PreRish One-Shot : ~|Forever|~ (26/8/19) - Page 3

Originally posted by: Zaalima_5

This aas not garbage okay..😈😈 tum writers log ye bolna chod do..😆

The best part was pre ka gussa on bechara Mehra.. i liked the way you wrote veena's part here.. Ye aisa hi kuch bolegi show me bhi..🤣 and Mr.bajaj's jhadofying police and judge part.. Was relatable..😎😆

Yeah I think veena is not going to accept their marriage so easily when her pyaara dulara Anurag beta is here

Yeah I like to write with logic

Fir maza aata hai

Illogical things show karne k liye show hai 😝

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

Oh Kriti this was so good❤️

Kuch logon ka popat hua, amazing 😂

Poor Rishabh, he rushed to help Veena and she rebuked him😔😭😒😒 at least thank you bol deti😒😒

Anyways, good that Prerna simply took him away from the negativity, acting like a true Bajaj😎

And last part, when he realized why she suggested the yellow tie, so they match that was perfect ❤️

Maza aa gaya👏

-Sanu

Yeah I want their popat in show too

Itni jaldi na pighalne wali Prerna ki mata and specially when her pyaara Anurag beta is there for her

Yeah since his accident she's behaving like a Bajaj and hopefully it continues

Thank you....am glad you liked the os 🤗

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

and who wanted to become Mahaan in everyone eyes

Iam mid way and this line ke liye tujhe full marks milenge 😜👏👏👏👏👏

U wrote my line not fair 🤪🤪

Trying to be mahaan 🤣

Veena is lost case

Thank you 🤗

Originally posted by: sparkling_gems

It was really a good read. Veena has really lost it.
She didn't know what she is missing in life while cursing Bajaj. Mr. Bajaj was totally a husband goal. His words that its just not a wife's duty to accept her husband's relation, husband should do the same too, really took my heart.

Prerna has fallen for him head over heal bass ab izhaar baaki hai.

Hope either yeh or Shruti's story turn out to be truth on screen.

She'll realise his worth when Anurag will do something wrong

Thank you...m glad you liked it

Originally posted by: 123g

I was waiting from morning for some OS and now get it..

Masi aur Tanvi ka kachra ho gya... Bdi badi planning..🤣🤣

Mujhe lg hi rha hai veena show mai bhi ese hi react karne wali hai😭

But Mrs. Bajaj ...sab thk kr dengii...

And yellow tie... With yellow sari..matching matching

Totally loved it!♥

-Avni

Thank you

Originally posted by: MR21

This is damn good. Someone's exceptions to become MAHAAN are ruined😆.

Bajaj's entry in the court room is heroic😎. And his point that how come this case came to fast track court without even taking his statement are bang on👏. MT plan failed😛. I liked that you didn't make Veena accept him, something different from all the other OS. But he got Prerna's support, sahaara which I love. Prerna got to know true faces of MT which is good. Prerna in full wife mode scolding Mehra and demanding to bring Doctors to home. And papa and Kukki scene is the best❤️❤️. Prerna thinking about this and accepting this marriage❤️. The ending.

In my pov véena accepting their relationship so soon would be so illogical

Yeah all want VB but it will take time

Thank you for your comment

M glad you liked the OS

Originally posted by: AryanSahil

Bf 🤣🤣💔🤣

U wrote my line not fair 🤪🤪

When you said that line 🙄

Btw waiting for your comment

Why did you label this a kachra? 😆

It's so good. I loved how RB sorted the whole mess in no time and even went to apologize. Veena's thankless conduct irked me. I guess that's what's going to happen in the show. 🤔

Glad to read Prerna finally intervening and taking her husband away from her mother as well as those two schemers. The dialogues in the Prerna-Mehra part were funny. Poor guy got scolded for obeying his stubborn boss who wouldn't budge. 😆

Lastly, Prerna suggesting a yellow tie was so cute.

Bimari mein humein treat de rahi ho tum aur isse kachra bol rahi...Burbak bacchiIss jurm Mei Veena ke saath band krdenge tumhe hum sabhii...🤣

Jokes aside...The dialogues were Bang on dear and they had some real deep meanings hidden inside it❤️...It was lovely treat to read!!!

Main aapko kabhi nhi chodhungi dialogue & that whole scene is something I would like to watch☺️☺️It would be so deep & intense.

The sindoor sceneI hope he was watching her in the exact same way he did in the lift scene in Swiss..

And Mehta baby😆& her banter was amazing....

In short I loved it!!!!