PreRish FF: The Forbidden Love( 16+)Last Chapter pg90dt.13.3.20 - Page 9

It would be better question was asked before the deed not after.

Feeling bad is agreed, no one can make you do things if you don’t want to.. we don’t fight back thinking that they would get hurt but in the end she will be one who is going to lose lot more things

He would have blackmailed her too to stop all this.

Beautiful writing and the way you described emotions are outstanding

Originally posted by: isha123asya

Omg.. poor rishabh... Shalini will definitely regret this later... I wonder where is prerna. And what will happen next and how the equation will change between rishabh and Shalini as well as rishabh and prerna...

Wonderful read😛

the wife should regret , she pushed him too far

but sometimes even regret is not enough

Originally posted by: Monali5

First thing first you are one amazing writer I don't how you do it ,each time I read your work I end wanting more of it! The way you put across Rishabh's emotional turmoil blows my mind I can feel his pain and confusion at the same time. Secondly the conversation between Rishabh and Shalini had so much impact and the symbolism where he leaves those bangles and the broken wedding photograph was bang on! Tooo good. Lastly I want you to give me an update Asap .Xoxo

Thanks so much for your kind words. I like to get into the mind of the character..it helps the reader to understand what the character is thinking and feeling

These symbolisms have a very deep meaning and you’ll know better as you read further

Just love the whole update dear. thx for the PM .. and i love how you narrated bajaj's life perspective . amazing

waiting to read more .

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

He's so broken. To make such a compromise for a happiness that may or may not actually happen seems so not worth it. Like he said, what if he was unfit to be a father? Then his sacrifice was wasted.

As much as I feel for Shalini, I also feel that she should have realized what she was asking her husband to do. This one act, although may give them the happiness they want, will always be a permanent gap between their relationship. Just like Rishabh, their relationship is also bruised forever.

I love how you wrote about Rishabh's pain and also let him think about Prerna. Whatever happened, happened between two people and I'm glad he was thinking about Prerna too.

Loved it❤️ update soon!

-Sanu

Rishabh believes he has wronged both the women .. it’s really sad that his own wife can’t see how miserable he’s feeling

Thanks so much liking the way emotions have been penned.

Hope you enjoy the next part too

Originally posted by: ShumiM

Your narration about rishab is so wonderful it's reach the reader heart easily and make that cry for him.very eager to how rishab will find a middle path in his self loathing state. Thanks 🙏

I’m glad Rishabh’s angst and despair managed to reach your heart. He’s really feeling horrible..let’s see how he comes out of it

Thanks

That's was an emotional update...Loved it...The more read I read the more I dislike Shalini's character...Wanting a child is one thing but forcing your husband to sacrifice his values and morals is another...She is so blinded by her need to become a mother that she isn't seeing how much she is hurting her husband...She felt offended that he suggested that if she'll sleep with someone else but have no problem forcing him to do the same thing...She should be thankful that she got such a loyal husband and also who didn't abandon her because of lack of an heir...I feel bad for both Prerna and Rishabh...Prerna had been through such terrible things and yet somehow had been strong enough to survive through it...As for Rishabh character you made me fell in love with him...The pain, anger, helplessness & guilt was just perfect...Both Prerna and Bajaj have found a connection between...Let's see much how this will impact Rishabh-Shalini marriage which have already started to crumble...I can't wait to read Prerna POV...Update Soon

Originally posted by: sneha_17

It would be better question was asked before the deed not after.

Feeling bad is agreed, no one can make you do things if you don’t want to.. we don’t fight back thinking that they would get hurt but in the end she will be one who is going to lose lot more things

He would have blackmailed her too to stop all this.

Beautiful writing and the way you described emotions are outstanding

Yeah she emotionally blackmailed him, once even attempted suicide..thus he gave in..but the past cannot be undone..surely in times to come she’ll have to face the consequences.

Thanks for the appreciation

Originally posted by: opsora2090

Just love the whole update dear. thx for the PM .. and i love how you narrated bajaj's life perspective . amazing

waiting to read more .

Delighted to know that you loved the whole update. Thanks for reading and commenting

Originally posted by: ArShiFever.

That's was an emotional update...Loved it...The more read I read the more I dislike Shalini's character...Wanting a child is one thing but forcing your husband to sacrifice his values and morals is another...She is so blinded by her need to become a mother that she isn't seeing how much she is hurting her husband...She felt offended that he suggested that if she'll sleep with someone else but have no problem forcing him to do the same thing...She should be thankful that she got such a loyal husband and also who didn't abandon her because of lack of an heir...I feel bad for both Prerna and Rishabh...Prerna had been through such terrible things and yet somehow had been strong enough to survive through it...As for Rishabh character you made me fell in love with him...The pain, anger, helplessness & guilt was just perfect...Both Prerna and Bajaj have found a connection between...Let's see much how this will impact Rishabh-Shalini marriage which have already started to crumble...I can't wait to read Prerna POV...Update Soon

Rishabh and Prerna are transparent characters..they are what they are without being apologetic but Shalini is twisted..she knows what she wants and how.

Will update soon. Hope you like it.

Thanks