NEW FF: YeH ZiNdAgi UPDATED PART 5..PG 11 JAN 9-09 - Page 7

Originally posted by: PrInCeZz07

Hey
sorry i dont know your name
how are you?..GOOD..
okay just logged on today and just saw that wow you started a new FF and that to your first one
Congrats on that ....THANKS///
and i know you will keep all us kasturians rocked on to your FF ...SURE...
ill comment as i go along 😉

Character Sketch:

Kasturi: a middle class girl but who is modern thats going to be interesting. aww her parents and sisters died bless but shes got a brother. aww...YEAH I DIDN'T WANT HER PARENTS TO BE IN THIS FF....

Raunak: omg his kasturis brother. Yayyy atleast this way i wont hate him now and he cant interfere in between roka. First time im reading raunak being kasturis bro and he loves robbies sister wow. twists i tell you lol....YEAH I DIDN'T ROUNAK TO INTERFERE IN OUR ROKA LIFE....

Virinda:aww katsuris best mate i think im going to like her in your FF ....THANKS...

Ka ra vri bros and sis and best buddys always tehir for each other right
going to be soo interesting ..I HOPE SOO....

I like devika and puru in your FF 😃THANKS
Anita omg thank god shes robbies sister well shes married and a lil son too HEHEHEH.....I DON'T LIKE HER...SO I GAVE HER THIS ROLE...ANYWAYS SHE WON'T BE SEEN THAT MUCH....
that means robbies an uncle 😛
Robbie aww who wouldn't fall for him 😆😳😳
Yug thats going to be interesting too ...YEP.//
shivani the youngest but she has a crush on ruanak too 😆 😆i guess her and kasturi would be good mates if they did meetYEP
Loved the character sketch ⭐️⭐️TTHANKS

Part 1:
kasturi already up. 😛
😆 is that how vrinda is she cant have patience lol...YEAH...
Vrinda nad kasturi applied at the same company ..YEP THEIR LUCK...
yay thats going to be intresting and they need the money bad lol😭
Kasturi balck and white salwar
and black hoops go kasturi MATCHING..RIGHT....
takes Vrinda for ever to get ready 😆YEAH SHE'S A SLOW POKE.....

hey hey robbie you woke up late and that to for picking your PA YEAH HE IS A LITTLE ..DING DONG...
you too in black and white roka coordinated heyWANTED THEN TO MATCH....
awww omg robbie too 😲 goes to the mandir and takes aashirwaad thats shocking to me wow
and where kasturi gone to YEAH AND THAT'S WHRN THEY R GONNA FIRST MEET....

btw love the title Yeh Zindagi ....THANKS ALOT.......
part was great
👏
😃
-Hummy

Hey I just read the 3rd part of ur FF and it was great Kasturi and Viranda came to give an interview hope Kasturi gets chosen for the Job she keeps on bumping into Robbie lol YEAH...I WANT HER TO GET FAMILIAR WITH THAT BODY WHOM SHE IBUMPING INTO ALOT,.....anyways great part I really loved it keep up the great job it was funny the way you put Dhum Dhum at the end it gave a dramatic effect THANKS😆

Update Soon

Love Mariam xx

Originally posted by: PrInCeZz07

Part 2:
aww i hope your better now ..I AM....THANKS
woww kasturi falling omg dont fallSHE'LL BE FINE,....
wow robbie caught her 😉
wow roka meet so soon YEAH...
yay
woop woop
wow kasturi calm down 😳😳
you going like that HEHEHEHE
😆 robbie dont worry i guess you'll meet her sooner than you expect OH YEAH....
wow vrinda all in blue hey hey 😆😆😆
now you think of robbie kasturi
😆 kasturi no lectures like tulsi todayYEAH....
lucky one for you vrinda
wonder whats going to happen now
roka getting the same feeling
going to be interesting

Originally posted by: robbii

omg kas was waiting so much time to get her chance for inter view...but it was a lunch break fo robbie...ufff... YEAH ROBBIE IS JUS A VERY BUSY GUY.....😊😊😊

wow the person whome she bumped was robbie... YEP

lo i love that DUM DUM DUM...heeeTHANKS ALOT.....

godd work keep it up👏😳😳

Originally posted by: swan20

Aww kasturi bumped into robbie agaiin.....YEP....she's one lucky girl....😆 😆..I AGREE WITH U ...so will she get the job now......already robbie thinks she's rude for not thanking him earlier...........waiting to know......😛

Originally posted by: AH01

great part! thanks alot

Noooo you cant stop there! i really wanted to see how they would have reacted to each other!...sorryyy

Aww robbie is soo sweet and he already likes kas😛😛

continue soon please, cant wait to find out what happens nextsure i ll post the nxt part today

Aaliyah

Originally posted by: cutykoo20

ka again met wid robsyep
rab ne mila di jodi😆😆
i luv to see roka cute luvstory
i like this part thanks....
update soon

Originally posted by: muneefah

i like it alot thanks
keep up da gud work😃😃

Here is the nxt part'hope u guys like it'

Sorry for the late part and late reply's''.

