One Shot: Rishabh Bajaj! Fated to be the Devastating God! - Page 2

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

Can't continue this one but I may come up with a new one. Let the Muse retreat. 😆

Will be waiting.. Your Bajaj is so much more ruthless than the one in series.. ☺️

This is one helluva read

Each word is so crisply written. Just love it !! 🤗

Shruti🤗 A solo RB OS

I absolutely love the way you use the words, the starting is so so so good. The comparison of his own spirit to the rain and its effects👍🏼. The person whose life is full of betrayal, pain and the fire for revenge is getting used to a new emotion which is creating havoc in him. The person who loved him is long gone, and the one from whom he expected was forever in the dreamland always worrying about her ex, disappointing him.

I so want Bajaj to say the same dialogues to Prerna once they plan to leave BB. She should know what wrong she did here in BB. She is so used to his patience and care, she would never handle his ignorance, and this would make sure she understand where she went wrong.

The ending with It was time to break free from all promises and wants that shackled him. He was fated to be a devastating God! is EPIC.

I loved reading this one Shruti❤️, Please continue giving us more and more OS

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

Please post comments. I get fairly good amount of likes but a very few people comment. :(

^ Don't let me conclude this.

Done

Hahaha...Dhamki😲, aur woh bhi aisa insult ke saath😆, but I always comment ji😎

as always your writing speaks for itself. very nice piece full of angst & darkness. 👏

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

🤣

Let Muse strike with RB's dark moves in the show.

Originally posted by: SapSur

Reserved..My Spot..

Originally posted by: _Seera_

BURN!!!!

Originally posted by: munnihyderabad

Cookie ji 🤗

I am in awe of this deep, fierce, austere , unparalleled Rishab Bajaj, the devastating God, who caged his tender alter self in metallic confine, flaunting his latent disdain towards her .

Brilliant brilliant brilliant .. absolutely loved it ❤️

My fav line : His eyes glowed with a glint of pleasure, and he revelled in the melody of annihilation,with the darkness in his eyes bestowing him with a charm so seductive and damaging that one look could lure unsuspecting victims into devastation.


I think after reading your compelling work, everyone goes speechless and avoid commenting 😆 like me... but since you dhamki .. so here it is ... 🤣

Thank you so much for your encouraging words. ❤️

Dhamki worked.

Originally posted by: MOnamy11

Sare disappointment iss ek os se ek jhatke me khatam hogaya❤️

The intensity of Rishab Bajaj ☺️ I can't wait for RB to meticulously make Prerna see the reality.

Thank you so much!