Intoxicated (A PreRish OS) - Page 2

I have melted and now I'm in a puddle. Let me solidify back.

🔥

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti

I think I should just admit that today is my lucky day? I have been grinning since the time I watched the episode and then this OS.

Aww! Of course there’s no need to tag her along but how he’s so attuned to her is so beautiful.

Hah. I so wish we’d get to see this version of Prerna in the show where she’d rip Mohini apart.

OH MY GOSH. That possessiveness. Not being okay with someone addressing her, even by her given first name! I ~might’ve~ read that part a couple of times because I’m a sucker for jealous husbands

Nope Mr Bajaj, your lightweight of a wife won’t let you escape with your heart intact! ♥️

You are too sweet.

As to show version of Prerna giving Mohini the burns, I can only pray. Even I loved the name part. And I'm a sucker for jealous husbands too. But unfortunately in our TV industry, jealousy and insecurity is synonymous.

But thank you for your kind words.

Originally posted by: aryapdane

Why don't you write the part two? I want to know what you think is going to happen after they reach home

Already wrote 3 os in less than 24 hours and now my fingers are paining 😛😣

But adat se majboor still writing another one which one is just a total timepasa

Originally posted by: Sohali19

Aparna!

This was wicked good. I think my favorite part was the one where you describe the different ways in which he says her Prerna. So well written. Now, I want you to write more stories.

Quit classes.

Thank you Sohaa.. that was my fav part to write too. I wish I could. Classes are painful. But my father will disown me if I turn out to be the black sheep of the family.

Originally posted by: Grey-licious

Already wrote 3 os in less than 24 hours and now my fingers are paining 😛😣

But adat se majboor still writing another one which one is just a total timepasa

I envy you. I am such a slow writer 😔

Originally posted by: mitras

Amazing, sexy and all the nice words fir this. This is the prerna we need to see 😊

Thank you so much

This is just amazing. Crisp use of language, adjectives and a whole lot of juxtaposition in the characters of Rishabh and Prerna

I am going to read it again!

Originally posted by: aryapdane

Firstly, thank you for the prompt. I enjoyed writing this. I'm overjoyed really that you liked it. I feel validated for my labours. You're too kind to be true.

Secondly, I don't know how to express how happy I am that you like my version of RB. I'm literally in love with yours. I can only wish to write a dark RB. But all the stories I have in mind is definitely 18+ and I know I'll blotch it up by making him mawkish... Also I don't want to start anything without finishing Tender Encounters. Also, writing Prerna POV is so difficult because an alarm keeps screaming in him head that sounds like "she's behaving out of character".

The name part was my favourite too. Glad you liked it.

I love you too. Now please give me the part two for Thunder and Fire...

HAHA you're far too humble. I'm sure no matter how you choose to write him, you'll paint a brilliant character that will entrance and fascinate us all. OH MY GOD, YOU CANNOT DO THAT! You've got to give me those 18+ scenes now. I DEMAND THEM. PLEAASE.😳 HAHA I understand your predicament with Prerna. I've just about started to say eff you to that and will write the girl I want to write.😆

Haha okay.😆

Amazingly awesome., If that even is a word. Your writing♥️♥️♥️ I wish CVs include this track. It would be a hell of a ride for Mr Bajaj controlling his spitfire😂😂😂

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

This is just amazing. Crisp use of language, adjectives and a whole lot of juxtaposition in the characters of Rishabh and Prerna

I am going to read it again!

Thank you so much 😅