Intoxicated (A PreRish OS) - Page 5

Originally posted by: Tranquility07

That was hawwt, terrific, ecstatic, fiercy and intoxicating;of course, all in one. Reading a drunken Prerna is better than watching a sane Prerna cry like a meek Lamb of sacrificial customs. In her inebriated state, she sounds a lot more sexy and confident than she actually pretends to be. My goodness, the choice of adjectives for Mohini Basu was heartfelt. Special praises for her lips antics, stole my mind. I have been noticing that since long on the serial too and it actually irks. Thank you for bringing out the fiercy girl shedding her too goody boots!

Commendable!

Hehe.. thank you. And yeah, I have nothing against the actor who plays Mohini, but she plays her in a really annoying way. If I found her in a dark alley, I might just stab her.

But thanks for reading it

Originally posted by: lovefk

"Something ugly roars in him then. Something akin to jealousy. The very act of someone calling her by her given name irks him. She's his now and no one else's. Privately they'll fight for hours on petty, meaningless things and matters of grave importance, and he'll call her Prerna in barely restrained exasperation. She'll tickle his ears with the antics of his family and he'll call her Prerna in a half-hearted plea to leave him at peace with his work. She'll do something endearingly mawkish and her name then leaves his mouth like a prayer to let him escape with his heart intact. She'll look at him sometimes, all sympathy and understanding radiant in her eyes and he'll groan out Prerna in need. He is unwilling to share even that bit of her with anyone else. "

I CANT DEAL, this passage is so beyond gorgeous, not even a passage this is a verse, it's bloody poetic I want to cry. It's so weird that I'm not fraught with unease at his direct proclamation of ownership. I don't know if I'm maybe reading too much into it but despite being "his" I can just about make out who she is. Prerna isn't subsumed in just being "his". Its almost like he's made sure that she doesn't lose herself.

I love your RB he has this sardonic wit , definitely adds to his alluring aura. I love the nonchalant-ness(not too sure if that's even a word but lol let me just use it) with which he deals with situations. I am so completely impressed with this Prerna, she's gloating about being Mrs Bajaj shit must have really hit the roof at the party🤣🤣 what a treat to read, the immense relief it gives to see her stand up for herself. Oh dear Anurag the bothersome little Anurag, at least in her drunkenness she has the ability to get away from the pedestal she's put him on. Also Basu and Co give me such anxiety with all the cacophony. (on telly as well)🤣

That little moment in the end I'm melting on the inside. The stolen drunken kisses and moments of desire create this sense of intimacy which is absolutely endearing to read. Also can we have like more Mehra appearances love the dude.🤣

Ps-PLEASE WRITE MORE OS'es now APART FROM YOUR SS!

Thank you so much. I think Rishabh is as much hers as she is his. I'm glad you liked my portrayal of Rishabh and Prerna. I love writing Mr. Mehra too. There's something about as*hole bosses and their long-suffering employees.

Thank you for reading it 😅

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

Oh! This was so gripping and entertaining with lots of hilarity and touches of intimacy. The inebriated Prerna is so much likeable and her insults are damn penetrating. I could visualize her victim's tomato red face. 🤣

RB's possessive side was described brilliantly with the paragraph having the flow of a flawless poetry.

Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. AHH.. this feels like validation.

Originally posted by: komlika

She gave it back to mohini 😎

She is so loves him 😆

Part 2?

Maybe little more torture of Bajaj and morning reaction of prerna 😉

I dunno. I need to update Tender Encounters first. But thanks for dropping a comment. 😁

Originally posted by: rmahi25

Wwohhoooooo!!! This one was such a classy and mind-blowing piece dear.... 👏Totally loved it the way you penned down her exhaustion ❤️And what to say about the Bajaj's part!! It was brilliant...I wish that even the OS's 20% of Prerna is shown on show!! Great work do write more and Do PM me regarding your next work.☺️

Thank you so much. I'll definitely let you know about my next work.

I love this Prena she is aall Mrs Bajaj letting them have a piece of her mind and claiming her married name awesome wicked cute .

This this is just a DREAM come true! Finally an os where Prerna rips apart that bitch! And Mr Bajaj, uff he's just so addicting! His addiction of fighting for Prerna and fighting with Prerna is really something we can see... 😉

This this is just a DREAM come true! Finally an os where Prerna rips apart that bitch! And Mr Bajaj, uff he's just so addicting! His addiction of fighting for Prerna and fighting with Prerna is really something we can see... 😉

Arya🤗

Omg! I loved it. She really gave it to Mohini and how RB treated her, amusement and care.❤️

Should have been longer!

Awesome OS i loved it.