FF-kaysaa hai yeah bandhan?? NEW-part 46&47 pg 85 - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: GAPS

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Me first..!!!!!..jaanu..so sweet of u..you reserved the post the give u r impressive comments first.
First of all congos dear for the FF. ⭐️⭐️⭐️ thank u
another FF and i'm all happy becos it'll give me more space form the tragic original story line.😃 true
The story is really cool dear👏. I liked the concept. Kassy, a rich girl with attitude..hm..sounds too cute.😳 the way you described kassy was really good.⭐️👏 I love it when the minutest details are given extra care in the story⭐️.thank u I dont think Robbie is a mechanic. becos i'm having an intusion yaar that Ro is someone in the company.Or else why shd Puru introduce him to kassy of all the other workers. 😉 good guess..i know u r a smart girl..
I do hope to see some garam fights😳😳 yep...u will see but in one way...cuz my robbie is a sweet heart...and then a cute, sweet, lovely beautiful love story...!😳 for sure
and i wish you all the best for your work dear!!🤗🤗
Keep rocking .😃 thank u once again
jaanu

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: swan20

Robbii...............CONGRATULATIONS on starting your 1st FF..thank u..........I'm so happy.........can't wait for it to unfold.....😃 soon will be unfold

Wow the beginning is just awesome......😳..........Kasturi belonging to a rich family..........thats a welcome change from the middle class girl we've been seeing.....😊.............loved the way u've described her.....thanks again😳
Robbie sounds hoooooootttttt......😉.............what attitude man.....😆...........thats the way to grab a girl's attention.....😉.true...........methinks he's not just a mechanic......😉. good guess...........looking forward to some exciting nok-jhok between him & kasturi....😳 for sure
Will wait eagerly for the next part.........Great job....😃thanks

Edited by robbii - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shanu333

omg!!shumii di!!cant blv u r writing FF!! dear it is just a try...cant wait 2 read it!! will try to read by tmr coz got loads of hwk 2 do!!lol hwk and studies always comes first...FF last.even u dont read...never mind cuz u r studies r more important than my FF

