FF:Jaane Tu.....Yaa Jaane Naa [NOTE-Page 30]

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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

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Posted: 17 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: LAHORIKURI
hey shanuu when r u posting the nxt part...plzzzzzz do it sooon...
thanks

nxt part by tmrw...promise😊

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LAHORIKURI

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Posted: 17 years ago

#132

u said u will post the next part 2morrow,............where r u yaar...missing yr ff

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PrInCeZz07

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Posted: 17 years ago

#133

Okay hey Shivz
i knw im really l8 in reading your FF
but i thought 2 dai ill read it
well im going to try and read all 7 parts 2dai lolz
Wel wowwwwwww u started an FF awesome, loadz of Kasturians have got awesome FF'z and im sure your FF is going to be one of my favz 2 lol

Loved the character sketch
😲😲Kasturi a super star that going to be fun
so alka cha chi in here as well evil (mazza ayega)
Ganga chawla being kasturis sis h8s her (wel why do i have a feeling something will hapen which will bring them close hope that hapens)
Hey Vicky chawla her younger bro awwwwwww

and robbie a famous producer 😳😳
Okay raunak evil in this FF 2 and step bro of robbies 😡 doesnt deserve to b related 2 hm lmao
wowww Bani omg she h8s raunak 4 beign bad with robbie awwwwwwwww and kasturis freind 2 that going to be intresting

Right thats an awesome character sketch
with all the loving ppl
and evil ppl
lol
Luv
hummy

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PrInCeZz07

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Posted: 17 years ago

#134

Okay Part 1:
Great intro
Kasturi chawla she got everything she wanted, but she never got what she needed (loved that sentence)
awwwww she never got her sisters and mothers love awwwwwwww bless 🤗🤗
right her big dai 2morow i wonder why
right i was going to say that is one of the shortest parts ive ever read 😆😆😆

Part 2:
wow i cn imagine kasturi in a beautiful white gown, and her hair tied up (i dont blame ganga she must be looking so preety right now lolz)
awwwwwww Vicky u bought your di chocs
wheres mine??????????? 😆
😆 aap bhi lecture de te huw seedhe seedhe kawo naa lolz
thats good kasturis got some one to cheer her up right now
wow as kasturi is going to sleep a paper plain hits her face 😕 wonder where that came from
another short part lolz

Part 3:
😆
Bani sent a message in d middle of the night
a crazy freind or what lolz
Phitte moo ho tera!wow i never knew that meant idiot lolz
oi shivz phitte moo ho tera!!! 😆😆😆
Gaddhi shivz
jo bhi ho
good luck with this FF (becuase im gna b reading it now lolz, hehe)
wow i was going to say lolz do they live opposite each other or something?
but then i thought they must have a bird or somethign which delivers their messages 😆 gr8 idea hehe
but yh omg dy live opposite each other
gr8 idea shivz as they dont have a phone in those times (will make it easier if roka do ever fall in love for them hehe- wel robbie secretly loves her but vice versa u knw) 😆😆

Part 4:
wow a long part finaly
wow robbie standing at the balcony wohoooo kasturi im comign to stay down your house
so i can just stare at robbie lolz
awww uve got a weird feeling
what is happening tomorrow????
big day for kasturi
big day for robbie
😕😕
awwwwwwww papa love raunak more then you robbie (dont wori u got us girls to love you more then raunak lmao)
awwww robbies english is bad bless
yh thats true robbie not only them but were all with you lolz
(stil hard 4 me 2 imagine robbie in the 70's lolz)
awwww robbie dont feel bad
your nt a curse on your family
🤗🤗🤗

Part 5:
wow wel u writ this part half way in night (wel with you waking up really early middle of nyt or sleepin at that time lolz im not shokd lol)
wow robbie wakes up early
at 8:00am 😲 lolz
Mes omg thats worse then my slang lolz lmao im jokin 70's ay
😲robbies very different then our normal rockstar he has a pik of god in his room wel done robbie 👏👏
😆bad luck is that what you mean awwwwwwww
water wnt when you were in shower when you had all soap awwwwwwwwww 😳
omg that evil raunak (bandar lolz) is dre as well
you can shut up raunak as if youd know about fashion 🥱😆although your a movie star uhum uhum lol
aww freezing cold water bless
white balck shirt (checkerd 70's fashion yh)
omg puru how can you do that to your son why you so evil 🥱
and bani bari????????????/
get told you just got disses puru lolz lmao
awwwwwwww bani your so sweet
but raunak ur soooooo not
😆 omg i love bani shes great: YH U DOG !! better stop barking !!!! or else huh go bani
awww puru u sad because u got dissed by your daughter, and bani took the mick out of your son who is a dog lolz (in the FF)
awwww bani dont cry 🤗

