One Shot: Rishabh Bajaj! Fated to be the Devastating God!

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halfbloodprince

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Posted: 5 years ago

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Originally posted by: _Seera_
Will be waiting.. Your Bajaj is so much more ruthless than the one in series.. ☺️

I plan to make him darker and more menacing. The sanskari version will make me diabetic. 😆

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halfbloodprince

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Posted: 5 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: manzilmukul
This is one helluva read
Each word is so crisply written. Just love it !! 🤗

Thank you so much! 🤗

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halfbloodprince

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Posted: 5 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: MR21
Shruti🤗 A solo RB OS
I absolutely love the way you use the words, the starting is so so so good. The comparison of his own spirit to the rain and its effects👍🏼. The person whose life is full of betrayal, pain and the fire for revenge is getting used to a new emotion which is creating havoc in him. The person who loved him is long gone, and the one from whom he expected was forever in the dreamland always worrying about her ex, disappointing him.
I so want Bajaj to say the same dialogues to Prerna once they plan to leave BB. She should know what wrong she did here in BB. She is so used to his patience and care, she would never handle his ignorance, and this would make sure she understand where she went wrong.
The ending with It was time to break free from all promises and wants that shackled him. He was fated to be a devastating God! is EPIC.
I loved reading this one Shruti❤️, Please continue giving us more and more OS

I always look forward to your reviews.

Thank you so much for flattering me. 🤗