui woh insaan is that robbie lol
wow robbie your soo busy on your phone
your bro is landing and shivz 😆
wow its the same girl from the mandir
kasturi you now have to get the job 😆
you know what i really like your FF its very orignal
keep up the great work
and whats this a cliff hanger 😆
cant wait to read part 4
keep up the great work
👏
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luv
hummy


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Posted: 16 years ago
#57
great part!
Noooo you cant stop there! i really wanted to see how they would have reacted to each other!
Aww robbie is soo sweet and he already likes kas
continue soon please, cant wait to find out what happens next
Aaliyah
Edited by AH01 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58
ka again met wid robs
rab ne mila di jodi
i luv to see roka cute luvstory
i like this part
update soon

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Posted: 16 years ago
#59
i like it alot
keep up da gud work
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Posted: 16 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: annu08

hi iread all the 3 parts they are very nice .....THANKS..

all the charaters are well sketched and the best thing hapeened robbie kasturi met in the 2nd part only...YEP...I'M QUICK...
well iam sure kasturi will get the job and vrinda too...OH YEAH THEY BOTH LL....
looking forwrd for your ff😛
update soon

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