Kasturi
u daynt want the dai 2 come did u
awwwwwww kasturi bet you were looking really preety in black and red
lolz hehe kasturi evry where in the mag (very popular)
thats so sweet vickys always tehir 4 kasturi (i hope he always is 2)
vicky, either your sleepy or hungry thats it is that all you do lolz
omg roka thinking the same thing, and praying 4 it
wel robbie kasturi gna be their 4 u i hope
and kasturi robbie gna be dre 4 u i hope
Okay get one thing right Shivz that part was not boring. get that? dont sai that again
it was jus sad 😒 bless robbie feels so bad about his dad and bro being mean 2 hm, and kasturi feeling the same awwwwwwwwww
and yh your banner 😲 its amazing wowwww totaly awesome
i didnt get to see the old 1 though 😒

For what i have read so far your FF is totaly awesome
with all the comments you have got it just proves that every one loves your FF
and im just joining on 2 d list lolz
I knew you were gr8 at making creationz and dt
but such a gr8 FF writer
im angry with u 😡😡
why daynt u start this FF earlier (or shal i sai im angry with ma slf why daynt i read ds ff earlier)
your parts are totlay awesome
the begining parts were short but thats about it
but dn las few part you done them long
keep up the aweosme work
il comment on the last 2 parts after i have read them

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Luv
Hummy
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PrInCeZz07

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Posted: 17 years ago

#135

Okay you know what
you made a game lolz
hehe okay i know im l8 i havent looked at what the answer was as im going through first page after another
I think big night 😕😕 hmm.....................................
Propz a film releasing of
kasturi
and
raunaks
& film director is robbie
😊
😛Okay let me check now lolz
Yayyyyy i was right i gues hehe
CONGRATZ Shumi di on getting it right
Great prize shivz 👏

Part 6:
hehe lolz u writ this part when you went to the immigration office lolz lmao your crazi shivz
😆lol kasturi u dnt wana get ready but you have to
Nandu kaka has to come in nearly every FF init lolz 😆😆
wowwww omg lolz kasturi u fell asleep thats a first any one else wouldnt be able to w8
but i guess your the super star lolz
45 minz wow mega fast 😆
wow a whtie lengha omg she must be looking sooooooooo preety (nazar na lag jaye 😆)
wowww what a pik 2 pick lolz
i bet she was looking beautiful allright ans SRK gna be robbie lolz
😆 wow ganga u jealous
hehe vicky makes me laugh yeh kuch jal raha hein allright
lolz hehe u knw what robbie looking like that hehe
tere baap kahi nahi sudregha lolz lmao go armaan 👏😆
awwwwwww robbie tum dil ke bohot ache ho
lolz hehe go armann
hehe another funny character
love the song:
Puru is my name
All i want is moneys
lmao 😆😆😆
armann tum pagal ho
okay id love to see them both climbing a window lol
awwww bani was ready
bad idea to get ready u know bani their gna fall of from what their climbing and BANG they'll hurt themselves
lolz hehe they daynt fall but hey yeh your bro is always their 4 u
70's affect
totaly awesome
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Part 7:
First day + First show = yipee premiere lolz
btw where were our invites to it? (or was i meant to gate crash it lolz)
wow what a place
fulled decorated omg bohot mazza ayegaa 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
oh damn the producers Prushotum (soz how ever you spell it)
yh bani shukr hein bhagwan khaa lol
Villian of the film : ANITA yaha bhi lolz 😆😆
Anita you show off
Raunak Sabharwal
uhum..... cough....cough..... are you feeling allright
have you seen robbie yet????????
omg raunak showing off !!!!! i wishe you had fell 🤣 that would have been hilarious lolz
You got that right most beautiful girl in town::::::::::::::::
Kasturi 👏
😆robbie whats so shokcing hey
kasturi walking out
or bani knowing Kassy lolz
😆 hehe theres only one kasturi in town im sure lolz (only if all the mothers have named their daughters kasturi after seeing the great star KASTURI lolz)
omg wow u mean puru u 4got 2 get VIP seats EVIL
great song hey
omg i cn imagine robbie looking at kasturi like that
wowww
anita i have to say thanks to an evil person
thanks for pulling your leg out
or kasturi would never fall in to robbies arms
awwwwwwwwwwwww
u wah
parts over??????????????
no omg ive read all 7 parts.
well about your FF:
like i have said b4:
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww its awesome im a fan of your FF now shivz
it is totaly awesome, fabulous, mindblowing, amazing...... speechless.............. i cant beleive u can write such a gr8 FF and such gr8 parts
its very unique u knw that
keep up the awesome work
and you what you had mid term break luky u
Drs just one bit i didnt like
.........
parts were short first, but taht was good in a way because i could readd all your 7 parts in one go lolz

