FF:Jaane Tu.....Yaa Jaane Naa [NOTE-Page 30] - Page 15

Originally posted by: PrInCeZz07

Okay Part 1:
Great intro
awwee,,,,thank u sooo much humz😃
Kasturi chawla she got everything she wanted, but she never got what she needed (loved that sentence)
lol...i neva thot everyone wud luv tht dialogue😳
awwwww she never got her sisters and mothers love awwwwwwww bless 🤗🤗
right her big dai 2morow i wonder why
ull find out tht by part 7😛
right i was going to say that is one of the shortest parts ive ever read 😆😆😆
go on! join the gang😆😆

Part 2:
wow i cn imagine kasturi in a beautiful white gown, and her hair tied up (i dont blame ganga she must be looking so preety right now lolz)
lol humz...agree wid u not ganga's fault😉
awwwwwww Vicky u bought your di chocs
wheres mine??????????? 😆
dnt worry someday I will bring u some😳😳
😆 aap bhi lecture de te huw seedhe seedhe kawo naa lolz
thats good kasturis got some one to cheer her up right now
yea lol
wow as kasturi is going to sleep a paper plain hits her face 😕 wonder where that came from
lol...ull get to kno soon😊
another short part lolz
lol...u rly r a part of the gang now😆😆

Part 3:
😆
Bani sent a message in d middle of the night
a crazy freind or what lolz
lol....she surely is one crazzy girl😆
Phitte moo ho tera!wow i never knew that meant idiot lolz
oi shivz phitte moo ho tera!!! 😆😆😆
Gaddhi shivz
humz! maine tumhara kya bigara hai?
jo bhi ho
good luck with this FF (becuase im gna b reading it now lolz, hehe)
lol...thxx😃
wow i was going to say lolz do they live opposite each other or something?
but then i thought they must have a bird or somethign which delivers their messages 😆 gr8
LMAO humz! I dun blv in this birdie thing....It sounds weird😆
but yh omg dy live opposite each other
gr8 idea shivz as they dont have a phone in those times (will make it easier if roka do ever fall in love for them hehe- wel robbie secretly loves her but vice versa u knw) 😆😆
lol.....thx 4 the idea😆 ill think of putting it😆

Part 4:
wow a long part finaly
lol...thx😆
wow robbie standing at the balcony wohoooo kasturi im comign to stay down your house
humz! u r too much🤣
so i can just stare at robbie lolz
awww uve got a weird feeling
what is happening tomorrow????
big day for kasturi
big day for robbie
😕😕
be patient yaar!😆
awwwwwwww papa love raunak more then you robbie (dont wori u got us girls to love you more then raunak lmao)
LMAO! ur rite! we r there to luv robbie☺️
awwww robbies english is bad bless
yh thats true robbie not only them but were all with you lolz
lol😆😆
(stil hard 4 me 2 imagine robbie in the 70's lolz)
awwww robbie dont feel bad
your nt a curse on your family
🤗🤗🤗
yea....our duffer needs to understand tht😆

Part 5:
wow wel u writ this part half way in night (wel with you waking up really early middle of nyt or sleepin at that time lolz im not shokd lol)
humz!dnt u kno im weird😆
wow robbie wakes up early
at 8:00am 😲 lolz
lol....hes not lazy like me😆😆
Mes omg thats worse then my slang lolz lmao im jokin 70's ay
noooo! ure slang is much better!!!😃
😲robbies very different then our normal rockstar he has a pik of god in his room wel done robbie 👏👏
yep...he is vry diff.😛
😆bad luck is that what you mean awwwwwwww
water wnt when you were in shower when you had all soap awwwwwwwwww 😳
omg that evil raunak (bandar lolz) is dre as well
you can shut up raunak as if youd know about fashion 🥱😆although your a movie star uhum uhum lol
lmao....humz!i cnt stop laffing😆
aww freezing cold water bless
white balck shirt (checkerd 70's fashion yh)
omg puru how can you do that to your son why you so evil 🥱
and bani bari????????????/
get told you just got disses puru lolz lmao
lol....puru is one big fool😆
awwwwwwww bani your so sweet
but raunak ur soooooo not
😆 omg i love bani shes great: YH U DOG !! better stop barking !!!! or else huh go bani
lol...i just luv bani's witty dialogues😆
awww puru u sad because u got dissed by your daughter, and bani took the mick out of your son who is a dog lolz (in the FF)
LMAO! humz! ur too much!!!😆
awwww bani dont cry 🤗