luvs,
shanu

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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART-2
kasturi don't want to spent much time in unit 6...with a 'h...i' to robbie she moved on to unit 7.the factory was on the ground floor ...offices on the first floor.puru took her to the first floor to show her office. all the officer's cabins were on the left hand side .on the right hand side cubicals were arranged for assistants staffs both ladies and gents to sit.the officers cabin's front walls were made up of transparent white unbreakable fiber so that they can see their staffs working from their respective places.
puru opened one of the newly furnished cabin ...
puru: "kasturi yeah hai thumhaara cabin..."...she really liked it cuz it was neatly furnished with her favorite colour baby blue.
puru: "i have some work to do in my office..mai thum say baad mai mil tha huon." he went.kasturi slowly went and sat on the revolving chair...she was very very tired both physically and mentally.'uufff...'yeah office sambhaal na koi aasaan kaam nahee hai...nanima teek kahaa tha' she was worried .she don't have the mood to look in to any files.she raised her eyes to see the time on the wall clock...it was 4:15 pm.omg...she did not expect that it will be 4:15pm...so fast the time went...the office hours was from 9am to 5pm..1pm to 1:30pm lunch break.saturday half a day for assistants staffs and holiday for officers.
she want to leave the office ...she stood up from the chair...her body was aching cuz of the stress...she walked out of her cabin.while she was passing by her next cabin...she was surprised to see through the glass wall the 6 feet man standing in side the cabin showing his back to her...searching some thing from the cabinet....'omg...this back is familier to me'...the same blue thin striped white shirt...build up body...yes the same KHADOOS MECHANIC...she became wild...she forcefully pushed the door and entered in...
kasturi: yeah...you...MECHANIC...what the hell u r doing here??her words and voice were sooo rude...
he was still searching in his cabinet...don't even bothered to turn towards her...
kasturi: i am asking u ? don't u have the MANNERS to reply??? her pitch was high.
robbie took out the file from the cabinet and turned towards her....
robbie:'i hope u know the same MANNERS to get the permission before u enter in to my office...'he said in a very slow tone
kasturi: my office??? 😡what do u mean by my office!!!!😡...she shouted in a low voice...
before robbie say some thing to kasturi he saw a man standing near the door...'araay shankar ram ji...andher aayeah...😊" he walked towards his table ...and kept the file on the table.
shankar ram: 'sir aaj shaam ka mayraa permission.....' yesterday itself he asked half an hour permission to go home early today to celebrate her 8 years old daughter's birth day.
robbie: wo tho mai kal hee sanction kar diyaa...aap ghar chaleyeah..aap ke bayti inthazaar kar thee ho gee..
when he was about to go "ek minute"...said robbie ... took his black purse from his pant side pocket ...removed 3 hundred rupees bill and gave it to shankar ram.." bayti kay lieah kuch gift ghareeth kay thay naa mayri tharaf say.."
shankar ram: rahanay dtho na sir... aap nahee aayean gay...?" before robbie could answer him..
kasturi:" i was going on asking u ...u don't have the manners to answer me...what are u doing in this office..??'again she raised her voice.
shankar ram got surprised to see her questioning robbie..
shankar ram: "mam...yeah tho inka office hai...robbie sir unit 6 kay executive engineer hai...inkay neechay thakreeban soow workers kaam karthay hain...cabin kay baahar robbie sir ka name board laga huwaa hai.aap nay nahee thayghay?" said very politely
kasturi taken aback with shankar ram's reply😲...suddenly her face became red...she couldn't speak...walked out with the same forced she entered...
shankar ram looked at robbie sadly..robbie read his face...
robbie: aap fikar math kariyeah...foreign return ladkiyaan aisay hee hothay hai..ghuth ko bahuth hosheeyaar samachthay hai...aap jalthee ghar jaayeyeah aur bayti ka birth day manaayeah..
shankar ram: aap nahee aayean gay....
robbie: oh...sorry...muchay kal kay seminar kay leah prepare kar na hai...
shankar ram went out...robbie came back to his seat and started doing his work as if nothing happend...
Edited by robbii - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#15

Hey robbii

Good start to your FF 👏

I really like the idea and concept, loving the hot, manly Robbie 😳
the modern and confident Kasturi is great to read
Looking forward to their interactions, should be funny with sparks flying everywhere 😉
The serial has nothing to offer us right now, we might as well live the RoKa dreams through FF
I dont even feel like posting much here, just read whats happening and thats it, i felt i had to comment on your effort to write a FF 😊
Keep up the good work, the FFs getting interesting now 👍🏼
Kay
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow u r very quick with your updates....😊
wow robbie's got tons of attitude.....😉...........when he said foreign returned ladkiyan aisi hi hoti hai..........good one....😆
looking forward to some major fireworks in the office .....😉
Great going....😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
robbie da attitude guy-hain?????????????
foreign larkiyo wala dialogue bohat cute tha
overall,nice part
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oh wow!!!!! what a great ff u made robbii👏 i really really enjoyed it. It was so cool😎
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Very nice Awesome!!!! Great work.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Kay

Hey robbii hi kay

Good start to your FF 👏 thank u

I really like the idea and concept, loving the hot, manly Robbie 😳
the modern and confident Kasturi is great to read...yep..i noticed for my first part just a thanks post from u.for my second part u made a separate posting.that shows u r really impressed with it.
Looking forward to their interactions, should be funny with sparks flying everywhere 😉 definitely
The serial has nothing to offer us right now, we might as well live the RoKa dreams through FF.that is the main reason i started this FF
I dont even feel like posting much here, just read whats happening and thats it, i felt i had to comment on your effort to write a FF 😊...exactly
Keep up the good work, the FFs getting interesting now 👍🏼 thank u
Kay

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