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Now update the next part as soon as you can (although your back at school now ..... and yh im not telling you 2 update it in middle of the night)
wonder what happens nxt.
First roka meeting right? yayyyy
Luv Hummy
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Edited by PrInCeZz07 - 17 years ago

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Kriya_RoKa luvr

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Posted: 17 years ago

#136

hi shivaani,i'm a new reader of ur ff......n ur ff is awesome.....woooooo ro already started to fall for ka....yeaaaaaahhhhhh......hmmmmmm i'm a very unlucky person dat wen i started to read ur ff u started to update it little bit lately bcoz of ur schoolz......awesome part dear.....ro in his world wid kasturi wud be fantastic.....i've heard the song"tera mujse hai pehla" n its an wesome song form the movie "aa gale lag jaaa" isnt it????in that film it is sung by a smal boy named RAHUL....anyway ppls pls pls update fast.....n little more lengthy part....pls.....all the best for ur scholl days!!

Neslin Nisar

Edited by RoKa PraNeev - 17 years ago

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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

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Posted: 17 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: LAHORIKURI
u said u will post the next part 2morrow,............where r u yaar...missing yr ff

awwee...im soo sorry!😭....i cldnt post it tht day....i promise ill post by today....and thx for ure lovely comment! i had never thot tht someone will miss my FF😳

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mimi0295

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Posted: 17 years ago

#138

OYE! If you dont update in the next 24 hours.. I will come down to HK and kick that littly butt of yours! lol

Edited by mimi0295 - 17 years ago

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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

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Posted: 17 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: mimi0295
OYE! If you dont update in the next 24 hours.. I will come down to HK and kick that littly butt of yours! lol

ok fine! im not gonna update!😃...issi bahane ill get to meet u😉

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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

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Posted: 17 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: PrInCeZz07
Okay hey Shivz
hi humz!
i knw im really l8 in reading your FF
aww...never mind😊
but i thought 2 dai ill read it
well im going to try and read all 7 parts 2dai lolz
ok...hope u like it😃
Wel wowwwwwww u started an FF awesome, loadz of Kasturians have got awesome FF'z and im sure your FF is going to be one of my favz 2 lol
even i hope😃

Loved the character sketch
m glad😊
😲😲Kasturi a super star that going to be fun
so alka cha chi in here as well evil (mazza ayega)
oh shit! i almost 4got bout alkarhx 4 reminding😳
Ganga chawla being kasturis sis h8s her (wel why do i have a feeling something will hapen which will bring them close hope that hapens)
yea...lol..ur rite😛
Hey Vicky chawla her younger bro awwwwwww

and robbie a famous producer 😳😳
noooo.....puru is the producer😆
Okay raunak evil in this FF 2 and step bro of robbies 😡 doesnt deserve to b related 2 hm lmao
LMAO...hummy u r too much😆😆😆
wowww Bani omg she h8s raunak 4 beign bad with robbie awwwwwwwww and kasturis freind 2 that going to be intresting
yea...lol

Right thats an awesome character sketch
with all the loving ppl
and evil ppl
awwee thx😳
lol
Luv
hummy

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