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Posted: 5 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: siarocks007

Amazingly awesome., If that even is a word. Your writing♥️♥️♥️ I wish CVs include this track. It would be a hell of a ride for Mr Bajaj controlling his spitfire😂😂😂

True that.

Thank you for reading it, though

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: aryapdane

You are too sweet.

As to show version of Prerna giving Mohini the burns, I can only pray. Even I loved the name part. And I'm a sucker for jealous husbands too. But unfortunately in our TV industry, jealousy and insecurity is synonymous.

But thank you for your kind words.

But they wouldn’t go beyond showing her as this ideal female lead who will just keep taking all the insults hurled at her and only Bajaj might come to her rescue! Oh just something about that declaration along the lines of “she’s only mine” just makes my heart flutter.

But thank YOU for penning such a beautiful OS and making me wish that the writers would take inspiration (read replicate) from this and portray it in the show as well ♥️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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another great piece of writing from you, loved it.. and your Prerna..

your Prerna really compliment her husband in every sense.. keep her like this in your writings,

Atleast we can enjoy something here, which we desperately want on screens...

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hope we get to see something like this atleast when Mohini Basu tries to mess with Kuki.

Prerna failed to stand up for herself, her mother or sister.

Superb writing, keep writing more

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: 123g

another great piece of writing from you, loved it.. and your Prerna..

your Prerna really compliment her husband in every sense.. keep her like this in your writings,

Atleast we can enjoy something here, which we desperately want on screens...

Thank you so much. It's a small joy, to make do with our own imaginations. But something is better than nothing

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Posted: 5 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: sneha_17

Hope we get to see something like this atleast when Mohini Basu tries to mess with Kuki.

Prerna failed to stand up for herself, her mother or sister.

Superb writing, keep writing more

God, yes!

Thank you so much for reading it

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Posted: 5 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti

But they wouldn’t go beyond showing her as this ideal female lead who will just keep taking all the insults hurled at her and only Bajaj might come to her rescue! Oh just something about that declaration along the lines of “she’s only mine” just makes my heart flutter.

But thank YOU for penning such a beautiful OS and making me wish that the writers would take inspiration (read replicate) from this and portray it in the show as well ♥️

Again, entirely too sweet.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Such a crisp fluid writing 😍

Loved your sassy Prerna so much... What a whiplash Basus received and that felt so much justified.. Wish in the show Prerna can grow some spine and give them back like this way..

And man I just love your RB 😍😍😍 that name part of Prerna and the possessiveness attached to it is just love 😍😍😍 you have woven a magic with words there in that bit...

Also please update tender encounters sooooooo 💞

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Wonderful piece of writing.❤️.. Absolutely loved the drunk prerna and her actions !!!🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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This is so nice. Prerna drunk and showing MB her place in her house😆. And hubby came at the right time to take his wife in his arms. The ending is feels❤️

The way he feels calling her with her name is only his right☺️

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