Part 4:

When Robbie saw that he had bumped into kasturi..his heart started beating fast because she was looking so cute and attractive with her angry face..he bent down and started helping her to collect her papers'..

ROB: hi

KAS: tum

ROB: haan mein'(yes me)...(with a naughty smile on his face he said)..kya tum kisi aur ka intezar kar rahi thi'.(were u waiting for someone else)..

KAS: tum mera peecha karte karte yaahaan bhi a puhnche'..(u followed me all the way down here)'( robbie amazed as to wat this girl was saying)..and btw mein kisi ka bhi intezar nahin kar rahi thi'.(I was not waiting for anyone)

(Robbie was about to say something back to her when at the same time VRINDA comes there')

VRI: kasturi tum yahaan ho'mein kab se tum ko dhond rahi hoon'.mein nai tumhara cell bhi try kia per who bhi oof mila'r u ok na'( u r here I was looking all around for u..i tryed yr cell but it was off)

KAS: (getting more irritated)'haan meri ma'(yes my mother)'(calming down and smiling)'.ab tum batao tum itna khush kyun dikh rahoi ho'..(now u tell me why r u looking soo happy)

VRI: (very happy) kasturi'who'who..mujhe

KAS: who'who'mujhe kya VRINDA'Itna suspense kyon khila rahi hai Bata bhi dey'(why r u making so much suspense now tell me already)

VRI: ok'who actually kasturi mujhe job mil gayi hai...as a PA of Mr. Chote sabarwal'.

KAS: Mr. Chote sabarwal'who the heck is he????

( both of the girls didn't notice that robbie was still standing there and was listening to their conversation'.his focus was basically on kasturi'he was looking at how her facial expressions changed after every 2 seconds'from happy she becomes sad'frm sad to mad'and many more'but as he heard VRI saying Mr. Chote sabarwal'uski hansi chooot gayi and he stared cracking up'when he noticed that he was really loud he looked around and saw everyone was looking at him'even VRI and KAS'there was a question in every ones mind that why is he laughing soooo much...he understood why everyone was looking at him and he said'

RO: it was my bro he sended me a txt message and as quickly he said that'he left frm there'went away only 2 feet away to hear the rest of their concersation..

VRI: wat a weirdo'(as VRI said that kasturi felt bad and said)

KAS: Vrinda aisa nahin kahte'(robbie was very amazed that she was telling VRinda not to say like that abt him)..

VRI:'ok miss peacefulness'.i won't say like that again'anyways'meri choor ..tu bata tera kya bana'abhi tak interview diya bhi hai kay nahin'(anyways u tell wat happened have u given yr interview yet or not')

KAS: nahin kanya mein subah 10:00 baje se intezar kar rahin hoon but meri bari nahin ayi'wooh MR. Robbie Saberwal (upnon hearing his name uske kay kaan karhe ho gaye) kay office mein itni saray log thay kay meri bari abhi tak nahin ayi'.pata nahin who kis tarah kay admi hongay kyunki abhi tak jitni bhi larkion nay interview diya hai they have all gotten rejected'bas meri bhagwan say ek hi dua hai kay mujhe yah job mil jaye'(I have been waiting since 10 my turn hasn't come yet'he had sooo many people in his office'I don't even know wat kind of man he is..cuz all the girls whom he have had interviewd so far have had gotten turned down'I only have one wish frm bhagwan that I get this job)

VRI: apne aap be bharosa rakh'..tujhe yeh job definetly milegi'(believe in yrself u will definetly get this job)'aab calo aao kuch kha letien hain warna 2:00 baje se pehle tu kuch milne wala nahin'(now lets go and have something to eat cuz we r not goona get anything before 2)

(by saying that they both leave frm there)

Robbie: (in his mind)'to yeh meri PA kay liyeh apply jarney ayi hai'(so she came here to get interview as my PA)'isse to yeh job zaroor milegi..(she will definetly get this job)'Naughty smile)'aab ayei ga na maza..(now starts the fun time..)

With saying that he also leaves from there.

...plzz comment..ll be waiting for them...

enjoy....

i might not cum online for a while....so wishing every1 a happy new year......