Kasturi
u daynt want the dai 2 come did u
no she didnt😳
awwwwwww kasturi bet you were looking really preety in black and red
lolz hehe kasturi evry where in the mag (very popular)
yea...lol😃
thats so sweet vickys always tehir 4 kasturi (i hope he always is 2)
dnt worry...he will always be😳
vicky, either your sleepy or hungry thats it is that all you do lolz
yep...lol...he s just like me😆😆
omg roka thinking the same thing, and praying 4 it
yeshh...they have kismat konnection😉
wel robbie kasturi gna be their 4 u i hope
yes she will😳
and kasturi robbie gna be dre 4 u i hope
yes he will😳
Okay get one thing right Shivz that part was not boring. get that? dont sai that again
awwe...humz u r just too sweet!😳😳
it was jus sad 😒 bless robbie feels so bad about his dad and bro being mean 2 hm, and kasturi feeling the same awwwwwwwwww
yea....after all they have kismath konnection😉
and yh your banner 😲 its amazing wowwww totaly awesome
awee...thank uu😃
i didnt get to see the old 1 though 😒
old one was n2m.....just glitter text

For what i have read so far your FF is totaly awesome
with all the comments you have got it just proves that every one loves your FF
awwe....thnk uu humz!😃
and im just joining on 2 d list lolz
ok...ill add u to it😊
I knew you were gr8 at making creationz and dt
but such a gr8 FF writer
awwee...thnk uuu😳
im angry with u 😡😡
why?😕
why daynt u start this FF earlier (or shal i sai im angry with ma slf why daynt i read ds ff earlier)\
lol....i think i agrree wid ure 2nd sentence😛
your parts are totlay awesome
thank uu😃
the begining parts were short but thats about it
lol...i know😊
but dn las few part you done them long
keep up the aweosme work
will try my best!😊
il comment on the last 2 parts after i have read them
ok...will w8

👏

Luv
Hummy
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Originally posted by: PrInCeZz07

Okay you know what
you made a game lolz
hehe okay i know im l8 i havent looked at what the answer was as im going through first page after another
I think big night 😕😕 hmm.....................................
Propz a film releasing of
kasturi
and
raunaks
u r rite!😃
& film director is robbie
nooo...robbie dsnt have enough brains to direct a film
😊
😛Okay let me check now lolz
Yayyyyy i was right i gues hehe
CONGRATZ Shumi di on getting it right
Great prize shivz 👏
lol...thxx😊

Part 6:
hehe lolz u writ this part when you went to the immigration office lolz lmao your crazi shivz
lol....i have this notebook i take everywhere i go....when i get time...i start writing😛
😆lol kasturi u dnt wana get ready but you have to
Nandu kaka has to come in nearly every FF init lolz 😆😆
lol....smetimes i feel he is more popular than robbie😆😆
wowwww omg lolz kasturi u fell asleep thats a first any one else wouldnt be able to w8
but i guess your the super star lolz
45 minz wow mega fast 😆
lol....agree wid u....she is super fast😆
wow a whtie lengha omg she must be looking sooooooooo preety (nazar na lag jaye 😆)
yea....she was looking vry pretty😳
wowww what a pik 2 pick lolz
i bet she was looking beautiful allright ans SRK gna be robbie lolz
lol...yea😳
😆 wow ganga u jealous
hehe vicky makes me laugh yeh kuch jal raha hein allright
yea...he is too funny😆
lolz hehe u knw what robbie looking like that hehe
tere baap kahi nahi sudregha lolz lmao go armaan 👏😆
lol....armaan is another joker😆
awwwwwww robbie tum dil ke bohot ache ho
lolz hehe go armann
hehe another funny character
love the song:
Puru is my name
All i want is moneys
lmao 😆😆😆
lol...glad tht u liked it😆😆
armann tum pagal ho
exactlyy😆
okay id love to see them both climbing a window lol
awwww bani was ready
bad idea to get ready u know bani their gna fall of from what their climbing and BANG they'll hurt themselves
lol...they r superheros😆...they wont hurt themselves😆
lolz hehe they daynt fall but hey yeh your bro is always their 4 u
70's affect
totaly awesome
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
awwee,,,thx humz😳

