PreRish One-Shot : ~|Forever|~ (26/8/19) - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
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aur kya Os 😡 @everyone isi ke wajah se nahi likhti main 😡 log OS mangte toh hai phir nahi care karte ki kya likha hai 😡
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

aur kya Os 😡 @everyone isi ke wajah se nahi likhti main 😡 log OS mangte toh hai phir nahi care karte ki kya likha hai 😡

Sorry sorry sorry.. achchha link toh do...or tell me the title of your OS

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Posted: 6 years ago
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This is damn good. Someone's exceptions to become MAHAAN are ruined😆.

Bajaj's entry in the court room is heroic😎. And his point that how come this case came to fast track court without even taking his statement are bang on👏. MT plan failed😛. I liked that you didn't make Veena accept him, something different from all the other OS. But he got Prerna's support, sahaara which I love. Prerna got to know true faces of MT which is good. Prerna in full wife mode scolding Mehra and demanding to bring Doctors to home. And papa and Kukki scene is the best❤️❤️. Prerna thinking about this and accepting this marriage❤️. The ending.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

and who wanted to become Mahaan in everyone eyes

Iam mid way and this line ke liye tujhe full marks milenge 😜👏👏👏👏👏

Yeah after watching today's episode ...it seems that he don't have any interest to actually help veena he just wanted to show her that only he can help her

That's how Mahaan came in my mind

And thank you for your full marks 😂

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Na Mr Bajaj ek bache hai aur na aap unke papa jo aap unki sab zid puri karenge

Taubaaaaa🤣🤣🤣

I know I was giggling too while adding this line🤣🤣🤣🤣

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: MR21

This is damn good. Someone's exceptions to become MAHAAN are ruined😆.

Bajaj's entry in the court room is heroic😎. And his point that how come this case came to fast track court without even taking his statement are bang on👏. MT plan failed😛. I liked that you didn't make Veena accept him, something different from all the other OS. But he got Prerna's support, sahaara which I love. Prerna got to know true faces of MT which is good. Prerna in full wife mode scolding Mehra and demanding to bring Doctors to home. And papa and Kukki scene is the best❤️❤️. Prerna thinking about this and accepting this marriage❤️. The ending.

Ramya.. I got notification for this post..dont know why..🤣

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

This is not a garbage. 😡 this is so good SO GOOD I mentioned my favourite parts, also Special mention to Cookie Bajaj scene ♥️🤗 this was so good. Last mein tie ♥️😘 thank you for this story 😘♥️☺️😍🥰💋

When you don't knows what you wrote it becomes garbage ....I finished it in one hour dunno how

I was like continuously typing typing typing

Maine kaha aise toh finish ni hone wala

Flashback end bhi toh karna hoga

I don't want to write mushy mushy scenes but also want to show Prerna feelings but indirectly and then tie came in my mind

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zaalima_5

Ramya.. I got notification for this post..dont know why..🤣

Sasta Nasha effect on IF🤣🤣

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