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Posted: 16 years ago
#31

omg😲...good start👏👏👏...awaiting for u r next part to know who is rohan...y kasturi was in his house...

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Posted: 16 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: shanu333

omg omg omg!!!muneefah!!

awesome part dear!!

another suspense story?? i just luvv itt!!

update fast

mwahh!!

ps...poor kas getting tortured by stupid rohan!!who is rohan??

well u'll find whose rohan in da next part-part2 will b informative
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: robbii

omg😲...good start👏👏👏...awaiting for u r next part to know who is rohan...y kasturi was in his house...

thanks
ill update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
okay guys....her cums part2..hope u like it..
~~~~part 2~~~~

Gradually after gaining some patience, Kasturi stared walking out of he house.Her forehead was bleeding.There were multiple bruises on her neck & arms due to da beating Rohan often did to Kasturi.She was wearin a white shalwar kameez without duppatta as her duppatta had fallen somewhere durin the fight.Infront of Rohan's house there was a bench Kasturi went & sat there.She was frightened & cold.She needed shelter.She was lost in her thoughts & was wondering what changes had taken place in her life just in 2 months.She was recallin her past.Memories were flashing in her minds of when she was happy really happy but now she was nowhere-simply nowhere

PAST

Kasturi was happily living with her family in New delhi.They were well-settled.His dad worked in a factory & he was earning good enough to support his family,to fullfill all dere needs.Kasturi's family was a complete family.They were wid each oder in good times as well as bad times.Kasturi had just completed her education.It had just been a month since her final result of B.A was out & she had passed with good respectful marks.Her younger sisters were doin well until one night when JP was cumin back from his work,he had a car accident & from den onwards dere life changed.Kasturi's father remained in hospital for 2 weeks & wen he recovered he wasn't as before.His legs had expired.He coudn't stand on his feet nemore.He coudn't walk on his own.JP coudn't work nemore so he lost his job.The bad times 4 da Chawlas started.All dere savings had been used in JP's medical.Dey had no savings left.Kasturi knew dat now all da responsibilty had fallen on her shoulders.She knew dat now she would have to work & support all her family as well as compete JP's medication.She started lookin 4 a job.She tried & tried but luck wasn't with her.she didnt get a job becoz of da fact dat she had no experience of work.At dat time,New delhi was sufferin from inflation & da Chawla's coudn't afford it so dey decided to move to Banaras.Kasturi's younger sisters had to leave dere education.Dey moved to Banaras.Dere Kasturi & kaushalia would sew sari's blouses & watever dere income would b dey would use i to fullfill da basic needs of life.But hard times didnt seem to pass & kasturi wasn't earning enough to support her family buh still she kept trying.

One day,wen she came back home after takin a order of sari's blouses,she saw dat all her family was v.happy.Seeing happiness on everybody's faces Kasturi became happy too & asked

Kasturi:kya howa

Kaushalia:bhagvan ne humari sunle.Bohat jald humarey ghar mein khusia aney wali hai

Kasturi:haa maa!leken howa kya

Kasturi:kasturi puttar!tumhara rishta aya hai.Bohat he ache aur unche(high) log hai.Woh yaad hai na kal jab tum sarioo ka order leney gaeey the,bus ushe waqt to aik larke ne tumhe dekha aur ushe waqt tumhe pasand karliye aur abhe thori dair pehle he wo tumhara rishta dey kar gaye hai.

Kasturi coudn't believe her ears.She didn't want to marry right now.She had dreams & she wanted to fullfill dem

Kaushalia:kya howa puttar

Kasturi:kuch nahe maa!bus aisay he.Mein zara fresh hokar aati ho.

JP:ishe kya howa

Kaushalia:kuch nahe!bus aisay he sharma gaye

Late night kasturi was sitting & thinking dat what is goin to happen now wen Kaushalia came

Kaushalia:i know.Mein janti ho ke tum shaadi abhe nahe karna chahte.Tumne kuch khawab dekhey hai aur tum unhe poora karna chahte ho leken Kasturi beta meri baat samajhne ki koshish karo.Humaray ghar key halaat ne humme majboor kardiya hai ke hum ye faisla le.Ye jo rishta aya hai ya ameer logo ke ghar se aya hai.aggar tum is shaadi key liya haan kardo to na sirf humarey ghar ke halaat behter ho ge bulke tumhary behno ko bhe faeeda hoga.Wo bari hogaye hai,un ke bhe rishte anay shoroo hogaye hai aur aggar aik beti ache ghar jaye ge to bakiyo ke bhe ache he rishtey aye ge.Tum samajh rahe ho na meri baat.Waisay larka bura nahe hai.Larke ka naam hai Rohan.Dikhne mein acha khasa hai bus tum se umar mein thora ziada hai leken itna to chalta he hai.Tu vilayat(bahir ke mulk) jaye ge aur phir tu waha pe bhe to apni parhaye puri kar sakti hai.Meri baat maan Shaadi ke liye ha karde.aggay teri marzi.Haan?