Part 7:
First day + First show = yipee premiere lolz
lol...the most awaited part..lol
btw where were our invites to it? (or was i meant to gate crash it lolz)
we r supposed to bunk in😉😆
wow what a place
fulled decorated omg bohot mazza ayegaa 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
lol...yea...ure type....party type😆
oh damn the producers Prushotum (soz how ever you spell it)
lol...its spelt purushottam😆
yh bani shukr hein bhagwan khaa lol
Villian of the film : ANITA yaha bhi lolz 😆😆
I cudnt stay widout making her evil😈
Anita you show off
she is show off no 1
Raunak Sabharwal
uhum..... cough....cough..... are you feeling allright
have you seen robbie yet????????
lol...i hope he did😆
omg raunak showing off !!!!! i wishe you had fell 🤣 that would have been hilarious lolz
lmao...humz u r too muchh!!!😆😆😆
You got that right most beautiful girl in town::::::::::::::::
Kasturi 👏
tep....she is😳
😆robbie whats so shokcing hey
kasturi walking out
or bani knowing Kassy lolz
lol...he is a duffer! he keeps dreaming of kassy 24X7😆....so tht why he dsnt kno nyhting😆
😆 hehe theres only one kasturi in town im sure lolz (only if all the mothers have named their daughters kasturi after seeing the great star KASTURI lolz)
lol...no...she had a copyrite on the name😆😆😆
omg wow u mean puru u 4got 2 get VIP seats EVIL
no dear...he didnt forget...he purposely did tht😈
great song hey
lol...thxx😃
omg i cn imagine robbie looking at kasturi like that
wowww
anita i have to say thanks to an evil person
thanks for pulling your leg out
or kasturi would never fall in to robbies arms
she is a fool....the more evil stuff she does the more closer roka get😆😆
awwwwwwwwwwwww
u wah
parts over??????????????
no omg ive read all 7 parts.
finnally!😃
well about your FF:
like i have said b4:
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww its awesome im a fan of your FF now shivz
it is totaly awesome, fabulous, mindblowing, amazing...... speechless.............. i cant beleive u can write such a gr8 FF and such gr8 parts
aww...thank uu so much humz!😳
its very unique u knw that
keep up the awesome work
will try my best!😳😳
and you what you had mid term break luky u
Drs just one bit i didnt like
omg!dunt scare me! wht didnt u like??😕
.........
parts were short first, but taht was good in a way because i could readd all your 7 parts in one go lolz
lol....everyone didnt like tht😆😆

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Now update the next part as soon as you can (although your back at school now ..... and yh im not telling you 2 update it in middle of the night)
wonder what happens nxt.
First roka meeting right? yayyyy
will try to update by tonite😊
and thx for the lovley comment humz! Its one of the best ones! and its vry cose to my heart thx😳
Luv Hummy
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Originally posted by: RoKa PraNeev

hi shivaani,
hi neslin😊
i'm a new reader of ur ff......n ur ff is awesome
aww...thank u soo muchh😳
.....woooooo ro already started to fall for ka....yeaaaaaahhhhhh......hmmmmmm i'm a very unlucky person dat wen i started to read ur ff u started to update it little bit lately bcoz of ur schoolz
awwee...no....u r not unlucky at all...plz dun say tht agen ok😳
......awesome part dear
thank u😳
.....ro in his world wid kasturi wud be fantastic.....i've heard the song"tera mujse hai pehla" n its an wesome song form the movie "aa gale lag jaaa" isnt it????
yep it is😊
in that film it is sung by a smal boy named RAHUL.
lol...i never knew tht...thx for telling😊
...anyway ppls pls pls update fast....
will try by tonite😊
.n little more lengthy part....pls...
okk😊
..all the best for ur scholl days!!
thx😳

Neslin Nisar

Originally posted by: RoKa PraNeev

plssssssss post it sooonnn.....plssssssssssssss

robbie's arms are best place in the worls.heee...no wonder.i too want to go to that place lol

Originally posted by: robbii

robbie's arms are best place in the worls.heee...no wonder.i too want to go to that place lol

lol...shumi di, kuch toh sharam kijiye! u r alreadi married😆...give a becharee like me a chance at least😆

and moreover, that place is only reserved for me me and me!😆

tu mera uss ke saath chakar chala na...shiv don't know to translate...so simple dear...every one knows.heeee but i don't know

lol...that dialogue was very witty😆

ganga called armaan as bhaiya...omg

lol..bechara armaan😆

ganga pataka....heeeee i love that comparision.
lol..me too😆

shive i know it is super late up date.but you know it is super cool up date.i love it lol.short and sweet.

awwee...thank u soo much di, its so sweet of u😳

now it is your turn.you have to teach me how to write ff that too short and sweet.

ok..... what will be my fees? or to be more straight forward " how many karans will I get?"😉

Originally posted by: swan20

so happy to see ur update..........😃
m glad😳

everybody was hitting on somebody today........🤣 😉
lol...yea...its one of my favourite parts😆

awwww kasturi in robbie's arms.......😍 .........perfect place to be.......😛.........robbie sweetie kitna khush tha........😳
yea...but kasturi madam! she thot he was eyeing her😆

loved how Bani was eyeing kasturi's bro........u go girl.........😉 😆
lol..she is very chalu😆

Ganga called Armaan bhaisaab........😲 😲........poor guy........i hope he recovers from the shock......😆
lol....don't worry...he will soon😆

great part.......waiting for next part.......😊
ok will update ASAP😃