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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey y r u thankin me
i shall thank u 4 readin my ff
neways ur welcum
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Posted: 16 years ago
#42
lovely mindblowing awsome keep it up👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: noor k

lovely mindblowing awsome keep it up👍🏼

omg!!!!!!!thanks alot
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow an amazing part! 😃
keep up the good work!! 👍🏼👏
Edited by AH01 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: AH01

wow an amazing part! 😃

keep up the ood work!! 👍🏼👏

thanks alot 4 ur praise....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46
muneefah! kya story hai!! awsome!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi babes!
Awesome job with the FF!
Loved the first part, it was really different from what I've read in other FF's.
=) Cant wait to see more of my RoKa! Keep it up!
-- Mimi
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow maza agaya that was complete different twist i didnt expect from no where

very very good start and it seems really intersting. but htis rohan is really badvery shakki

bahut hi accha tha

ab batao kasturi ka kya hoga jaldi se

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: mimi0295

Hi babes!

Awesome job with the FF!
thanks
Loved the first part, it was really different from what I've read in other FF's.
thanks buh didnt u liked my 2nd part😕
=) Cant wait to see more of my RoKa! Keep it up!
thanks
-- Mimi

Edited by muneefah - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#50

Dis part of my ff has been dedicated to u sara(sarareimoo1) coz da last time da comments dat u made on my ff(part 2) really touched my heart so dis part where RoKa meet has been dedicated to u sara.u made my day by doin such a huge tareef so dis is 4 u.Hope u like it

___________________________________ ~~~~part 3~~~~
okay guys!so here is a question 4 u.Who do u think is da next door neighbour of Rohan.U guys must hav guessed it.Yea,it is none oder den Robbie sabharwal(if u remember,both of dem lived in mississauga-rite?well,dey lived in da same street aswell).So here's a q=wen Robbie was headin home & had reached his home-whom did he see??????

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Robbie had reached his home.He got off his car to open da gate of his house when he saw a lady sitting on a bench.He was quite astonished to see an alone lady outside late night & in such a weather when it was raining cats & dogs.He decided to go & ask da lady what was da matter.

Kasturi was sittin on da bench motionless.She had no idea of her surroundings.She was lost in her thoughts wen Robbie came to him

Robbie:maa'm

No reply from kasturi

Robbie:maa'm

still no reply

Robbie:maa'm(& he shook kasturi)

Kasturi came back to earth & said:Jee?app ne kuch kaha

Robbie:maa'm I think u r not well.& its late night.I think u should go home.Is waqt larkiyo ka akelay bahir rehna waisay bhe theek nahe hota

at dis,Kasturi raised her head

Robbie:oh my Gosh!u r bleeding.U need medical attention.I can take u to a hospital if u say so

Kasturi:nahe.Theek hai.

Robbie:aisay kaisay theek hai.Maa'm i think u should go home right away

Kasturi:i have no home.I m homeless.Funny na?buh i m home less

Robbie:u mean u hav no home?

Kasturi:na

RObbie:if u want to u can spend tonight at my place.I live alone buh if its okay with u,u can stay.I think u should come.Its not safe here.

Kasturi gradually got up,& as she got up she lost control over herself & passed out.Robbie caught her in time.Kasturi had fainted & Robbie had actually saved her from falling.Robbie took her into her arms & took her inside his house.He called da doctor.Da doctor gave Kasturi an injection & asked Robbie to come out of the room as he wanted to talk about something.

Doctor:Its not a big issue.She just fainted due to the weather & because she is stressed.I think she has been badly abused.I think u should take an appointment from the lawyer.Neways its ur personal problem.It was jus my opinion.She has fever right now.I hav given her an injection.She'll come back to normal by tommorrow morning.& I hav bandaged her bruise dat she had on her forehead

Robbie:thanku doctor.

Doctor:no problem.Just make sure she takes her medicine.

Robbie:okay

After da doctor went,Robbie went into Kasturi's room to see if she was okay & saw da multiple bruises on her arms,neck.He felt sympathetic & sorry 4 Kasturi.He sat near Kasturi, on a sofa & started reading a magazine.What he didn't knew was dat he had just found da girl of hIS dream

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okay guy!!!quickly teme!!how was dis part where RoKa meet.boring?good?pathetic?hopeless?awesome?plz teme.i'll wait impatiently.

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Edited by muneefah - 16 years ago

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