Kasturi:app chahte hai ke main haan kardo

Kaushalia:haan beta.

Kasturi:to phir theek hai,leken shaadi bohat saadgi se hoge.

Kaushalia:jaise teri marzi

& Kaushalia left.Kasturi already had tears in her eyes & now she bursted into cryin.she cried all night.Buh den decided dat it was a decision she had taken 4 her family & now she was goin to fullfill it.

After 1 week,her marriage took place & she accepted Rohan from her heart.The next day after her marriage she had to go with Rohan to Canada(mississauga) as dats where Rohan lived.She said goodbye to all her family members & went to Canada.When she finally reached Rohan's house,Den kasturi saw da real Rohan.He used to beat her,hit her,torture her,abuse her & wat not.Before Rohan went to office,he would lock Kasturi in da house so dat she coudn't go out.Everyday,Everyday would b a punishment 4 Kasturi.Rohan used to torture Kasturi as he believed dat Kasturi is cheatin on him & meets a guy late night.Its been a month like dis 4 Kasturi,Everyday gettin tortured & finally Rohan had tonight thrown her out of da house

BACK TO PRESENT
& here she was sitting in front of Rohan's house.It had started to rain.Kasturi was v.cold buh she didnt care as she was busy cryin.

On da other hand,Robbie Sabharwal, da gym owner,was on his way back home from gym.

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okay guy!!i took a long time to write dis,do teme how it is
Edited by muneefah - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35

OMG what a story.......Kasturi is already married.....😲 😲........didn't expect that!!!!!!..........Rohan is such a 🤬 🤬.........i could kill him!!!......Poor Kasturi.......all alone in a foreign country living with this monster....😭...........You know i've heard stories of this actually happening......its so sad.....😔

So she's going to meet Robbie now.....wow can't wait....😳.......i hope he gets her out of this hell hole....😭
Really nice story dear......can't wait to see how it unfolds...😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: swan20

OMG what a story.......Kasturi is already married.....😲 😲........didn't expect that!!!!!!..........Rohan is such a 🤬 🤬.........(oh dat he is)i could kill him!!!(same here)......Poor Kasturi.......all alone in a foreign country living with this monster....😭...........You know i've heard stories of this actually happening......its so sad.....😔(i know)

So she's going to meet Robbie now.....wow can't wait....😳.......i hope he gets her out of this hell hole....😭(oh!!dun' woryy!!dat he will)
Really nice story dear......can't wait to see how it unfolds...😃
(thanks)

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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
WHAT A STORY!!
FIRST MUNEEFAH TAKE A BOWW!!!
AND THAT EVEN A VERY BIG ONE!!!
U R TALENTED BABES!!! U R A CREATIVE WRITER!!
EK DUM HATKE STORY JHAKAAS!!
I FEEL AS IF I AM READING A NOVEL!!!! mY GOD!!!!
u rocckkKK BABY!! I AM HOOKED UP TO READING UR FF!!...anYTYME!!!! and i seriously LOve These kinds OF story kYunKE dukh ke Baad hi PyaAR ka Maza MeetHA HoTa HaiN!!...LOL!!!!!!!..LOVED ITTTTT!!..and My Kasturi (kAsTUUU)) is the typical BenAras avAtAR!! WOOHHo!! and RObbIE!! GAWD!! At Last Lil introductIon OF HIm GiVEENNN!!!...GO BABYY!! WAITING!!! and PLEASE PM ME!!!!!..PLEASE! WHENVER iTS UpdaTED!

SARA!!
Edited by sarareimoo1 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
the start is really good i like it so far. gud job👍🏼 do tell me if u pdate the next part
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: sarareimoo1

WHAT A STORY!!

FIRST MUNEEFAH TAKE A BOWW!!!
AND THAT EVEN A VERY BIG ONE!!!
U R TALENTED BABES!!! U R A CREATIVE WRITER!!
EK DUM HATKE STORY JHAKAAS!!
I FEEL AS IF I AM READING A NOVEL!!!! mY GOD!!!!
u rocckkKK BABY!! I AM HOOKED UP TO READING UR FF!!...anYTYME!!!! and i seriously LOve These kinds OF story kYunKE dukh ke Baad hi PyaAR ka Maza MeetHA HoTa HaiN!!...LOL!!!!!!!..LOVED ITTTTT!!..and My Kasturi (kAsTUUU)) is the typical BenAras avAtAR!! WOOHHo!! and RObbIE!! GAWD!! At Last Lil introductIon OF HIm GiVEENNN!!!...GO BABYY!! WAITING!!! and PLEASE PM ME!!!!!..PLEASE! WHENVER iTS UpdaTED!

SARA!!

oh my god thanu sooooooo much 4 such a huge tareef.i feel like i m flyin in da air..oh my god!!!novel compared wid my ff...sooooooooo sweet..no no,i dun't rock,u rock....lolz..don't worry ill pm u weneva ff is updated...yea next part robbie will b dere.dun worry n once again thanks 4 all da tareef
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: robbieluvr

the start is really good i like it so far. gud job👍🏼 do tell me if u pdate the next part

thanks
yea sure
ill tell u

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